Date: Sep 21, 2016 1:46 am Title: Chapter 48 - Edge of Glory.
LOVED this chapter!! Actually the Pines party chapters in general! It was certainly a process to get to the culmination of the actual Launch Party but an effort well-done! The pics you all found were amazing. I am an extreme fan of SKIN WARS which is on every Wed on GSN so this really did take my breath away!
Now for the plot which is at the heart of all of this: I really admired the way that Brian is taking care of Justin's business, even at the risk of all he wants. If I was Justin, I would have been stunned speechless too! The fact that Brian sees Justin's worth as an artist is so heartfelt and honest, that it really is a beautiful story to watch unfold.
As for Justin, I have to question: Is getting his dream while awake making him have second thoughts? I certainly can understand his anxiety in going from obscurity to the night's 'main event' within the blink of an eye. I think we would all have that kind of 'suspension of disbelief' moment at one point in our lives or another, where it all seems a little too real and too much to process in the grand scheme of a moment. It's a lot of pressure but I really want my Cocky Cookie to understand that he is deserving of all those magical moments he's having. Brian may have brought them there through his contacts with and for Kinnetik but Justin's talent has staying power and grant him longevity in a pretty fickle industry.
Can't wait for more of this!! I really LOVE this fic! Thanks Babes!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2016 1:28 am Title: Chapter 48 - Edge of Glory.
Okay with all the offers coming in how does that effect their deal. Will Justin end up in Pittsburgh or Hollywood. Love all the pics, they really enhance the story, not that they were needed to make it any better
Date: Sep 16, 2016 6:50 am Title: Chapter 47 - Born To Be Somebody.
What an emotional chapter!!! Brian knows that Justin is pushing him away and will try to fight it.
The scene in the hotel room was gut wrenching: Brian's baring his feelings while Justin was so out. I so hope the message will go through him and lift any barrier that could remain.
The paintings are AMAZING (in this chapter and the previous one)!
I hope Craig will see what Justin has done and will know what will follow: his son is talented and worth recognition.
Jennifer and Tucker are up for a hot hot night: I hope she will be as wild as her son and will finally have some happiness and fun.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: Sep 15, 2016 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 47 - Born To Be Somebody.
So touching between Brian & Justin...so intense...so meaningful...just give in Cookie!
Justin Taylor Enterprises is about to take off!!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2016 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 47 - Born To Be Somebody.
Everything is going great so for. I'm glad to see Brian showing how he really feels even if Justin is trying to deny his own feelings. Can't imagine how you will top this, but I know that you will.
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2016 12:11 am Title: Chapter 46 - Jealous Lover.
An interesting game. I'm sorry to see that Justin isn't as enamered with Brian as Brian is with his Cookie.
Author's Response:
Never fear -= we'll get them both there in the end . . . Thanks for reading. TAG
Date: Sep 13, 2016 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Jealous Lover.
LOL!!!! I LOVED my prize!!! Thank you so much! I couldn't help but laugh during the entire scene. The only mar in the milk was milksop aka Ethan. My oh MY when will that boy get a clue and go sit his ass down somewhere. Perhaps Justin should pull a 'Brian' to deal with the fool since nothing else he is doing is working. I think getting away from Fire Island is just what the doctor ordered for Justin and should give his stalker something else to focus on.
Speaking of leaving FI.... I can understand Justin's reluctance to tie himself to a person at that stage in his life. Yes, he's a young stud who has a lot to do and see before he could feel assured of his place in the world. However, I do think that instead of jumping to conclusions on the expectation train, he should just ask. Oh I know he's not ready to do that nor is Brian ready to disclose all but if he doesn't he will never be able to make an informed decision and the opportunity to find something truly special and unique would have passed him by. Just my thoughts on that!
As for the very first scene, to body paintings were absolutely amazing! The amount of detail that must have gone into it in RL is absolutely astounding. Therefore I am so happy that you are attributing this gift to Cookie. It's a wonderful gift for an amazing character! He should win a CLIO! I look forward to the Pines opening and watching how all of the work Kinnetik gets rewarded. Are they going to have commercials and perhaps an artist's interview? Is it wrong for me to still want Michael and Lindsay to piss bricks and buckets at this point? I know I'm evil but I really want both of them to eat their words sooner rather than later.
WRITE On, Gals!
~Chelle
Date: Sep 13, 2016 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Jealous Lover.
I hope Justin gets his head out of his ass soon... and just give in to the feelings he has.. or at least let Brian know his reservations about a "relationship"
Date: Sep 13, 2016 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Jealous Lover.
Funny chapter!
I loved "May the FIERCE be with you!"; where is Yoda? Emmett is so right about what he tells Brian, who doesn't need lots of encouragement to move forward with Justin.
As for Ethan with the ass in the air, it's hilarious. What a dumb guy.
Justin has a hamster in his head that has too much energy. Sure, it's not an easy situation for him, but either he wants to get out and Brian is the right person to go with, or he stays and waits until he has enough money or fame to get out.
Date: Sep 13, 2016 1:38 am Title: Chapter 45 - Sunshine Coming Down.
WOW... pretty much just wow... that was so beautifully written and Brian's actions at the beach were almost painful to read. I love me some Bottom Brian, but this was just sad to me... it wasn't about anything except proving a point to Mikey (who is a MAJOR ASSHOLE)
Glad it changed emotions by the end... now Justin just needs to accept his (and Brian's) feelings
Date: Sep 12, 2016 12:54 am Title: Chapter 45 - Sunshine Coming Down.
Wow! Mickey needs to go, I'm telling ya!
Abolutely love how Emmett is so proud & touched by Brian's 'realization', if you will.
"Not like this Brian, you made your point and now he's gone. Come back to me" "I'm right here Brian, don't hide from me"...so intimate! Wow...admit it Cookie, you love Brian!
Date: Sep 11, 2016 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Sunshine Coming Down.
Very intense finish to this AMAZING chapter!!! And one that was LONG OVERDUE! I'm so happy that Brian finally put an end to Michael's whining, pining and vicarious living! Not only that, but Brian is finally seeing that keeping a friendship with the perpetual immature manchild is becoming pointless. Although I am sorry that Brian had to make his point to Michael the way he did, I'm glad that he finally stood up for himself and is truly living his life the way he wants.
Emmett is a GEM! I always thought that he saw a lot but said little and this just proves it! He also proved himself a true friend by cuttingly remarking on Michael's selfishness. If it Brian is smarting from the loss of Michael, which is really no great loss to me, I'm glad that he will have Em and Ted along with Justin.
Ah...Justin... I really do love his characterization here. Regardless of how long he's known Brian, he really gets him. Brian comparing his time with Michael against his time with Justin was spot on. In fact, I always felt that a big part of the B/J dynamic had to do with Justin knowing when to separate fun and seriousness. For Michael, life has always pretty much been one big party (never mentally maturing past puberty with do that) but for Justin, he's always been responsible having to take care of things on his own. They are different as night and day and I'm glad that Brian is acknowleding which one is better for him at that stage in his life.
What do I want to bet that Brian should be expecting calls from Lindsay and Debbie by the time the sun rises in the morning? Michael should just catch the next ferry back to the mainland and go home...but that would be too much doing the right thing. And we all know that Michael "Spoiled Ass" Novotny NEVER does the RIGHT thing!
Write On Gals,
~Chelle
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2016 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Sunshine Coming Down.
What a slap down to Mikey. I think Brian and Justin are going to have a long talk and Michael is going to go home bawling. Great chapter.
Date: Sep 11, 2016 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Sunshine Coming Down.
Wow, what an intense chapter!!!
Finally, Brian is taking time to analyze his relationship with Michael and acknowledge it can't go on the way it was. The fact that he spent 2 months full time with Justin got him material to compare with what he had with Michael.
This was long overdue and it needed to stop at once: he had to shove him over the cliff. Maybe, it will help Michael to grow up ad to live on his own; and then, maybe they will be able to have a real adult friendship.
Did anybody get that scene on video? I hope not, because it won't do any good.
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I hope you have fun in Spain and will be able to see/meet Gale and Randy (I don't know who is attending this event).
Date: Sep 10, 2016 7:42 am Title: Chapter 44 - Scream and Shout.
Wow, Eric is real and serious competition!!! Gorgeous guy!!!
I thought Brian would let Justin do the unthinkable and let him top in front of the crowd (maybe that's what Brian promised him for later when they will be back home); but the sumptuous blow job was already something to mark the sensitive minds.
Take that Mikey... Your best friend has changed and you will have to deal with it, or not!
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2016 1:33 am Title: Chapter 44 - Scream and Shout.
How humilating for Michael. He's making a mess of Brian's vacation. But Cookie isn't letting him get him down. Cookie 1- Mikey 0. Love the links to the Skivvies.
Date: Sep 10, 2016 12:07 am Title: Chapter 44 - Scream and Shout.
Winner and STILL champion is always Brian!! If Eric didn't know, NOW he KNOWS!!
Michael is always hopeless and hilarious in his abject stupidity. I damn near choked on my KINKY laughing hysterically at that. So much so that I couldn't even whistle the theme to "Rawhide" without breaking out into full-blown chuckles! And to get up there and show his tiny peen!!! LMFAOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooooo I can't even! 
I have a feeling the campaign is going to be even MORE amazing than what Brian, Justin, Cyn, Ted and Emmett are expecting (notice I didn't include the Dumb Dickosarus Rex. The campaign could be simply amazing but because of his jealousy and Lindsay-isms he would automatically find fault). I imagine that this will not only increase Kinnetik stature locally but will have global appeal. Brian and Justin's working relationship is just as solid and well-matched as their sexual exploits. And that can only be to the good!
Michael, Lindsay, Eric and the Chin rat betta start making some therapy appointments now because this situation is bound to drive them (well at least three of them) even crazier!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Sep 06, 2016 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Rawhide.
LOVE LOVE LOVE the opening orgy LOL HOT
even after this lesson, I somehow bet Mikey wont learn anything... yet LOL
Date: Sep 06, 2016 5:03 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Rawhide.
"Yee haw"!!!!!! I also love "Yippee Ki Yay (Motherfucker)".
This is delightful and funny as hell (I didn't note every fun thing, but there were lots of them).
Poor Ted: fired and the wrists in poor shape. As for Mickael, I hope some islanders will make a video of his rodeo.
For someone who doesn't do repeats, Brian is once again with the twins. Michael is up for some major disappointment regarding his "best friend"; most of his rules is in the trash.
Date: Sep 06, 2016 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Rawhide.
Too busy imagining our boys naked in boots to be too upset about Em and Mikey just showing up without regard to Brian’s feelings.
Date: Sep 06, 2016 2:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Summertime.
LOVED the latest chapter!!! First the Rawhide Rodeo was too hot and funny! Strangely, the intro of Em and Michael was wll done.
Now for that situation: As you KNOW I don't mind Emmett staying; he has boundaries. But that little whiny whimpering weenie name 'Mikey' OMG!!!! I so HOPE that the Islanders teach him a much needed, unforgettable lesson! It doesn't help that that BITCH told the MITCH her version of events. The ongoing battle between the Blond and the Blubbering Big Baby is ON!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Author's Response:
Wow! Our 300th review! And like all your reviews it's almost as much fun to read as your stories. So, as your reward, tell us what you want to see for Brian's next entertainment! We'll do our best to make it happen! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! TAG
Date: Sep 06, 2016 2:25 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Control.
Okay *sigh* even I can’t take anymore of the game of clam tag. No one is that unlucky lol. It's maddening and frustrating especially since Ethan was the one who was allowed to swipe them this time. At least he took a header for his trouble.
Justin needs to stop over thinking things. If he can't see that he and Brian are already in a relationship, he needs to take a second look. Cookie should realize the situation for what it is.
[Report This]Date: Sep 06, 2016 1:24 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Rawhide.
If Ted thinks Brian is mad, I'm sure Cynthia will have a thing or two to say to him when she arrives. Michael's sense of entitlement will have seen better days. Emmett just managed to redeem himself with the nail polish.
Date: Sep 06, 2016 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Rawhide.
Go Sunshine! Yee haw!
I think Michael has learned a valuable lesson here...never piss off Justin on his home turf lol
This fanfic is just the gift that keeps on giving...thanks TAG! You're the best and again Happy Birthday!!!
Date: Sep 06, 2016 5:47 am Title: Chapter 43 - Rawhide.
Yee haw, lil doggie! :)
Author's Response:
Ride 'em, Cowboy! LOL! TAG