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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2021 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 10

Brian has so much to deal with that he is not propared for.  Thank goodness Molly is good with kids.  Ezra could charm anyone, even Lily.  

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2021 1:22 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh Lily sweetheart....she breaks my heart. I mean, poor Brian too, yes, everyone is struggling but that little girl...someone needs to suggest to Brian to get some therapy for both he & his daughter. 

Love responsible Ezra, so smart! Looking forward to his & Justin's friendship! 

Molly & Hunter are still so fabulous!They're definitely one of my favorite couples!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2021 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 9

Loving Ezra. especially his family. I have a feeling that when Mason mom's starts with negativaty that there will be enough people around to take her apart.  While I hate that Eric died, Justin and Brian need to support each other.



Author's Response:

So glad you love Ezra! I think Mason will have plenty of both expected and unexpected supporters at the dinner. He'll be alright. <3 Brian and Justin will get there. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing! New chapter is now up!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2021 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 9

This chapter was everything! Until the end of sadness....Molly thinking Justin & Mason speaking in unison was adorable. Stop talking about your sex life. Mason/Ezra are so much 'worse' then Molly/Hunter. Ezra just getting Justin and them getting along so well. Then omg Emmett! Hahaha so funny! Mason needing Justin to keep Ezra occupied. Ezra's family! All so fabulous!!! 

Oh my goodness, poor Em & Drew, they'll make sure Duncan is alright, he's got them! 



Author's Response:

I know, something has to bring everything down. :( Molly REALLY wants them to bond and become brothers. I'm sure she will get her wish eventually. She probably won't get her wish on the oversharing that Mason and Ezra tend to do on their sex life. Those boys are VERY happy with each other and it's hard to contain. They are DEFINITELY worse than H/M! Ezra and Justin are forming a close friendship and that's going to be important in the Mason and Justin bonding as well. Ezra's family is great! I kind of want them to stay! They will just have to visit pretty often. ;) Em and Drew are very upset, but they will be there for Duncan every step of the way. New chapter is now up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2021 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well worth the wait.  I was so excited to see a new chapter.  Your characters are so vivid and jump off the pages of the story.  I can jsut see the reunion with Ezra and his parents and can really visualize Mason too.  The pain is so raw with the characters too.  Great job.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are enjoying the new characters and feel like everyone is multi-dimensional. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing! New chapter is now up!

Reviewer: Sksfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2021 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story. Anxiously awaiting more

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2020 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 8

Omg I cannot over the audicity of Louisa! Sweet baby Jesus, she has some nerve! Poor Brian...that was the last thing he needed. 

I'm so glad Justin was there for him but seriously, express your condolences already. 

Molly is THE BEST! 



Author's Response:

Louisa really needs to check herself and understand that this isn't how to be in Lily's life. Brian definitely didn't need that and we all know that Eric would have kicked her out if he was alive to hear what she said to him. Justin definitely needs to express his condolences, but I think he also knows that Brian hates being apologized to and is trying to find the right moment. Molly is awesome! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Chapter 9 is now up! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2020 4:56 am Title: Chapter 8

Wow.  Molly is a godsent.  Brian is coming back to be with Lily.



Author's Response:

Molly is wonderful :) Chapter 9 is now up! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2020 4:22 am Title: Chapter 7

Justin feels guilty.  Brian feels guilty.  Lily thinks that Eric should have run, but there is no way he would leave Lily. 

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2020 2:05 am Title: Chapter 8

So, so good. My heart breaks for Brian and Lily. But you're writing so beautifully conveys what they are going thru. 



Author's Response:

They are going through so much right now :( It's good that they have each other, as well as Gus and their family, but it's still very hard fo them. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Chapter 9 is now up!

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2020 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 8

Omg I am so engrossed in this story. Yay at least Brian allowed Justin to care for him a tiny bit today. I thought Louisa would try this custody angle. I hope Brian and Eric had her guardianship airtight.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are so into it! Brian let Justin help him a little. Definitely a good sign. He still has a long way to go and there are going to be good days and absolutely horrible ones, but hopefully he is going try to start healing a little. Louisa needs to step back and re-evaluate herself. She should play an important role in Lily's life but not if she's going to be like this. Chapter 9 is now up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2020 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 8

Great update.  It is tough, but each in their way is coming to terms with what happened.  How dare Louisa think she could take Lily from her father.  Was told once that if you want to bring out the worst in people, have a wedding or a funeral and have seen it happen many times.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

Large family get togethers with a bunch of stress involved are the worst, so I can totally see funerals and weddings bringing out the worst in people. Louisa definitely needs to respect Brian if she wants to continue being in Lily's life. She is hurting and she feels immense guilt, but she can't go about it this way. Thanks for reading! Chapter 9 is now up!

Reviewer: mcm Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2020 7:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

You rock  Thank you

 

Teresa



Author's Response:

You rock too! Chapter 9 is now up!

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2020 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 8

You still keep churning out a great story. That so called grandma doesnt need to have Lily.

Author's Response:

No, she definitely doesn't. Should she play an important part in Lily's life? Yes, but only if she owns her mistakes and accepts that Brian is Lily's dad. Thanks for reading! Chapter 9 is now up!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2020 6:37 pm Title: Chapter 7

Molly is truly amazing! What an imaginative, loving, caring, intelligent woman! I wish she was real & my friend or girlfriend lol

Gus is breaking my heart. Thank godness Justin took him out for a bit. So glad Brian went looking for them! I frigging held my breath when Brian & Justin locked eyes....omg you write so well honey! 

That service....sweet baby Jesus, I mean, I needed a good cry but seriously?? Well I got it! You need to write a book Annie! 

Those last few sentences....Christ! I can just picture this....

I can only imagine what the receptiion will look like.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2020 6:24 pm Title: Chapter 6

I love Ezra! Do we have a photo of him or Mason by chance? 

Oh Lily honey...she may be wicked smart but she's still a baby...oh my goodness, my heart breaks for her! 

Thank God Brian will go to Emmett's! He really needs him right now. 

I wish Justin would call Brian...

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2020 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh Lily, baby girl, you poor little angel. She's gonna go thru so many changes! 

I think I must have cried in every chapter so far! The funeral is gonna give me a freaking anxiety attack! But this is so good!!! I'll be okay, just keep writing! lol

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2020 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 4

I can't blame Brian for having those thoughts but he knows his girls need him. 

Oh Gus, you are so sweet! And in so much pain himself....

Can't wait for Duncan to be reunited with his parents. 

Ah Nathan. I'm glad he was there for Justin but it feels like they're taken 3 steps backwards. 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2020 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh Brian...I can't even put myself in his position. I can't imagine it, it's too hard! Oh Eric...he was one of my favorite new original characters. Makes for great story but so so sad....Brian is gonna really gonna lose it someday...

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2020 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 2

Omg omg omg. Poor Justin....poor Gus...poor Lily....poor Duncan....poor Molly & Hunter....sweet Jesus, here we go. Duncan is so little but so smart like Lily. Thank God for Molly! Justin & Hunter are useless....I don't mean that meanly, they're in shock & can barely breathe. 

I love Duncan!!!

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2020 5:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was gut-wrenching...so many tears. My heart goes out to all of them. This is gonna be so hard...but beautifully written! 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2020 2:12 am Title: Chapter 7

Wow, so sad and powerful.  Tissue box time for sure.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: nickknack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2020 8:59 am Title: Chapter 7

This chapter was absolutely heartbreaking. Everyone's pain is so expertly written and so that real that it literally caused a lump in my throat. So sad!

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2020 4:34 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh my god. This is so so good. The heartbreak. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2020 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 6

I like how Justin has a place that could hold everyone.  Molly and Hunter, Mason and Ezra.  Maybe even Brian and Lily plus the new baby?

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