Date: Aug 27, 2016 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 38 - The Lizard Life
Can I beat Lindsay with any available object? There is no excuse for her to talk that way around Gus, she should know better.
Author's Response:
Yes. Please do. And I just happen to have this dildo sitting here handy - you can us that! Lol. TAG
Date: Aug 27, 2016 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 37 - Little Dragon Sunshine.
It's always nice to read about activities they are doing with Gus; I guess painting is so messy that everyone enjoyed doing it.
Gus is adorable when he talks about his father and his Cookie.
I feared a big clash when Brian stepped up with Mr Meisner.
Jennifer will have some quality time for herself and also with Gus/Molly.
The trip to the Meat Rack was hilarious: I could hear the screaming queens in the bushes.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:57 am Title: Chapter 37 - Little Dragon Sunshine.
Loved every bit of this chapter! â¤ï¸ Gus as a Humboldt Squid? All i can say is EUREKA! 😊 Made me feel right at home.
At last! Justin learns about Kinnetik. LOL over all the ongoing competitive banter between Brian and Justin.
*hehehe* Loved the boys first foray into the Meat Rack. Another addition to island lore.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:08 am Title: Chapter 36 - Sometimes When We Touch.
Loving all the cheese! I think that song is my lullabye for tonight. 😉
Date: Aug 26, 2016 1:12 am Title: Chapter 37 - Little Dragon Sunshine.
What a wonderful idea. Lizard, Iguana and squid. Justin is so talented. I'm wondering who in Pittsburgh will see this little adventure on the news and contact Brian? Nice of them to visit the petting zoo, but petting a snake? Jen should have known that Brian wouldn't be taking back his gift. However Brian and Justin did get a free night to visit the Meat Rack.
Date: Aug 25, 2016 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 37 - Little Dragon Sunshine.
Absolutely LOVED this chapter! Brian, Justin and Gus are simply adorable in their interactions! Gus' interview was just the 'BESTEST' and will be sure to burn Lindsay's ass when she catches wind of it which she undoubtedly will. 'My daddies...My Dad...MY Cookie..." Someone please hand the bitch some Preparation H for hemmorrhoidal flare up those three innocently-given sentences are going to cause, not to mention the fact that Brian is painted as a lizard and loving it. Her jealousy of Justin's talent is also about to escalate. HA! I'll bet she'll believe that Justin could have actually been admitted to all top notch Art schools at the same time while she was relegated to playing with finger paints...Take that bitch! Hmmm.... I do believe that Eyewitness News (ABC- Channel 7 in New York) has sister stations all over the country including Pennsylvania and if they don't forward the footage, then there is always reliable YOUTube to fuel the drama! HA!!
Speaking of D-R-A-M-A, genius way to mix it inside the fun stuff during the scene at the Reptile Park. Although I agree with Justin to an extent about Brian overstepping, I also agree that with talent like Justin's someone should have. Hopefully Justin will see that what Brian really did was give Justin the protection of his name- or rather his company's name- which is what any other public relations manager OR agent would have done so that Justin can't be bullied like the owner of the Albie did. Either way, I'm glad that they got back on happy footing sooner rather than later unlike the whole hand-holding incident!!
Which brings me to the last scene: I had the same exact reaction that Brian did when Justin mentioned dragon/alien porn!! I can't deny a sordid morbid fascination with it myself at times. Just the idea of it is creepy and yet horribly alluring in a very perverse way, LOL I truly would have loved to be a grasshopper in 'them tha' woods' to laugh my ass off at hearing the screams of terror replaced by the moans of gratification. Seriously, Brian and Justin's sense of adventure, humor and sex drives go together as well as Peanut Butter and Jelly! Wait until everyone else begins to figure THAT out! Can we all say exploding heads? Ohhhh I CAN'T WAIT!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Aug 22, 2016 9:21 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Sometimes When We Touch.
Okay i'll admit it, the first thing I did was sing the first strains of the song as soon as I saw the chapter title....and now it won’t leave my head lol.
I really can't wait to see how Lindsay handles her brand new Gus. The fallout will be epic.
Date: Aug 22, 2016 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 35 - I'm Going Fishin!
Oh wow....I guess the boys didn't catch Gus' decree of his daddies plural. Or maybe that’s coming in the next installment? Either way I can’t wait!
Date: Aug 22, 2016 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Sometimes When We Touch.
Great chapter and I love the song.
~Lorie
Date: Aug 22, 2016 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 35 - I'm Going Fishin!
I can just imagine Jack punishing Brian somehow while they were on vacation, and frightening the poor kid. The bastard probably through him in or something :(
The fishing boat called The Little Mermaid was owned by ERIC, I lol'd so loud, well done for that!!!
I adore how proud Gus is of his daddy, and I also LOVE the addition of daddies at the end of his song. I wonder if they both picked up on that?
And mmmm Justin topping like that when Brian was all sleepy and relaxed, that was so yummy :)
Date: Aug 22, 2016 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 34 - My Father's Eyes.
Bathroom sex, especially bathroom MIRROR sex is so hot. There is something about them doing it while seeing each other's reactions and facial expressions in the mirror that is just so sexy.
The image of Brian and Gus baking (and burning) cookies is so adorable, the thought of the mess is enough to even stress me out though LOL.
Justin celebrating his mom on Father's Day was such a wonderful idea. There are so many single mommies out there (mine included) that deserve to be celebrated more than once :p
I said this before, but I worry that Brian is falling far quicker than Justin. I don't want our boy to get his heart broken. Justin feels it too I think, and when he thinks something is, say - too coupley, that's just his overactive mind panicking. But HE WANTS IT - or at least he wants Brian.
Date: Aug 22, 2016 2:08 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Sometimes When We Touch.
I want the recipe of the deep dish pizza. Poor Justin. Brian did do all the right things though. Feed the beast, then take him to bed.
Date: Aug 22, 2016 1:45 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Sometimes When We Touch.
I can't stand y'all! Now I'm going to be singing THAT damn song in my head the entire day!! LOL However, I will take the pain of the song on mental repeat if I get more of this amazing work.
Honest, open, sweet and sultry, this is definitely a chapter worth re-reading!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Aug 22, 2016 11:02 am Title: Chapter 36 - Sometimes When We Touch.
That day with father/son connection is so important for their relationship. It will allow them to spend some quality time once back in the Pitts, maybe without Justin to help.
The arrival of Justin completely off and the fact that Brian set the table just for him was to die for. It could be seen as out of character from an external point of view, but after weeks of cohabitation, it so made sense.
As for the end, it seemed so natural that we don't see how they will be able to part.
Date: Aug 22, 2016 10:41 am Title: Chapter 36 - Sometimes When We Touch.
I totally love this story!!!
Date: Aug 22, 2016 6:23 am Title: Chapter 36 - Sometimes When We Touch.
Great chapter and thanks for the earworm. I'll be singing that in my head all night.
Date: Aug 22, 2016 6:20 am Title: Chapter 36 - Sometimes When We Touch.
I will admit to being the cheese ball that picked the song for this chapter. So sorry....not!
I am passing the earworm on, LOL.
Saje
Date: Aug 21, 2016 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 35 - I'm Going Fishin!
The time the boys spend together just makes me smile... Brian is usually apprehensive about the activity, but he should know by now he ends up happy with all of the adventures!
Date: Aug 21, 2016 2:54 pm Title: Chapter 35 - I'm Going Fishin!
Even though Hemingway is one of my favorite writers & The Old Man In The Sea, one of my fav books, there's nothing like Brian Kinney doing his thing on the ocean!
Sweet story with Gus...I'm going to miss him when he has to go back to the bitches...um I mean the munchers...um I mean his mommies.
That intimate bedroom scene...wow...sultry to say the least! They are truly fucked...and in a positive life affirming way!
Date: Aug 21, 2016 2:51 pm Title: Chapter 35 - I'm Going Fishin!
Brian and Gus fishing. Who would have thought! Brian got the biggest fish, but Cookie knows how to cook it Love Gus' song. His Daddies? I'm sure if Gus has his way Cookie will be a member of the family.
Date: Aug 21, 2016 9:14 am Title: Chapter 35 - I'm Going Fishin!
Interesting and playful fishing trip. It's nice to see that Gus is not disgusted by all the fishy things. He's making lots of memories and some more "I'm proud of my Daddy" stuff.
This day was good for both of them.
I would like to know what happened with Jake so Brian is not founded of the ocean.
The nap of the boys was a new step in their building relationship.
Date: Aug 21, 2016 4:12 am Title: Chapter 35 - I'm Going Fishin!
Great chapter. Funny and sweet.
~Lorie
Date: Aug 19, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 33 - Beautiful Boy.
This chapter made me feel so many things, oh my gosh. The scene at the park made my ovaries explode - especially the part where Brian was putting sugar into Gus's mouth. And then later, he talked about how he got to see this first and they couldn't take that away from him... and I went from feeling so happy and in love with Brian, to suddenly being so mad at the munchers for depriving him of this stuff. Fucking Linds.
The tooth fairy thing, oh man. Justin was such a babe for thinking about that - and listening to Brian talk about how the tooth fairy never visited him, that was so sad. And you get that he is now totally over it, he's an adult - but that stuff sticks, you know?
They're becoming such a strong little family unit and I feel someone is going to get hurt.
Date: Aug 18, 2016 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Alone At Last.
Gus is legit too damn cute in this. He just wants to spend all of his time with Brian and Justin. I loved how he was gutted that Justin had to work and cried about it, that little boy is such a sweet, sensitive soul.
And bringing Molly and Jennifer into this chapter was great. Gus having a sleepover was not only handy for the boys, but also adorable. It's like they're becoming a family *sobs* ;)
Brian wanting Justin to fuck him was so hot, and I do laugh that he can't and won't outright ask him. He has to play silly - and Justin knows what he's up to lol
Date: Aug 18, 2016 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 34 - My Father's Eyes.
Like Jennifer, I hope that neither of our boys tries to turn tail and run away too quickly.