Date: May 12, 2022 4:02 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow…hopefully Justin will let Brian help him. Not sure what Debbie et al turning up will help (or hurt).
Date: May 04, 2022 1:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
We all criticize ourselves the harshest. Hope you had a better day today, and fun writing. Can't wait to read it. The boys together...well...fireworks can fly in so many interesting ways.
Charle
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2022 1:47 am Title: Chapter 7
So Justin is still afraid the Sap will hurt Jennifer and Molly? That would explain why he didn’t go back to Brian. Hopefully Brian can help heal his Sunshine.
Author's Response:
There is more reasons Justin's afraid to go back home. It's talked about in the new chapter.
Date: May 03, 2022 9:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
absolutely, go back and write your original plot bunny as much as you can, it is what your muse wanted to say
it is almost never a good idea to change a story to suit comments, unless it enhances your initial storyline
Charle
Author's Response:
Thank you. I started the next chapter just after your first review and it's flowing so much better. Of course that might be because Justin and Brian are back together in the same place. Thank you for your kind words, didn't realize how much I was criticizing my own self.
Date: May 03, 2022 9:18 pm Title: Chapter 7
Only saw one person who isn't liking it, and he/she doesn't speak for all of us. Also, as tempting as it is, don't fall in to the trap of basing interest on reviews. There are all sorts of reasons that folks who like a story don't review. For instance, I have had 6 surgeries in the past 6 months, and still only have the use of one hand, so posting takes me forever and is quite tiring.
This story is so intriguing, with so many branches and winding roads. I admit I was originally a little upset about Justin being abducted a second time, but now I need to know more. There is still so much story to tell,I hope you don't cut it so short that we are left with huge unsettled conclusions/answers.
Write more, keep this story going, enjoy the journey and don't ever let the world pull you down. No one;s opinion matters unless you allow it.
Happy writing.
Charle
Author's Response:
I know you're right. And I usually don't worry about reviews. It just seemed people liked it in the beginning but it waned. I realized I had done something wrong but I had this vision in my head how the story would go. I started doubting myself and trying to "Fix" it but you can't put the toothpaste back in the tube. So, now I'm just going to do what I had planned because trying to fix it had messed it all up in my head and probably would sound disjointed if I tried to post those.
Date: May 03, 2022 2:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this turn of events! I didn't like the idea of a Justin submitted to the greasy duchebag, but this I didn't expect!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2022 3:16 am Title: Chapter 6
Keep going I'm loving it so far! It is always fun when Justin gets a little power!
Author's Response:
You don't know how happy this review makes me.
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2022 2:18 am Title: Chapter 6
You’re right I don’t like this chapter any better!
Author's Response:
Sorry
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2022 2:24 am Title: Chapter 5
Justin better be ok!!! Reid should end up with Morgan.
I’ll be honest….not too happy with the ending of this chapter even with your authors note.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you were unhappy with the chapter. Thank you for letting me know. You'll probably not like this next one any better but I promise, it's all uphill after that...for the most part...maybe.
Date: Apr 27, 2022 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I really want to read this one but I can't start until after CampNaNo is over... Please write lots in the next weeks so I have lots to catch up on! LOL. TAG
Author's Response:
I can't wait until you're able to read it too. Hopefully it will be finished so you can read it all. I'm not sure how long I'm going to make it though.
Date: Apr 26, 2022 4:28 am Title: Chapter 4
So you get Justin kidnapped, raped, drive him over a cliff, rescue him and then leave us hanging?
PS can you throw the chin rat over that cliff?
Author's Response:
Umm...my bad. LOL. Thank you so much for commenting. Justin had a hell of a few days. Poor Ethan, not getting a lot of love. The new chapter is up, hope it answers some big questions but it also probably won't.
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2022 10:26 am Title: Chapter 4
I usually avoid angsty stories. but I'm loving this.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you gave it a try. I'll try not to disappoint. Thank you for commenting.
Date: Apr 21, 2022 6:52 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a great story!! Can't wait for a new chapter!
Date: Apr 20, 2022 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow….hope you don’t draw out Justin’s torture too much…can’t take that. They need to find him soon.
Date: Apr 20, 2022 11:09 am Title: Chapter 2
If there was the question if anybody would be interested in that story that would be a big fat YES on my part. Please, keep writing. ????
Author's Response:
LOL, thank you. I will keep writing. This story is flowing well while writing it. It is getting darker though. I'm sorry.
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2022 8:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very good start….can’t wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I always worry people wouldn't like the story. Thank you for commenting.