[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 18
Drum rolls!!! How Brian will get this mess straight!
Author's Response: Can he?
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 17
Glad that Brian is starting to see the light! Will Greg come to the hospital or will he stay in bed until Brian gets back?
Author's Response: Brian needs to wake up to what Greg is like, besides being a sex object.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 5:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
Too bad Greg didn't care that much; Brian wouldn't have called Justin if he had come to the hospital.
Author's Response: Greg is an ass.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 15
That was a very bad day for Gus!
Author's Response: Like so many others.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 14
Brian better chose wisely who will remain in Britin.
Author's Response: Let's hope he does choose well.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 13
Glad that Brian told Greg that the master bedroom was off limit. Will it be enough? I don't think so.
Regarding Justin, I understand his reaction; at least Gus will have his phone number.
Author's Response: Justin doesn't want to get drawn into a situation that really isn't his business anymore.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
Whoa!!! Powerful! Kuddos for Mrs Hadley; she got balls! I hope Brian will think with his brain and let his dick rest for a few hours.
Author's Response: Yay! Mrs. Hadley.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
How Brian can be so blind: doesn't he see that Gus is hurting and Greg is awful with Mrs Hadley?
I hope the plot she and Gus are setting up will work.
Author's Response: Something is going to have to change.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 3:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
The situation is starting to change and this isn't good: Gus and Greg are getting antagonized at high speed and Greg is getting Brian's attention with his best asset, which is not his brain. That can lead to only one thing: a clash, a big one.
Author's Response: It seems imminent.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 3:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
Justin back in Pittsburgh: that's great news! Mrs Hadley talking to Brian is also great news; maybe he will be more careful.
Let's hope Gus will be able to get back to school and won't encounter the same issues he had in Toronto.
Author's Response: Schools can be difficult places, especially for new students.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 3:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
It's good for Gus to have Mrs. Hadley who seems genuinely kind and considerate to Gus. He needs to have another adult in his life, one who doesn't know him.
I fear what Gus had to do to get friends. It can't be good.
Author's Response: Not good at all.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ha, Britin is still there and Brian is spending time in front of the painting and the fire in a summer night: there is hope!
Author's Response: You could be right.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 2:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
It's nice to see them getting close and laugh together, but I have the feeling it won't last. Gus is seeing that his father isn't the "monster" he must have heard Mel calling him.
Author's Response: Gus will have to learn who Brian really is.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 2:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
They seem to find some sort of balance and get along quite well. Let's hope that it will last.
Author's Response: Yes, let's hope.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 2:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Whoa!!! Heavy on stress and emotion!
There are some parts that let me think that Gus is not yet on the dark side, but he is pretty close.
What a nightmare!
Thanks to Mel, they were able to put pressure on Gus with a little blackmail.
Author's Response: Gus is still redeemable.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 1:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Melanie really has no shame saying to Brian that he can't put the blame on her; who else is behind all this mess if not Mel? A kid doesn't become secretive without a cause.
Author's Response: Good point.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2019 1:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
I hate Lindsay and Melanie for doing this to Gus and Brian: separate them hoping Gus will stop asking to quit school and go back to Pittburgh. They make a mess and demand help once it's almost too late. What kind of permanent damage is already done? They are totally irresponsible.
Author's Response: They are not the best parents in this story.
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2019 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing and promising beginning! Did Brian found a new "Justin" or a new lawyer who might help for other matters than sex?
Author's Response: Brian has let Justin go, at least for the present.
Date: Apr 30, 2019 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. This is what Gus need.
Author's Response: Hopefully Gus will be in a better place with his father.
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2019 4:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Amazing storylines! I cried and ached for Gus. He was so confused and hurt by how everyone had treated him so far. Brian became the father Justin always told him he could be.
Brian finally grows up! He has to kiss ALOT of frogs to get his prince to return. I loved the adult versions of our beloved duo. Finally they are equals.
Thanks for this terrific tale!
Author's Response: Lovely comments. Thanks so much. I like to think Brian and Justin could live happily ever after.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 33
What a truly wonderful story. You made hating Greg so easy. And, since happy endings are my thing I am really, really happy. Fantastic writing as always.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I got a lot of flak back when I first wrote this story because Brian was with someone else.
Date: Apr 29, 2019 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 33
Lovely story.....I’m glad gus ended up with Brian.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed the story.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2019 10:53 am Title: Chapter 21
Couldn't go on without saying FINALLY !!!!! Wonderful story. Fantastic writing. Off to get to the end.
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start to a new story. Sorry I am just starting to read it, but I got caught up on the WIPS so I could just read it. Can't wait to see where it is going. Fantastic writing as usual. Will probably not review until the end as once I start reading, I don't like to stop.
Author's Response: This story is a bit unusual. Hope you like it.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2019 8:09 am Title: Chapter 33
I like Gus! The wild child has succeeded everything. His life is better with his father than with his mothers. He brought Justin back. He helped Ravi. He's a good kid. I wish him to stay with Brian and Justin. Great story thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting. Gus is a good kid at heart.