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Date: Jun 19, 2021 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 16: Vanquishing A Madman

I STILL think that vile tongue should have been cut out. He spewed hatred words with it until his death. Michael should have been grateful that they chose lethal injection. He could have been hanged from the neck and dropped, and struggled before his body went limp.

But it’s finally over, and justice was served.

Hugs,

Cathy

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Date: Jun 19, 2021 1:07 am Title: Chapter 14: Resolutions... and Primal Hunger

Yowza! Brian’s in lustful predator mode. Look out!

I don’t understand Ben. When he was told Michael took his life, he suffered through that, and came to terms with it.

So what was Brian supposed to do? Uproot that, and say, Uh, sorry, there’s been a mistake. He’s alive. He hypnotized a guard to lie for him. Now I’m exiling him.

And then he’d realize he suffered for nothing, and would have to come to terms with Michael leaving Al Duran. The whole scenario is ridiculous. Ben is a grown man… a soldier, a guard. He should be made of tougher stuff than this! He should realize that Brian was sparing his feelings and doing what he thought best. And he needs to quit acting like a child throwing a tantrum.

Hugs,

Cathy

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Date: Jun 18, 2021 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 12: A Tumultuous Homecoming

Ben's irate anger really surprised me. It was almost like he still had feelings for Michael. So what that he didn't get to say goodbye the first time. He didn't want Michael killed, he should have been thankful for that. ESPECIALLY when he now has true love and devotion with Brandon. He should have just said 'good riddance'. He can say goodbye now, if he so chooses. And it's just so NOT right that Brian doesn't level with Ben where his and Michael's animosity came from. Then maybe he would realize right from the beginning he was nothing but a pawn in Michael's game and relish his death.

I love Justin's fieriness. Where the fuck is he? Brian better watch him close, or he just might go down there and inflict his own brand of punishment. Like rip his tongue out! Because I still say without that tongue, he can't hypnotize anyone. And are we sure all the guards are safe from him??? I hope he's at least bound and gagged. And who gets to do the execution? And who gets to watch? (ME! ME!) LOL...

It was an 'ahh' moment when Brian asked Justin to join him and Gus on their outing. That should say a lot to Justin. True family.

Hugs,

Cathy

Author's Response:

I think Brian never told Ben about Michael's offer to him back in Sultan's Possession because he knew that knowing that would break his heart, realizing how much time he had wasted loving him. Despite how he acts, Brian has a good heart; at least, to those he cares about. Ben did overreact, especially now that he's in a loving and healthy relationship...but I think he was hurt over the man he thought Michael once wasy, even if we know Michael never was that man. 

Justin is lucky that Brian lets him slide on some of his outbursts. That really isn't proper form in his country, but I doubt anyone else would get away with it. 

They have certainly evolved into a special family. Hopefully, this is the beginning of happier times. :) 

Thanks for commenting.

Hugs,

Janet

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Date: Jun 18, 2021 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 10: A Waiting Game

Poor Teddy. He almost lost himself in Justin's wiles.

The fact that Justin is starting to think it's possible that something is wrong, I hope that means the drugs are gradually leaving his system.

I wish Hamin wouldn't have thrown the powder in the river, as it would have been interesting to know what it was, and what it would have done to a person. Just because it was mind-altering, well, hypnosis can do that too. I wish they would have tested it on Michael.

Hugs,

Cathy

Author's Response:

Haha. Ted always seems to be susceptible to Justin - in one way or another. LOL. 

I think Justin will be fine soon, but his condition has to be a source of rage for Brian. 

It would be nice to have the powder, and for sure, use it on Michael. I bet he would like being on the receiving end!

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: Jun 18, 2021 11:04 am Title: Chapter 8: Desperate Decisions

Well, Michael’s on his way back to Al Duran. I hope nothing happens to bring that to fruition.

Then we have Justin. Michael must have really used some type of hypnosis on him, that he knows it’s wrong while saying it, but can’t fight it. Although he said it was drug-induced, I can’t see that, because Hamin didn’t blow the powder on him. But fifteen minutes, Sap said.

Will Brian get there in time to stop this, or to acquire Justin himself?

Hugs,

Cathy

Author's Response:

Too bad Gary isn't interested in Mikey. They are made for each other here - LOL. Of course, Gary is also a businessman - of sorts. He would know that Michael could never fetch the price that Justin would. 

It does seem that things are about to heat up. We'll see how that goes. Haha.

Thanks for the comment, Cathy.

:) 

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Date: Jun 18, 2021 11:02 am Title: Chapter 6: The Determination of A Madman

Ut oh, on a few accounts. Brian found Justin, and how will he react? Brian has Gary pinned with a benevolent glare… and Michael is in for a world of hurt.

Hugs,

Cathy

Author's Response:

I don't think Brian is feeling very merciful tonight. LOL. Gary is in his line of fire first, and probably a high priority with knowing how Justin had to interview for a job. Thank you Theodore for that news flash - LOL. But Michael is going to be high on the bad-list too!

Thanks for commenting. :) 

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Date: Jun 18, 2021 11:00 am Title: Chapter 4: Friends and Enemies

Aha! That sucker IS alive! I started to doubt myself when at the end of Possession, there was still no mention of him! And just what does he plan to do with Justin? How does he think he can do anything to him with the Sultan in NY??

Michael might end up wishing he really had killed himself. But who’s helping him? I thought everyone was tested for hypnosis.

Hugs,

Cathy

Author's Response:

Yeah, the only reason Michael survived in the first story was so we could extend his insanity here - LOL. Michael does have a diabolical plan in regards to Justin...but will it work? 

I really would hate to be Michael. Brian isn't going to be so forgiving this time.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

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Date: Jun 18, 2021 10:58 am Title: Chapter 2: Awakening A Savage

I’m really surprised Justin called at the same time as boarding was being called. He had forty-five minutes. He should have gone somewhere quiet. Maybe a lavatory in the airport. Brian might have heard the fans from the air dryer, but nothing else. Maybe Justin wants to get caught? And Brian didn’t even try to say anything of his innocence.

Hugs,

Cathy

Author's Response:

Maybe subconsciously Justin does want to be found. Who knows really? He could have been looking to hear the right words to change his path, but Brian had to be his domineering self that he was when they first met. Well, old dogs and new tricks, etc. Haha.

:)