Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2021 7:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Simple, but to the point. Obviously, to.me anyway, he was pushed off the cliff so much, he had to ask. But of course he said yes. I really liked this.

Reviewer: Bryan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2016 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have, to be honest, I don't like the style in which this story is written, it's almost script-like. But that is just me. I would be interested to see you try a more traditional route.

Author's Response:

This was the only way I could do it and it's done like a phone call lost of people do it 

Reviewer: Saje Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2016 8:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is very good. I am very glad you decided to resubmit after having your story read by a beta.

I use two or three different betas when I work and I could not do it without them. Their input is invaluable to me.

I look forward to more of your one-shots

Saje