Date: May 20, 2021 2:04 pm Title: Chapter 16
That was fun, I so enjoy re-reading fic. I find that I discover something I missed the first time around making the story better. You are a wonderful writer.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for such kind words. I appreciate that more than I can say. I do agree with that. I often discover something new when I re-read a story.
Thanks for the comment!
:)
Date: May 12, 2021 3:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
Good story
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it! :)
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2021 7:26 pm Title: Chapter 16
First, I THOUGHT Brandon was dead. But OKAY - I LOVE the FIFTEEN YEARS!
And the Justin that stuck his tongue out at Brandon just screams impish Justin. And haha, Brandon deserved it.
I'm proud of Brian allowing Justin to actually carry out with finishing his dance, but just think of the moolah Brian could have made if he charged admission to the backroom when the dance was over?! LOL
And Mikey might say he'll save a spot on Stepford Lane, but hell would freeze over before Brian and Justin arrived on Stepford Lane. Marriage okay - but Justin deserves his mansion.
So, another story bites the dust... and I was thinking that it's about time to get a good anti-Michael one started! (It's been a while!) (hint-hint.)
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
I think prison is a much worse punishment for Brandon here. He definitely won't be enjoying that! LOL.
Justin wouldn't be Justin if he didn't have those impish moments, especially at a time like this and all that he suffered because of Brandon. I can see Brian's concern, though. Fifteen years isn't forever...
Mikey can dream all he likes, Brian and Justin don't belong on Stepford Lane - NOW or EVER. Haha.
Yes, another story finished. So many more to go, and I think we know, a large number of them will be anti-Michael.
Thanks for your support, my friend. I appreciate it so much.
Hugs,
Janet
Date: May 03, 2021 9:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
Perfect perfect ending to a really good story thank you so much for sharing it with us
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. This was written such a long time ago when my writing style was a bit different, but I did enjoy writing it.
Thanks for the comment. :)
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2021 9:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Brian, Brian. But at least Brandon's dead - we hope - and not a last hurrah fom him.
Have you ever read the book: The Healing Power of Tears? It's NOT in the literal sense, but just suppose Justin had healing teas hitting Brian's chest? (Okay - I mus go back to bed!
I assume we're about done here? It seems to be winding down.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
We will learn in the next, and final chapter about Brandon's prognosis. Dead or alive, he's in a lot of trouble.
No, I don't think I have ever read that. There's a thought for sure...but probably not in a non-supernatural story. LOL.
The final chapter will be posted soon.
Thanks so much for your comments, Cathy. I believe I know which story is going to be next...which I think will be 'Captivated.'
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2021 9:36 am Title: Chapter 14
Okay, I think Brandon has about shot all his chances to hell, and yet he still thinks he's going to take Brian out? LOL... That guy should be on a program called: Delusionals Most Wanted. Along with guest stars Mikey and Lindsay (Next feature.) Brandon already has a kidnapping charge, let's try a murder one with Brian. The guy won't see the light of day for YEARS!
I was a little lost here: We both know he would have given a better opportunity. About what? He already kidnapped Molly. (It's probably just my fogged brain at work - or lack of work)
On to the next chapter!
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Brandon is clearly desperate now and has about lost his mind. It's almost funny to watch when someone this sinister crossing the line. They become desperate and can't accept defeat, but instead, keep making even more crazy mistakes that will have more far reaching consequences.
That line you ask about was really just the realization that if Brandon had placed hands on Molly again, he would have done far worse to her in retailiation. He's certainly in enough trouble without that too!
Thanks for commenting, Cathy!
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2021 12:27 am Title: Chapter 13
One of these days, I should all be caught up. Got sprung from my third hospital stay today, and finally with a NEGATIVE test, so my hope prevails.
First up is trying to get caught up on this. IF that was seriously the police to Daphne, and not some twisted Brandon game, I wuld think he's on his way DOWN!
I was kind of thinking back on what's occurred so far, and when Brandon was offering 5k for that party, I'm surprise Brian didn't go to Cliff with the info... "Is this the kind of thing you want getting out?"
Anyway, more tomorrow. I'm exhausted!
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
You have certainly had more than your share of hospital stays. I truly hope that gets better for you soon, Cathy.
We certainly hope that Brandon is on his way down now. I don't think there are words strong enough to describe him in this 'verse. Lol.
Yeah, Brian definitely could have done that. Maybe he wasn't sure how trustworthy Cliff was either; although, I don't think Brandon's business partner would condone that kind of private party...most especially, with the creme of his crop.
Take care.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2021 11:20 am Title: Chapter 15
Think how different this story would have gone if Molly had a problem with two men loving each other. Calling Brandon was amazingly smart but dangerous. Loved this.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked this chapter. Yes, calling Brandon was extremely dangerous, but probably the best option for a resolution. Molly certainly seems very mature and open-minded. I can't see her ever having a problem with Brian and Justin.
More to come. Thanks for commenting.
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2021 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
Once again Brandon is making a mistake. Can the police go after Brandon for kidnapping?
Author's Response:
I'm sure the police can do that. We'll see how it all comes together. There are only two more chapters, so a resolution for all of them is coming soon.
Thank you for commenting. :)
Date: Apr 16, 2021 5:23 pm Title: Chapter 14
Omg they are reunited at last but argh Brandon's plans still continue to hurt Justin Brian and Molly
Author's Response:
It was so nice to have a moment with the twins' reunion, but Brandon does ruin everything. Only two more chapters to go, so the bad things should work itself out very soon now.
More to come. Thanks for the comment. :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2021 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 12
That low-down snake. He's going to be one sorry puppy when Brian gets a hold of him, and thank God Brian thought to call Carl in. I know they are a ways away, but hopefully Carl has the 'long arm of the law' on his side...
And little miss receptionist better lose her job, her credentials, and be brought up on accessory charges if anything happenes to Molly.
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Never underestimate what Carl can do. He's come through so many times. I try to incorporate him in my stories at times.
Quite a bit of action remaining in a story that's nearly over now. I hope to update another chapter soon.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy. I hiope you are feeling better, or at least, moving in the right direction.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2021 1:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
Brian is a life saver. Hopefully Molly's.
Author's Response:
Brian has went above and beyond to bring these siblings back together. Hopefully, it all works out soon...
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2021 11:40 am Title: Chapter 12
Daphne has Molly's welfare in mind unlike Brandon.
Author's Response:
Yes, Daphne certainly does. Brandon is completely horrid.
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2021 11:28 am Title: Chapter 11
Why do I think going to Chicago is a mistake?
Author's Response:
Chicago might not be the answer. I guess we'll see.
Date: Mar 01, 2021 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 13
Omg so close so far
Author's Response:
Definitely very close calls here. This should be wrapped up very soon. Thanks for commenting...
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2021 1:39 am Title: Chapter 12
OMG, I hate Brandon. Great writing.
Author's Response:
Yes, Brandon is an ASS of a whole different order. More to come. Thanks for the comment.
Date: Feb 06, 2021 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 12
Omg I knew it dam freaking Brandon
Author's Response:
Brandon is a menace, but the resolution is coming. More to come soon. Thanks for the comment.
:)
Date: Feb 06, 2021 6:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Thought I had found something new to read but realized I’d already read the COMPLETED story on MW without having to wait weeks for a chapter update.
Author's Response:
Yes, this is completed elsewhere. I upload a chapter here when I have time. Leaving it weeks is never my intention, but RL is my priority.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2021 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
Well, well, well... Excitement is definitely on the horizon!
I love that Brian admitted his feelings toJustin, so that events that are going to happen, will help Justin's mindset...
Now, a couple of things regarding the detective agency...
Little miss, red-headed receptionist, better be FIRED! And I believe Jared Mash owes Brian a huge reimbursement.
Looking forward to the reunion...
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
The angst will certainly escalate now...but with so few chapters remaining, it will be resolved quickly. But, you probably knew that. LOL.
Brian definitely seems more receptive to his feelings than we usually see him, but this really isn't one of predatory Brian stories...so that helps there.
The receptionist does need to go, and hopefully, the detective will be deserving of his profession and 'detect' her actions!
The reunion is coming...but we have to deal with Brandon first.
Next chapter is finally posted. Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2021 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 10
I got the update in my inbox, but imagine my surprise to see I missed the last one... a quick perusal of my email, showed it went to my junk folder... so go figure. Well, two for the update of one today.
BRANDON - you have him beyond evil... so vile, reading his thoughts almost made me ill... so if that was your intent - You succeeded!
I'm sure the detective will locate Molly in no time... he played the money game quite well, but now will Brandon get the info before Brian? (I kind of remember - but no spoilers are going out!)
And now - moving on!
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
This is one of the worse versions of Brandon I have ever written; although, there was one story that he was a touch worse. Thankfully, this story doesn't have much more to go, so his reign of terror should be ending soon. But, you know it has to get worse before it gets better. Lol.
Of course the bad guy has to get the jump on our heroes. That plays out for a better showdown... and helps me leave cliffhangers. Haha.
Date: Jan 26, 2021 9:09 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh good declarations made and hopefully Molly will be found. I don't like that PI he seems suss
Author's Response:
I think Molly will be fine, of course, some drama along the way. The PI is genuine; although, very greedy. He probably should pay better attention to his office staff.
Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2021 2:13 am Title: Chapter 11
Great update. Hate Brandon. Wonderful writing.
Author's Response:
Brandon is an ass. I'm glad you liked the update. Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2021 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 11
I read this on MW. I've always loved the mystery and danger in it. >>Cat
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. I did enjoy writing this story. Thanks for the comment.
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2021 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
Another great chapter except for Brandon. Terrific writing.
Author's Response:
Yes, I know. Brandon is such a menace in this story, but I guess we need a bad guy to overcome, and he will be in time. Thanks for reading and commenting!
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2021 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter. Wonderful writing and more WOW.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Things are steadily moving along now.
Thanks for reading and commenting. :)