Date: Aug 18, 2016 2:00 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Beautiful Boy.
Not sure if I left my review, but I absolutely love this chapter! Gus is too adorable and It so beautiful to see how much Brian loves his son.
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2016 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 34 - My Father's Eyes.
Awww. This was the best Father's Day for all concerned.
Date: Aug 18, 2016 10:33 am Title: Chapter 34 - My Father's Eyes.
I love all the introspection we are getting...
Jennifer's thoughts might be my favorite. She knows Justin will fight the feelings he doesn't want to have.. but he needs to just go with it!!! :)
Date: Aug 18, 2016 5:46 am Title: Chapter 34 - My Father's Eyes.
Too much plot!!! I miss the good old days when all the boys would do was fuck all day every day :(
Still a good story, though. love yo Tagsit and Sage!!!!
Author's Response:
Me too! I'm ready to get back to that. Neverfear - Gus won't be visiting for much longer. Just hold on a little longer! TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2016 2:16 am Title: Chapter 31 - Turn Me On.
Justin has totally stolen Mary Poppins bag, hasn't he? I look forward to seeing what else he pulls out of there :)
Gus adores Justin so much and it's so freaking cute how they've taken to each other so well. I worry for Gus though, who already thinks his Daddy and his Jutsin are a couple :(
OH and Gus and his little lisp kills me every time.
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2016 1:15 am Title: Chapter 30 - Andy Warhol.
There was so much I loved about this chapter. Firstly, ha, bye bye munchers ;) Secondly, it was great to meet Mother Taylor and Molly. I LOVE when they are included in a story. There is something about their relationship that I just adore. Gus is totally going to love "playing" with Molly and collecting sheshells with her. And Justin giving the cheque to his mom *melts*
AND then the final scene argh. There is just so much I could go on about, but my favourite part of this was their position AND how Brian covered Justin's mouth, that was so so so hot. And the biting was a great little addition there, I could totally see it - Brian's comment after that was PERFECTION.
Author's Response:
You have no idea how many revisions it took to get that last line right . . . LOL! Glad you liked it. TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2016 1:08 am Title: Chapter 33 - Beautiful Boy.
I cried when Gus had his talk with the fairy. What a lovely, lovely thing to do. And when Brian confessed that the tooth fairy never visited his house. As a group your scenes meld so well together that you wouldn't know so many talented writers wrote them. I wish Gus could stay with them forever.
Date: Aug 16, 2016 12:46 am Title: Chapter 33 - Beautiful Boy.
Such a special chapter equipped with humor, a touch of angst and loads of heart! I can't even pick a favorite part but every single word written was MAGIC!
Great Job Babes!
~Chelle
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2016 12:29 am Title: Chapter 29 - Scratching Things Is Fun.
Holy shit, that doctor is HOT. Why aren't mine ever that attractive?
I am loving what is happening to Lindsey in this story, I couldn't stop laughing when she ran into the "bear" and then got herself arrested and then she goes and gets an awful rash... hahaha, perfect :)
Loved the threesome too, mmm :)
Date: Aug 16, 2016 12:09 am Title: Chapter 28 - The Penis Song.
LMAO I am picturing Justin up there so clearly. The Penis song was excellent - I bet that got ridiculous amounts of hits on Youtube :p But omg, Lindsey is a fucking bitch and deserved to be shown up like that. I kinda like that Mel didn't run after her ;)
Date: Aug 15, 2016 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Beautiful Boy.
OMG. I'm sitting here crying like a baby. That was so sweet and loving. Beautiful chapter.
~Lorie
Date: Aug 15, 2016 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Beautiful Boy.
Very beautiful chapter: the end is so emotional from all boys' POV. One more line and I was crying.
Gus, because he wants his father to get the beautiful envelop even if that means he doesn't get the money from the fairy.
Justin, because he called a friend to come and play the fairy for Gus (and to record the whole scene) and because he sees the "true" Brian.
Brian, because he lets himself be "raw" in front of Justin, showing that he, indeed, is a good father (the list of "firsts" he missed was hard to read), that he cares more than everybody would think he can.
There was also some fun; I love the "a sea of estrogen": poor Brian, after the ocean full of whale's sperm, he had to deal with something that is completely out of his comfort zone.
Well done to all of the talented writers and thank you for the entertainment.
Date: Aug 15, 2016 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Beautiful Boy.
I like that Justin even slipped when he called Marissa and said come to my house (I mean Brian's). lol
The ending of this chapter just gives me such feels!
Date: Aug 15, 2016 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Alone At Last.
I love bottom Brian so much... never too much of that!!!!
Author's Response:
Agreed! Especially sweet, tender, needy Bottom!Brian! Tehehehe. TAG
Date: Aug 15, 2016 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Alone At Last.
So hot! Love when Brian bottoms! So will they be having 'that talk' about what their relationship really is anytime soon?
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2016 12:42 am Title: Chapter 32 - Alone At Last.
Gus gets the best of both world, a day with daddy and a night with his new girl friend. Brian is the one who won. Justin came out on top. The only thing missing are those clams that Brian never got.
Author's Response:
Gus IS the best of both worlds. And Brian won't be getting the clams any time soon.
Saje
Date: Aug 14, 2016 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 31 - Turn Me On.
Touching chapter from beginning to end!! I LOVED the sweetly domestic scene of beach fun! QB, PG and QJ are definitely Master Sandcastle Builders. I couldn't help but smile and laugh through all of it. From the quiet introspections to the interactions between each of the characters, I think that all three of them are building something mighty special and indestructable no matter who the 'Naysayers' are!
The last scene with B&J stole my heart. I have really come to treasure those unguarded moments between them; the ones where even they are surprised by their own thoughts and behaviors. Yet it all seems natural in their dynamic. I always think that it's true that relationships take work, but it shouldn't be hard work full of angst and anger. YES, you all need to work on Jaded Justin but I think as long as Brian can show him how amazing the possibilities can be, he'll come around and get him on the same page of 'Together.'
Great Job Babes, Keep it UP!!
~Chelle
Date: Aug 14, 2016 11:36 am Title: Chapter 31 - Turn Me On.
I love the final paragraph... Justin better get on board with this... NOW LOL
Date: Aug 14, 2016 10:22 am Title: Chapter 31 - Turn Me On.
Another delicious chapter!
I loved:
Gus vigorously nodded his agreement. “Yeah, Daddy. An’ we both like Coke.” (I guess for Brian it would be cock)
Your daddy and Mr. Dick already had a contest. Your daddy proved that he’s the bigger man
Date: Aug 14, 2016 4:17 am Title: Chapter 31 - Turn Me On.
Loved this chapter.
The beach scene was so sweet and domestic.
The shower, erotic, and the bed scene was sweet and loving.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2016 3:47 am Title: Chapter 31 - Turn Me On.
Gus had a great day playing in the sand with Cookie and his dad the Queen. It's a good thing he's so tired out. Hope that Justin is okay with what Brian said before falling asleep.
Date: Aug 13, 2016 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Andy Warhol.
Finally all caught up!.....I will save my lengthy comments for the next chapter lol
Date: Aug 13, 2016 5:22 am Title: Chapter 30 - Andy Warhol.
LOVED this new dimension to the story! I have a feeling that now Brian knows about Justin's artwork and has met his family, they can really get know each other. Gus was just too adorable and Norah too manipulative in the BEST of ways- so opposite from Lindsay's scheming and refreshing. Also was happy to know that Jennifer, Justin and Molly are so close. I was kinda concerned that Justin's legendary exploits had reached Jennifer's ears and had caused trouble between the two of them.
Looking forward to MORE!
~Chelle
Date: Aug 12, 2016 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Andy Warhol.
I am hoping that Brian will eventually get some fried clams. Great chapter girls.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Maybe . . . eventually . . . LOL! (We can't give him his clams too easily though, it's far more fun to torture him!) TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2016 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Andy Warhol.
At last the girls are gone. Somehow I don't think Mel will be enjoying Paris as much as she would if Lindsay wasn't with her. Gus has a new friend, which should make things easier for Brian and Cookie.