[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2021 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 26
Well, let's hope Warden Kinney has the day off from work tomorrow, as he might be a wee bit tired.
I'm glad Justin finally saw what Brian did as the best course of action.
I can imagine Brandon's rage when he finds out what actually happened tonight.
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2021 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 25
I'm so glad Mel is going with her gut intuition. I hope it leads her to the right place, and soon.
I hope Brian knows what he's doing, and his plan doesn't backfire. But unlike with Brandon, Justin really does like and want Brian.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2021 8:53 pm Title: Chapter 24
Surprising for Emmett to be so bold with Ben, knowing he has a thing for Mikey. But good thing Ted is going to get him safely home.
I have a feeling someone else's blood just boiled too. Wrong time for Justin to show with Brandon. Brandon must have done a little digging so he knew where to find Justin so quick.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2021 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 23
Grievous error? More like a set up by one of Pittsburgh's finest (at least Stockwell thinks he is.) I hope somehow Stockwell fries.
I'm glad Melanie pushed for financial restitution. Does the state pay that? I wish it had to come out of Stockwell's pocket.
The reunion between Justin, Jennifer, and Daphne was bittersweet, and so nice to see.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2021 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 22
I hope Justin doesn't fall for Brandon's words. Brandon only wants one thing... well, two if you count beating Brian at the game.
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2021 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 21
That was simply fantastic. I'm glad they spent some down-time together. It was sweet of Brian to do that. (Don't tell Brian!)
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2021 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 20
Brandon has definitely pressed that last of Brian's buttons, and I have a feeling things will culminate when Justin is released.
But will Brian make Brandon's days at the prison worse>
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2021 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 19
Brian and Brandon are going to come to blows. Brandon has gone from one of his most trusted guards, to someone Brian acts like he doesn't trust or like.
And whenBrandon issued the threa about after Justin gets out, I could actually hear Brian's growl.
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2021 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 18
I have to wonder if Brian and Brandon will come to odds about the free time that Brandon allowed Justin tonight.
And I'm so glad Melanie got to be Justin's lawyer, as she won't left anything slide.
But Brandon is definitely pushing his luck with Brian.
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2021 5:20 pm Title: Chapter 17
Lots of tension mounting, and it's just getting worse.
But worse yet, Justin isn't even willing to bend and assist with anything. And the fact that Brandon knows, what's to say he won't spill the beans to someone - just for spite. Nobody would know he said it.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2021 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh, I hope Brian tells Justin EVERYTHING! Especially nw that Brandon eavesdropped and heard Justin will be leaving. Brandon better not be the one to tell Justin!
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2021 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
Wow! Brandon is going all out to earn and win Justin and his confidence. Brian might have some competiton comeing his way.
I'm surprised Brian lets Branden down there.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2021 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
I don't think it's out of the good of old Stockwell's heart to get this moved through court fast. His dirty subconscience wants it done and swept under the rug.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2021 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 13
Branden's trying to make brownie points. And as mad as Justin is at Brian right now - Branden may pull ahead in the race,
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2021 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
Isn't Brian's office private and NOT bugged? Why couldn't Brian be upfront with Justin? And STRESS the importance of not even a guard knowing?
This is going to practically kill Justin and any feelings he had of Brian!
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2021 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
Boy, this is BAD! Justin is never gonna want anything to do with Brian again.
Justin is stubborn and hard-headed. He's not going to think rationally.
Although, Ben suggesting a single cell, and Brian saying they could get him in there too. NOT if it was locked at all times. Meals could be served through the bars. So unless that cell door was opened, Justin would be safe.
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2021 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Well, at least Hobbs had a semi-conscience and came clean.
Stockwell... I hate him. The fact he killed off Craig makes me mad. I wanted Craig to go to prison and be put in with Bubba - or how did Justin say it? Big, burgly guy? LOL
I'm not sure how Stockwell will be caught now, since Craig was the only one that knew. Killing Craig in cold blood, makes him worse than Craig.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2021 3:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
WooHoo... the warde and Justin are getting friendly!
But why in the hell didn't Kip and Ethan g3et in trouble? They made an attempt to rape - Brandon stopped it. They guys should have got the hole for a couple of days.
Stockwell is going to be scary if he totally snaps.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2021 3:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG! Craig Taylor needs to go DOWN! What a jackass!
A very different storyline for Michael. If I had to pick one of the three beinng in prison, I would have thought Emmett. I'm not sure why, but whatever.
Justin better quit pushing Brian. Michael actually gave good advice to Justin.
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2021 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
And once again... the prison is in an uproar. Shower time. And another visit to the office. Poor Justin.
But the way Brian came onto him after the others left the shower room, he's lucky Brandon would do his bidding and disconnect the camera.
And gee, Ben... Newsflash... Justin is GAY! LOL...
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2021 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Still laughing. Poor Brian. He's TRYING to get Justin out of his head, and no matter how many blonds he takes his fristrations out on, it's not working.
And Ben had me laughing... following him into the backroom to talk to him. Who does that??
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2021 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
I KNOW I shouldn't laugh while reading this daunting story, but this chapter totally cracked me up. Justin is so scared of the warden, yet he's turned on by his gruffness, and worried about spending time so close to him.
And criminy sakes, he has both Kip and Ethan panting after him.
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2021 9:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
A little different scenario having Mikey in prison. "The boy next door." It will be interesting to see what his crime was.
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2021 6:44 am Title: Chapter 1
So, I'm assuming this is following Justin's altercation with Hobbs after the bashing. What if Cody was responsible?
I always thought that arc was never adequately finished. Justin walked away, but Cody was left behind - the real psychopath in that team.
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: Jun 12, 2021 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 34
thanks again for a great story. Is strange to have a nice Michael.
Author's Response:
You are very welcome. The sequel, 'Retribution' has just been posted. It has some heavy angst in one chapter in particular. But, it's only eight chapters long.
Rarely do I write a nice Michael. It was different. LOL.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
:)