[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2021 9:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Sorry for the lateness in reading, but I guess you understand why.
This is so sad and heart-rending. And it happens to way too many kids today.
I was surprised that you wrote this as Hunter's first time, as the show made it appear that he'd been doing it for a long time prior to hustling n the streets. But this was way more impacting.
And the fact that Hunter was thinking he'd like to try a girl, and he didn't even like this, God, my heart just about burst wide open along with his tears at the end.
A couple of more thoughts regarding Brian hit me this time while reading. All that wandering around the hotel - naked - he's lucky no one saw him and got put in the slammer for public indecency.
And what are the people that rent that room gonna smell and think about the housekeeping staff???
And just a crazy thought - what the hell is the bellboy gonna do with the condom? Bathe in it? YUCK...
I better quit whle I'm ahead. Or maybe he'll stand on street corner and sell it to some woman! LOL
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
I deliberately didn't state Hunter's age here because it's over two years before we meet him in S3, and he only turns sixteen at the end of that season. l’d say he’s well shy of fourteen at this point. His mother seems to have pushed him to hustle with the 'You like young dick? For fifty, you can suck it. For one hundred, I'll let you fuck me' routine when Hunter was twelve. (In 4.01, in the courtroom, Mel brings up Hunter's statement about how Rita "coerced him from the age of twelve into acts of prostitution.")
For purposes of this story, I assumed that happened when he was close to thirteen and that Rita didn't watch him in action but just dropped him off on Liberty Avenue to earn money if he wanted a roof over his head. I have Hunter getting away with blow jobs and hand jobs up to this point. If he earned enough money, Rita wouldn't care how he did it.
Hunter’s so cocky and self-assured in canon - it had become a built-in defense mechanism - that what his preference might be never really gets addressed. The way he comes on to Brian, which is pretty funny, makes it seem that he must prefer men. Until Callie, but even then it’s not clear whether he likes women or men or possibly both.
Brian’s lucky no one else was in the hallway when he exited Telson’s hotel room… as far as we know :D He may have had to brazen it out and hope the display of his ‘charms’ kept him out of trouble.
If the guests complain (it can’t smell good in their hotel room!), let’s hope housekeeping doesn’t accept the blame. After an investigation, either fired or suspended without pay, Johnny the bellhop ends up on Liberty Avenue, hawking, “Brian Kinney’s fresh sperm. C’mon, what’ll you give me for it? Three hundred. No, five hundred from the lady in the camel coat. Do I hear six hundred?”
Obviously, that sperm’s not going to be fresh anymore, but the buyers don’t have the sense to beware. Who do we think snatched it up? For how much?
Does Brian hear about it? How does he react? Dun dun dun...
Thanks for commenting, Cathy :) Hugs back atcha,
~ Karynn
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2021 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that didn’t work :( It was supposed to be Covid clusters and needles. Emojis work better on AO3.
This series is amazing! I wish there was more!
Author's Response:
I was thinking of leaving you a bunch of question marks in response to your earlier comment :D
Ooh, wouldn't that be cool if we could send Covid back in time, targeting specific people without having it spread.
Thanks for the triple review! :) You've made my day.
~ Karynn
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2021 9:11 am Title: Chapter 1
That man was horrible. Grat start!
Author's Response:
Telson? Yeah, a real creeper.
Thanks for giving this a try and leaving a comment, Cathy.
~ Karynn
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2021 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
A little something for Rita, and it’s not a vaccine!
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