Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2021 2:06 am Title: Chapter 10

I hope the detective doesn't take too long to locate Molly.  It should be easy when she comes to town.  Though maybe the private dick won't get a chance to bring Molly and Justin together?

Author's Response:

The detective seemed to know he could get results, but he had to play the game for the bigger payday. Piece by piece it will all come together.

Thanks for reading and commenting! 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2021 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 9

Aha! So there were no interruptions! And a fine night was had by both.

And then the flip - Molly having nightmares, missing Justin.

Justin having nightmares, thinking Molly blames him.

I loved that Daphne is Molly best friend and roommate - nice twist.

And both Daphne and Brian determined to bring the siblings together.

Hugs,

Cathy

Author's Response:

I think this night was what they both needed, and probably so with some angst on the horizon.

It was easy for me to visualize Molly and Justin having those moments. Twins share a special connection, even ones that are separated. 

In the end, everything should work out. It's just a matter of how that get there.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2020 2:05 am Title: Chapter 7

Why do I get the feeling that Brandon is just going to get started? That his pursuit and hunt has just tipped over the edge and gone in the manic mode? Obsessive control. *shiver*

And I'm trying to figure out if Brian's talking to him was really a good thing. It might quiet Brandon for a day or two, but he'll come back with a vengence. Consequences be damned. I wish Brian would have hired Justin a bodyguard.

And why, with the ending, Tonight, Justin Taylor, we will move forward. I'm going to seduce you... I now have this Shirelles song playing on loop in my head?

Tonight you're mine completely - You give your love so sweetly - Tonight the light of love is in your eyes - But will you love me tomorrow?

Thanks so much for that. LOL... It won't quit.

Hugs  ~Cathy

Author's Response:

Sadly you are probably right. Brandon is a definite problem in this story. He might even make the 'Sap' look good! If that's possible!!

Good point, but I think Brian wanted Brandon to be very aware that Justin wasn't alone and unprotected. I can't imagine it's Brian intention that Justin will be out of his sight...but we'll see how that goes. 

Haha. That's a good one. I don't know if that would be in Brian's seduction manual, but he's breaking his rules in leaps and bounds with Justin here. 

Thanks for comment, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2020 8:30 am Title: Chapter 6

Icky, yucky, Brandon. A chip off the old block of Sapperstein. I visibly shuddered reading that part of him offering the job to Justin, knowing what his intent was, but then you spelled it out too. I'm so very happy he actually mentioned it to Brian. But on the other hand, I'm surprised he didn't press Brian and want to know exactly how he knew this as fact.

And I'm glad Brian stressed that if Justin screwed up at Kinnetik, he would call him on it... it wouldn't just be overlooked. Because that should go a long way in assuring Justin that the job offer was legit.

When Brian repeated 'First time' - I was surprised it came out 'deep and husky'. I could almost hear a 'high squeak'. LOL

And Molly - hold on. It will be soon.

Gees, I just might get caught up. It's 2:30 (AM) and I was having trouble sleeping, so I thought it'd be a good chance to read another chapter.

Hugs ~Cathy

Author's Response:

Yeah, this storyline definitely parallels with the Sap and his own disgusting plans for Justin. 

As much as Justin really needed this big break, I don't think he would have been okay if the job hadn't been based on what he could contribute to Kinnetik. 

The reunion isn't too far down the road, but some drama to deal with in between. They will get there.

More to come soon. Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

janet

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2020 6:01 pm Title: Chapter 6

It's amazing that Justin is embarking on a better path.  I would love to know how Molly ended up in Chicago.  Can't wait to see when and how you manage to get the twins back together.

Author's Response:

The twins will have a reunion, but it might not happen in any expected way...but everything in time. 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2020 3:26 am Title: Chapter 5

Hurray up and offer him a job, Brian.  It would solve so many problems.

Author's Response:

A job would solve many problems, but I think Brian is hesitant in pushing Justin in the opposite direction. They will get there soon.

Author's Response:

A job would solve many problems, but I think Brian is hesitant in pushing Justin in the opposite direction. They will get there soon.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2020 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

It's my hope that Justin prefers Babylon too.  I'm hoping that Molly and Justin find their way together.

Author's Response:

Molly and Justin are key parts of this story, so that will definitely be visited here. 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2020 9:40 am Title: Chapter 6

Great  chapter.  Glad Brian is protecting Justin from Brandon.  Terrific writing.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Justin definitely needs some protection from sleezy Brandon!

More to come. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2020 12:44 am Title: Chapter 5

I love so much that Brian wants to be his friend, that he sees Justin needs someone, and not just a good fuck.

Author's Response:

Brian is certainly more compassionate in this story than we typically see him, but I think Justin is already worming his way into his heart. :) 

More to come very soon. Thanks so much for the comment.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2020 1:13 am Title: Chapter 4

INVITE HIM IN, DAMN IT!

Author's Response:

I think that's what we all want to happen. We'll see!

Thanks for the comments, Sally. More to come soon...

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2020 12:54 am Title: Chapter 2

The hand tying was SO hot :)

Author's Response:

Haha. Definitely not a standard meet and greet here.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2020 4:14 am Title: Chapter 4

Well, well... I'm guessing the malicious stare belonged to Brandon. And somehow, with Brandon witnessing Justin snugged up to Brian, I bet his life at Boy Toy just became a whole lot worse.

I see we have a predatory Brian again. (you do write him well in that capacity.) Although he does seem to be holding back a little, realizing Justin's vulnerability.

So now we have to wait and see what happens at Justin's door when they need to say goodnight. And will Brandon have followed them home, and witness it?

Hugs, Cathy

Author's Response:

You are probably right about the malicious stare. I guess we could find out soon...

I can't seem to keep predatory Brian out of my writing. I think it's my personal niche. LOL. Although, in this story, Brian is more sensitive than I typically write him...as we will discover as this continues on. 

More to come soon. Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)