[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2020 3:02 pm Title: Chapter 14
I should have known you'd have a good reason why Ben wasn't a bad guy. Now I need to find out what's going to happen next.
Author's Response:
Ben definitely had all the right answers. Perhaps too many? Things will start moving quickly now.
Date: Jul 27, 2020 11:26 am Title: Chapter 15
thanks for update
Author's Response:
You are welcome. Thanks for reading. :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2020 10:28 am Title: Chapter 15
Ben's behavior really is weird; does he only do that because he is jealous of Brian?
Thank you for the 2 chapters!
Author's Response:
It does appear that he has a deep jealousy of Brian and his accomplishments. Perhaps he does have some redeeming qualities still. I guess we'll find out.
You are quite welcome. I am trying to get this posted quickly. I have a library of stories to upload here, one at a time.
Thanks so much for commenting. :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2020 10:19 am Title: Chapter 14
I want to believe Ben as well; let's hope it's the right bet!
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's hard to believe Ben is being deceptive, but I guess we'll see.
Date: Jul 27, 2020 2:54 am Title: Chapter 13
Love it
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear it. Thanks for the comment.
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2020 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ben working with Stockwell? Now that was a twist i didn't expect. Stockwell is going to be a deadman with Lindsay close behind.
Author's Response:
I do enjoy some twists and turns, and there are some in this story. We'll have to see how it all plays out. No matter who is involved, we know Brian will find the answers one at a time.
Thanks for commenting. More to come soon.
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2020 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 13
Hot then unexpected cliffhanger!!! The best kind of chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the chapter. I do enjoy a good cliffhanger. We'll see how it's resolved. :)
Thanks for commenting!
Date: Jul 26, 2020 12:37 am Title: Chapter 12
Oh dear Brian's usual laser focus is off kilter because of his desire for Justin and it is going to put them in danger. Brian needs to be on top of his game as he will be fighting to keep Justin Gus and himself safe.
Author's Response:
As far as plans go, I don't think easing his lust to regain his focus is effective in the case of Justin. In other circumstances, perhaps... but not with this adorable blond. Brian is a professional, so I do think he will get his focus fully returned... but only time will tell.
Thanks for reading and commenting. :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2020 2:30 am Title: Chapter 12
Stockwell and Lindsay will not win. Melanie has fucked herself, I'm hoping that Daphne will take care of her and spread the word.
Author's Response:
There is much to resolve here and definitely more surprises to come. In time, it will happen. I wouldn't want to be Brian's adversary here.
Thanks for commenting.
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2020 1:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
What a hot mess! The next night will be epic!
Author's Response:
Yes, they can't be denied any longer - LOL. It should be an interesting evening on various levels. Thanks for your comments. :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2020 6:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
Justin really is conniving in this story and also a big tease!
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2020 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
Darn, you tease us with who is thrown out of Justin's home, then leave us hanging. I do hope that Brian is correct about being able to protect Justin better where they are.
Author's Response:
Despite the big plans Brian and Justin have for the end of the evening, you will begin getting some answers in the next chapter; although, certainly not all.
Thanks for commenting. :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2020 1:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
The pressure is high and Justin is very determined.
Author's Response:
A clash of wills here, each of them used to having things their way. I guess we'll see how that works out. Thanks for reading and your comments. :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2020 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great idea to take Justin in Brian's home! That should get Lindsey in a good mood.
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2020 8:28 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, a bitchy Lindsay is always great to follow. With Mel not far away, there might be fireworks on that side as well.
Author's Response:
Lindsay certainly seems like a handful here. i guess we'll find out. :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2020 8:10 am Title: Chapter 3
Yeah, the fireworks already started!!! Hot mess in preparation! Two hunters in the same room; that should be fun to read.
Author's Response:
Fireworks aplenty here. Lol. Each of them wants to have the last word. We'll see how that plays out.
:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2020 7:48 am Title: Chapter 2
Interesting setup! Who is the lunatic? Ethan? Michael? Happy to read that Daphne and Ben are present.
Author's Response:
So many possibilities at this point. I guess we'll see. I hope you enjoy this story. :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2020 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
That was some nightmare. I wish Brian would read the report on the people who are surrounding Justin. Can't wait to find out the changes.
Author's Response:
I think a nightmare would be likely, and hopefully Justin takes his safety much more seriously now.
More to come. Thanks for commenting. :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2020 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
Looks like the bad guy made a big mistake. He blew up Brian's car. Not a good idea.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I doubt Brian will get over that anytime soon.
More to come. Thanks for your comments!
:)
Date: Jul 21, 2020 6:40 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love this! I thought I knew who was behind it all but now I'm thinking I was wrong. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Haha. A few twists and turns in this story. I hope you enjoy the journey of finding those answers. Thanks for the comment!
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2020 5:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
Now that phone call was ominus. Should the security force have caught the call? Unless a security guy is in on it.
Author's Response:
So many possibilities, but I have no doubt our bodyguard will find all the answers...
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2020 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
I think that while it might be rough, Brian has more control. If it were me I would have Melanie and Lindsay out the door with someone watching their every move.
Author's Response:
I think Brian is more tempted than he's ever been during an assignment... but it's Justin, so I guess he's forgiven. Lol. I think Brian likes to observe and analyze everyone under his radar. We'll see how he handles true suspects as this progresses. :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2020 2:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
I hope Gus goes with them. What is Lindsay's problem and does Melanie know? Both of them could be out of a job. Someone is helping whoever is gunning for Justin.
Author's Response:
Lindsay is definitely being a pain, and could be pushing too many wrong buttons for sure. Yes, there seems to be more than just the watcher involved here. Could be some surprises along the way.
Thanks for reading and your comments.
:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2020 1:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ethan and Lindsay. I guess the old saying keep your enemies close is true. Neither seem really friendly.
Author's Response:
Yes, that's very true. Ethan and Lindsay are probably people to watch. But, they never do seem very trustworthy or nice. Lol.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2020 1:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
If nothing else, Justin will cooperate for the sake of his son.
Author's Response:
As much as Justin doesn't let people tell him how to live, his love for his son is absolute. When push comes to shove, I think he will do the right things.