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Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2021 9:27 am Title: Chapter 7

I thought Carl talking with Michael was great. And he was the perfect person to do it. He isn't there all the time; he is an outsider, as he is new to the family, but knows the real deal and can explain things to Michael in a way that he can understand.

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2020 4:59 am Title: Chapter 7

 Fab story..... thanks for sharing 

Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2020 8:21 pm Title: Chapter 7

Lindsay's turn? Please

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2020 1:36 am Title: Chapter 7

I have loved this story so much! Definitely my fave of yours so far.  Thanks for finishing it.  Can't wait to see what else you come up with for other stories. LOL

Take care,

Deb L.

Reviewer: BabylonBritinTaykin69 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2020 2:16 pm Title: Chapter 7

Absolutely love this story I want some more of it

Reviewer: Devizes Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2020 11:17 am Title: Chapter 7

wow - what a different ending - i had never thought to come from that angle!!

Loved this story - many thanks for writting it   :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2020 9:24 am Title: Chapter 7

Great ending to a terrific story.  Wonderful writing .

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2020 7:50 am Title: Chapter 7

I find it hard to believe that Michael understands so quickly but hey Ben is coming!

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2020 6:43 am Title: Chapter 7

love it.. stay safe

Reviewer: MissMerlot Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2020 6:36 am Title: Chapter 7

Wonderful - thoroughly enjoyed that

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2020 4:33 am Title: Chapter 7

As long as he doesn't have a relapse things should be better.  At least he's found the man Carl was telling him he would meet if he tried.

Reviewer: Riaaaaa Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2020 1:23 am Title: Chapter 6

Loving this

Reviewer: Peggy Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2020 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 6

Michael in jail, gutta love it!!

Reviewer: BabylonBritinTaykin69 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2020 1:34 am Title: Chapter 6

Please hurry and update I need more of this story 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2020 2:29 pm Title: Chapter 6

Is Deb finally growing up?  Will Michael learn?  Lovely chapter.

Reviewer: BabylonBritinTaykin69 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2020 6:18 am Title: Chapter 6

Love this story can't wait for more

Reviewer: Devizes Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2020 3:31 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hey - another brilliant chapter - loving this - thank you writing from my suggestion  :)

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2020 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 6

Sooooo good to have an update.  Can't wait to see what happens next.  Maybe the 'munchers' should get a shot in the ass too?

Love this!

Thanks

Deb L.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2020 7:39 am Title: Chapter 6

This is everything I have always dreamed of! Michael is finally going to have his lesson.

Reviewer: Auggie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2020 4:10 am Title: Chapter 6

So good to see Michael taken down right at the start. I always wanted a story that starts off like that. Thanks for sharing this.

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2020 3:21 am Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter, love it that Mikey is still getting the SMACKDOWN......Can't wait for more!!

 

 

Liz

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2020 2:13 am Title: Chapter 6

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wonderful chapter.  So happy when Mikey gets what he deserves.  Fantastic writing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2020 1:18 am Title: Chapter 6

Yes....can’t stand whiny boy. Great smack down.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2020 11:36 am Title: Chapter 5

Don't you just love Daph!

Great as ever.  Who is next? Seems like Mel & lindz got of lightly.....

Thanks

Deb L.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2020 3:19 am Title: Chapter 5

Now that's interesting.  Jennifer certainly has changed.  Mikey doesn't know what he's missing.

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