Date: Aug 12, 2016 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Andy Warhol.
Yeah, the munchers are gone!!!!!
Brian was hoping to get some damn clams, but none was available.
Gus really is a sweet kid.
Finally, Brian knows who the artist is. By the way, these paintings are amazing.
Glad to see the Taylor family meeting with Brian and Gus.
Poor Molly, completely struck by Brian's gorgeousness. Who wouldn't?
Date: Aug 12, 2016 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Andy Warhol.
This chapter makes me smile...
I have a favorite line.. but the chapter as a whole is just good sexy (with some plot) fun!
Date: Aug 11, 2016 4:10 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Scratching Things Is Fun.
This was hilarious; I can't get enough of Lindsey's bashing.
The worst is that she will have to stay on the island for more days. This is not going to be funny at all for the boys.
I loved the "ungraceful dodo bird" and "McStud".
What a scene with McStud, Justin as McTwinkie or McCookie, Brian of course would be both McDreamy and McSteamy. Oh yeah... Self-fan!!!
This one was so accurate: “Oh, Cooooookieeee! I brought take out!” Brian announced as he made his way into the bedroom, dragging his studly midnight snack after him. “Hope you’re hungry.”
Date: Aug 11, 2016 9:31 am Title: Chapter 29 - Scratching Things Is Fun.
I'm so happy about Lindsay (I'm evil lol)
and damn... I need a house call from the Doctor too!!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2016 3:18 am Title: Chapter 29 - Scratching Things Is Fun.
I do love Lindsay bashing and this chapter exceeded my expectations. You had me howling. Then the threesome with the nurse was just the topper to the whole thing. I take it Lindsay and Mel will not be heading to Paris any time soon.
Date: Aug 11, 2016 2:53 am Title: Chapter 29 - Scratching Things Is Fun.
LMFAO!!!! 'LOADS' of fun! Lindsay just keeps getting her comeuppance. See what happens when bitchiness overrules the brain?! I'm not even going to lie....I'm going to re-read the chapter again!
As for the McStud threesome...OH YEAH!!!!! That scene was HOTNESS personified. Shucks, I'm headed down to Long Island this weekend but this makes me want to take a ferry over to catch a little 'Fire' of my own! DAMN!
Looking forward to MORE, Ladies!
WRITE On, Babes!
~Chelle
Author's Response:
Just be careful not to cross any Bears in the Meat Rack if you go for a midnight stroll! LOL TAG
Date: Aug 11, 2016 2:38 am Title: Chapter 24 - Pocketful of Sunshine.
This story is hilarious. Cookie is just what Brian needed in order to let his hair down and have some fun. I have one question: when are you guys going to give Brian his fried clams?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliment! But no clams for Brian any time soon. LOL
Saje
[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2016 1:13 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The Penis Song.
That was no battle. The winner was obvious. Hope Lindsay doesn't do something she'll regret. Can you imagine the videos posted that night!
Author's Response:
Yeah, it WAS more of a smackdown. Lindz will be Lindz and of course we can imagine the video. The real question is, How will the homefront react?
Saje
Date: Aug 09, 2016 4:31 am Title: Chapter 28 - The Penis Song.
Outrageously phenomenal chapter! Can't wait to see you top this one!
Author's Response:
Thank You. We always do our best to 'TOP' everything that comes our way. LOL
Saje
Date: Aug 08, 2016 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The Penis Song.
Wonderful chapter.
Write fast. I need more.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Thank you, and we really are trying.
Saje
Date: Aug 08, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 27 - She Only Bitches When She Breathes
Loved the silent f**king. Perfect.
Great chapter.
I smile everytime one of them 'gets' Lindsay.
~Lorie
Date: Aug 08, 2016 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 27 - She Only Bitches When She Breathes
The shaving scene is a master piece of cuteness.
Lindsey is a bitch to HER son and to Brian, not to mention Justin.
The drawing of the shaving scene is amazing.
Gus and Justin are so adorable as soon as they are together.
Gus' speaking (Lookit, Whatta ‘bout, hafta, ‘sprise, ...) is so entertaining.
Some more sandy innuendo (That sand is dangerous in more than one way, ya know).
The bitches are back for dinner: serving wine to themselves; Lindsey trying to crash Brian and Justin to finally being clashed by both.
Gus is too funny with the way he explained all what Justin told him (looking good from head to (painted) toe and how to cook)
Date: Aug 08, 2016 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 26 - When I Grow Up To Be A Man.
I love the boys on the beach.
Great feelings with the starfish and shells.
Happy tears
~Lorie
Date: Aug 08, 2016 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The Penis Song.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaamaziiiiiing!!! It's a chapter to re-member.
I saw the list on Google Doc and it's really fabulous how many words you used and how you used them. Congratulations!!!!!
Poor Lindsey: she was knocked out and it will be on the net like forever. So glad Mel found it funny too and didn't go after her.
So happy that Brian went with the flow and got all goofy.
Her return to the Pitts and the family may be a little rocky and so deserved.
‘Fuck You’ by Lily Allen was THE song to match the end of the fight (for now).
Author's Response:
Thank You for all the compliments.
I have been singing that song in my head for over a week now! LOL
Saje
Date: Aug 08, 2016 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The Penis Song.
OMFGGGGGGGG!!!!! I'm sitting at work LAUGHING like a FOOL!! I LOVE Justin! Like seriously, love him! Lindsay was asking for it and he delivered it in SPADES!! Wait until all of the "Earth Mother's Little Children" back on Liberty Avenue see that video! <Singing> Nowhere to Run to Baby; there's nowhere to HIDE!! LMAO!
WRITE On Gals,
~Chelle
P.S. So HAPPY that Mel stayed and let Lindsay have her tantrum by herself. Perhaps there's hope for HER yet!
Author's Response:
Oops - hope you don't get into trouble at work for laughing insanely. We DID try to warn you. TAG
Date: Aug 08, 2016 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The Penis Song.
How do I love thee (cock...) let me count the ways.... hell I lost count, but loved every word of it!!!!
Author's Response:
Does a cock by any other name smell as . . . well, you get my drift. LOL
Saje
Date: Aug 08, 2016 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The Penis Song.
that was most excellent. Battle of the blonds was mose definitely a win in justin's favour. Am now wondering if there will be further enjoyment once theyget home.
Shame mel adn Lindsey have become such uptight bitches. They could've very well enjoyed their time on the island instead of looking down their noses. mind you, Mel seemed to have enjoyed it a little bit. she'll probably have to pay the piper when they get back to the house.
I agree though...it will definitely be calmer when they finally leave.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Hopefully all the drama will leave when the girls do. Stinky girls and their cooties. *pout*
Saje
Date: Aug 08, 2016 3:46 am Title: Chapter 25 - Banana Pancakes.
I love the way Justin told off Lindsay.
They are so good with Gus.
~Lorie
Date: Aug 08, 2016 3:02 am Title: Chapter 24 - Pocketful of Sunshine.
That was fucking hysterical. Lindsay is such a bitch. I guess they don't like Brian's Cookie very much.
~Lorie
Date: Aug 08, 2016 2:22 am Title: Chapter 23 - The Man That Got Away!
Loved this chapter. Great story.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2016 12:30 am Title: Chapter 27 - She Only Bitches When She Breathes
Hahaha. Lindsay going to let Justin know the score? That's so not going to work. Gus is having a great time and their toes look so nice. Who knew Gus could cook?
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 27 - She Only Bitches When She Breathes
I just realised how much Lindsey reminds me of Michael in this story, especially this chapter. I can't stand the way she talks to Brian, and he takes it. Well, not anymore - hopefully. I think before, he used to take all her shit about what sort of father he was because he believed it. I truly think he thinks... or at least thought he was a shitty father. But that this trip has taught him otherwise. He realises it's actually not that hard to be the perfect daddy to Gus, and Justin has helped him with that.
I love the interaction between Justin and Gus, it's too stinking cute, and I love how it rubs Linds up the wrong way *cackles*
Their bathroom scene at the end was so effing hot, omg. I bet Justin was a little sore after that pounding :D
Author's Response:
Yay! You're our 200th reviewer! *happy dancing all around the computer* As your reward, you get to name your favorite sex position for the next chapter - Just tell us what you want to see and we'll do our best to make it happen! Thanks for all your wonderful reviews! S&T
Date: Aug 07, 2016 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Fever.
Great work.
~Lorie
Date: Aug 07, 2016 9:08 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Ace In The Hole.
That was fucking HOT.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 26 - When I Grow Up To Be A Man.
The sandcastle with pics was a great addition. I hope Lindsay didn't show up during their shower scene. Can you imagine her calling Michael to complain.