Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Control.

The dynamic is changing between the stud and his Cookie; it's becoming risky as Justin is over thinking some of Brian's reactions. I hope the visit from the Kinnetik team will give them some reprieve before THE discussion that will become mandatory soon enough.

I just hope Mickey won't be there, otherwise, we might have some fireworks.

Poor Brian, he almost had the clams; Stupido was hiding and plotting, without full success.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 3:22 am Title: Chapter 42 - Control.

I loved Ethan and his diabolical plan... (Insert sarcasm here) I think Gus could have thought of a better plan lol

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2016 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 41 - Sexy Drag Queen.

This is one more genius idea!

The painting on Brian is fabulous and so accurate to his personality: gay, daring and unapologetic.

The fact that he agreed to do this, shows once more that he lets his true self show quite easily when he is out of his family. I just hope that he won't lose all these progresses when he will be back to the Pitts.

And to add some more proud to this, he signed a contract impacting Justin's presence in Kinnetic...

Way to go Stud!!!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2016 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 41 - Sexy Drag Queen.

OMFG!!!! This had me HOLLERING! I couldn't stop laughing especially with the imtroduction of Ivan into the mix. I'm glad that Brian got the account and that Justin's talent will be protected from avaricious folks hellbent on controlling all things Justin produces! I'm sure that Brian will be more than generous when working out the particulars of Justin's services...plus I'm sure the- ahhh- fringe benefits will definitely be a HUGE plus. Adam and StEve make a great team both in business and pleasure! 

Looking forward to MORE! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Chelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2016 1:01 pm Title: Chapter 41 - Sexy Drag Queen.

An absolutely amazing chapter.  Do you have someone trolling the web to find those outstanding pictures?  Pictures that more then tell the story for us.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 9:45 pm Title: Chapter 40 - What, What In The Butt.

Brian is feeling the loss of his son and Justin has to work overtime: too many hours alone, too few occupations. So hard to be alone. Who would have thought that it could happen.

The ass hunt was hilarious: where do you find these ideas? Too bad it ended because of Brian's jealousy. Maybe not in fact: the last scene was quite hot and sensual. The brush as "torture device" was very clever. Ticklish the Stud? It seems so.

I love how you let their connection evolve to a dangerous level for both of them (for their comfort zone).

Great chapter: thank you to all writers and helpers!

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the story, Sno! I got the idea for the too-small t-shirt and Brian getting jealous from SandiD. The chart for the Ass Hunt game was sent to me by another reader, Frankie. I LOVE getting all these great ideas from my readers. More please! Thanks for reading and ALL your wonderful reviews! TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 39 - Crazy Bitch.

Brian is not fair when he wakes Justin up.

The morning delight was sweet to begin and ended highly hot. Fortunately, they were done/undone when Gus came in. So funny how he was more diligent to get to the beach than to comment how he found them. 

I love how Jennifer clashed Lindsey about Gus, Brian and Justin. I find Melanie very reserved while her wife is trashing quite everybody.

The scene at the gallery: what a horrible person Lindsey can be! If only she knew who the artist was, she would lose her mind.

And then, she discovered that Justin was the only valuable thing on the devil island. Too funny... She lost her words.

I'm surprised Gus didn't fight more to stay with his father.

The gummy bears are a beautiful reminder for Lindsey about her trip to Fire Island. She will spend some "quality time" on her toilets thinking about that.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 1:43 pm Title: Chapter 39 - Crazy Bitch.

So happy Jennifer put Lindsay in her place and how funny that Lindsay gushed over Justin's art before she knew it was him... how would she take that back??? lol

 

and shame on Mel for not standing up against Linds being such a bitch... crazy bitch was SUCH an appropriate chapter title!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 38 - The Lizard Life

so glad Spike gave Lindsay the welcome she deserved!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 11:57 am Title: Chapter 28 - The Penis Song.

This is a perfect piece of writing and you should be very proud! The scene jumps off the page and Justin comes to life with a moment you truly feel part of.  The examples are great, varied, funny and well timed. Nicely done!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 4:51 am Title: Chapter 39 - Crazy Bitch.

I'm going to miss Gus and I'm sure that Brian will to.  Love how Jennifer lit into Lindsay.  I'm pretty sure that if Lindsay hadn't left the spa, they would have kicked her out.  I know Norah wanted to.  Nothing is going Lindsay way and I say hurray!  The artist she like is Justin who in no way shape or form would ever let her show his artwork.  I feel sorry for Melanie.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2016 3:10 pm Title: Chapter 38 - The Lizard Life

LMAO!!! LMFAO!!!!! Serves the uppity bitch RIGHT! The absolute NERVE of her to make mandates and pronouncements on what Brian will do; to threaten the person who is basically financially supplementing her household even though Mel probably makes a good living. Biting the Hand that Feeds you Much, Lindsay? Ooooh I can't wait to watch her Her Haugtiness suffer even more! And strangely, I'm glad that Brian didn't argue with her realizing that his actions will speak louder to the harridan. Even Mel was extraordinarily pleasant and she and Brian were fun to watch during their brief interaction. I can't wait until Lindsay REALLY gets a good look at Justin's artwork so that she can really see how she pales in comparison. 

Don't worry the angst and HUMOR (I'm still chuckling about Lindsay's discovery of Spike) more than made up for the lack of smut this chapter!! I so LOVE when a bitch gets her comeuppance!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Chelle