[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2021 1:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
I always enjoy reading your stories and am sorry to see this one end. Good job!
Date: Jun 18, 2021 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
Well, I finally got around to this tonight. (Did the corrections too.)
I'm glad Debbie was as accepting as she was of everything, and realized it was Michael's choice.
You ended this well. And the epilogue was the icing, as you caught up on everybody's lives.
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response: Thank you. As Always a great help.
Date: Jun 17, 2021 5:43 am Title: Chapter 6
That was great thanks so much for sharing
Date: Jun 17, 2021 3:29 am Title: Chapter 6
Great story I really enjoyed it thank you so much
Date: May 25, 2021 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ding, Dong, the crazy man is DEAD! Too bad, So sad.
Maybe he was able to fool the old prison psychologist, or maybe something else was going on. Hard to say. Even the craziest of people, can appear normal and sane.
Maybe actually seeing Brian surrounded by babies, sent him over the edge. But the fact that way at the beginning, he plotted with others, stole $100,000 from Brian, you know the guy was nuts.
Looking forward to your epilogue.
HUGS,
Cathy
Date: May 25, 2021 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
WOW! Lindsay really did it, huh? Then the stupid bitch blurts it all out! God, what a she-devil of the worst kind.
I'm glad Justin told Jennifer - NOT YET! She needs to really think and understand just what she did and not expect to just be forgotten because she did one good deed. Trust is earned.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2021 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm so glad the Michael didn't get away with what he planned. Even Debbie thought he shouldn't have been let out of jail.
Date: May 07, 2021 4:20 am Title: Chapter 5
thanks for update
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2021 1:41 am Title: Chapter 5
Now everyone can have their happy life. Lindsay in prison and Michael dead. The children will grow up in peace with four loving parents or co-parents.
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2021 4:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Good question. What will happen with Michael?
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2021 2:44 am Title: Chapter 4
Thanks for the update. Baby names are adorable. I hope Michael goes back to jail, I'm not sure he's following the restrictive order. Can't wait for more !
Date: Mar 15, 2021 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
So glad to see an update...continue to love this story.
Date: Mar 15, 2021 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
So glad to see an update...continue to love this story.
Date: Mar 15, 2021 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ooooo i can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Michael goes back to prison. Brilliant story
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2021 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
Thank you for the update, look forward to more!
Deb L.
Date: Mar 15, 2021 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
This was a good chapter. Jen has apologized, and they all made amends.
New babies came - which is always a joyful occasion. Brendan and Brayden... cute names for twins.
Tsk, tsk, tsk... I don't suppose that Michael could 'accidenatally' get pushed over the railing, and fall to his death when he hits the cement, do you? It would save so much strife for Brian, Justin, and the rest of Liberty Avenue.
But I'm sure you have something evil planned, as I'm sure the restraining order will be laughed at and ripped up. Or will he realize what going back through the gate will cost him a second time?
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2020 4:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love how you got the manipulations turned into jail time. Daphne didn't have to do anything. LOL.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2020 2:54 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow, terrific chapter. Glad to be rid of Lindsay. Fantastic writing.
Date: Oct 23, 2020 8:47 am Title: Chapter 2
Please, please, please can we have an update on this story?
If I bate my breath anymore, I may suffocate!!
Thanks,
Deb L.
Author's Response: I've just about got it done.
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2020 7:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for more Lindsay's nonsense!
Thanks
Deb L.
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2020 2:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hey Darling! I haven't had much time for anything other than RL lately, but I wanted to drop in and see what was going on. And Girlie, am I GLAD I did!!! This chapter was wonderful. I couldn't be happier that Michael is going to jail without collecting even $200 dollars. That little fake ass Millburn Pennybags deserves everything he's going to get; same goes for Brad and Kip! I'm almost sure that with the way Michael's personality is, the courts will certainly be tacking on more time than the eight years he was given. Entitled BRAT!
And speaking of entitled brats, that damn Lindsay... Oh LAWD, HAM TURKEY! I can already see the writing on the wall with that one. No way is she going to straighten up and fly right; I mean she's so good at flying wrong in all her decisions as it is. But I'm looking forward to the rest of the story since I've aways considered her as the Wannabe QUEEN Manipulator. It's going to be more than a little fun to watch what she'll do, and the consequences of not listening when others speak. That is indeed one arrogant trollop! Hopefully, Melanie will find a way to wind back that ultimatum, even if I think she shouldn't have given one to Lindsay in the first place.
Really enjoyed this chapter, and looking forward to MORE!
HUGS AND LOVE,
~Nichelle
P.S. I'm STILL not sure how I feel about Jennifer, even if she did do a good deed in passing along the infomation. I can't see a way that her actions/thoughts could be justified.
Author's Response: That is what I'm pondering. I may let her just have to live with her misdeed.
Date: Oct 05, 2020 6:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
What a scumball that Mikey is... stealing from his 'best friend'... I can understand Kip, and thereby, Brad, for wanting revenge - although they went about it wrong - but not widdle Mikey... plain jealous, that one.
I was SO happy when Debbie up and slapped Michael a good one.
So that leaves us with Lindsay... Lordy, Lordy, what kind of revenge mischief will she get up to? And will she try and use her WASP connections to do it???
God story - keep it up!
Hugs, Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2020 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
Read both chapters. Great story. Fantastic writing. Can't wait to see what Lindsey tries.
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2020 8:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Great you caught Michael! Now you have to watch Lindsay who will no longer have access to Gus' money and who will want to get what she thinks is due. Perfect update.