[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2020 3:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Love it. Daphne was one of my favorite characters. Wish she had a bigger part in the series, but she was memorable in her scenes. Wonder story and fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2020 9:20 am Title: Chapter 4
Thank you it finally happened! Waiting for the reactions!
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2020 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
This was a wonderful look at what we all wished had happened. Anxiously waiting to find out how you answer your own questions at the end.
Date: Apr 08, 2020 9:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Yay go guys and I wonder if Deb will think this through
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2020 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
The only way Deb will cut the apron strings, is if they are surgically removed!!
Thanks for the new chapter,
Deb L
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2020 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. Finally someone stands up to Deb and her baby boy. Terrific writing.
Date: Apr 07, 2020 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
thanks for update
Date: Apr 07, 2020 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
Good chapter...can’t wait to hear their replies
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2020 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
That attempt at an intervention was surprising quiet considering who Srb, Michael, Lindsay and Mel are I was expecting more fireworks from those four.
So Proud of Ted, Blake, Emmett and Drew standing by Brian and Justin they are the truth and are also not backing down in this fight.
Mel is truly willfully blind to Lindsay's faults and her own but loves putting Brian's on display for everyone to see and gossip about, but would she enjoy it so much of the situation was reversed and everyone turned on her and questioned her actions.
Brian gave up his rights to protect Gus but maybe Lindsay should've gone to prison instead of course Mel would've lost Gus anyway, guess she didn't think of that when she came begging for Brian to help her, though I always wondered if Mel owns the house then all she would've needed to do was call the police to get some strange man out of her home.
Why did she go to Brian for help?
That time she dragged Brian into her and Lindsay's relationship but it was okay because it benefited her right?
Time to look into the the paperwork.
What is Lindsay going to do now that Brian can see right through her?
Is Deb ready to lose everyone to protect Michael?
Is Mel ready to open her eyes to the evil woman Lindsay is?
Do they all really want Jennifer to join this fight? lol
Thanks For the Update 😃
Date: Apr 03, 2020 9:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm confused. I already have this chapter in my library, I've had it for awhile, did I miss something?
bec
Date: Apr 03, 2020 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hi Hun. Not sure what you have updated on this as chapter 3 was already posted? Hope you update with further chapters soon.
Thanks
Deb L
Date: Mar 21, 2020 2:52 am Title: Chapter 3
More please!!
Author's Response: I deleted the chapter. I can’t seem to find what I want to write for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2020 8:53 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm not sure Debbie ends up seeing that her dear Michael is so mean. Brian is done with it and that's great. Well Michael Debbie I hope you will continue with Mel and Linds !! It's a treat to see Brian tell the four truths to his so-called family
Date: Feb 25, 2020 8:26 am Title: Chapter 3
Nope Deb is willfully blind to her sons faults and she has been laying the blame at Brian's door for so long it is almost embedded in her dna.
[Report This]Date: Feb 25, 2020 12:55 am Title: Chapter 3
When even Carl sees it and Deb doesn't that's progress. Deb reminds me of my mother. When she had a chance to move close to me she points out that we mentioned moving to Oklahoma. That was 20 years ago and we are still here in Louisiana. She only sees what she wants to see. Want to read more on this!!!
Date: Feb 24, 2020 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
Thank you for the update. That's the BIG question:
Will Debbie learn from the hard truths Carl laid out to her?
I was going to say that it will be interesting to see how you wrap this up... then I saw it was completed... shame on you!
Maybe you could continue with one-shots in this verse.
Debbie's smackdown to Michael...
Brian's smackdown to Mel and Linds in regards to Gus. - No specific play dates, no money for support.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: CATHY girl, I’m not yet done. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2020 7:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
It Was About Time Brian Stood Up Against Deb And Michael!
She doesn't get to abuse him when he doesn't do as He is ordered to by her the price of meals, band-aids, peroxide, alcohol, gauze, trips to the emergency room was paid eons ago Deb and Michael don't get to keep ripping pounds of flesh out of Brian until there is nothing but bones left just because He is ready to settle down with Justin instead of Michael.
Just because she wants to keep Michael tied to her apron strings until one of them died does not mean Brian has to be dragged down with them.
He doesn't need them in his life if their version of love comes with conditions and rules that Brian is supposed to sacrifice everything to keep Michael happy and Deb free from catering to her son, then to Hell with them and their love he can get that freely from Justin, Gus, Jennifer, Molly, Ted and Emmett without having to lower his IQ or integrity for the scraps Deb chooses to give and Michael expects Brian to beg for.
If Deb doesn't get her head out of Michael's flat Ass she is going to lose Carl Forever because he had Wonderful before he met her and he will have Amazing without her.
I could see this continuing with Brian and Justin standing up against Mel and Lindsay too?
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2020 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Deb won't learn. Michael got his stubborn, entitled attitude from somewhere!
Thanks
Deb L
Date: Feb 24, 2020 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love this... I always hated Michael’s character and Deb is SO overbearing!
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2020 5:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great story. Wonderful writing, Will Deb learn, I doubt it.
Date: Feb 05, 2020 2:47 am Title: Chapter 2
Smack him harder!!!
Love our boys!