Date: Aug 09, 2019 2:51 am Title: Chapter Three
Love it, please update
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2019 7:42 pm Title: Chapter Three
I always love stories were ted plays a big part! TAG
Author's Response:
I'm glad. Some of my favorites have Ted as a prominent fixture as well! Thanks for reading!
LC
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2019 12:13 pm Title: Chapter Three
So Mikey finally showed up. He's the opposite of all things Brian and Ted. I can see him causing trouble.
Author's Response:
Mikey is definitely my least favorite character on the show. I'm not sure if you can tell by how I write him... HAHA. Thanks for reading!!
LC
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2019 10:16 am Title: Chapter Three
It's always great to see a story where Brian and Ted are/become friends. Who would have guessed that Ted would dare saying that “Sort out everything with your girlfriend, Bri?”.
Author's Response:
I've always seen Ted as the kind to come out of his shell given the chance. I like to think that Brian would bring that out of Ted. Snarky!Ted is one of my favoirtes to write. Thanks so much for reading!
LC
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2019 9:55 am Title: Chapter Three
Oh you are good with the cliffhanger. Wonderful update and writing.
Author's Response:
Hehe!! Thank you! I do love a good cliffhanger. When I write them anyway... Not so much when I read them. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Thanks for reading!
LC
Date: May 04, 2019 7:43 am Title: Chapter Three
OMG I can not wait to find out what Ted has found! I like that Ted is Brian's best friend and Brian understands and supports him when the demons can come back. Well Michael is still whiny and selfish. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
The Brian/Ted dynamic is one of my favorites. I think that if Mikey wasn't ever around, they would have realized that they were the ones that were best friends a long time ago. Ted just needed someone to give him a chance. I think Brian is the kind of man that would be the stability for others that he never got from his family. Thanks so much for reading!!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2019 4:23 pm Title: Chapter Two
Yeah, Ben is here too!
The tragic story of the prom revisited is well done and the impact of Michael warm warning is huge: Justin just left without trying to fight.
I really love the way you write and build this story: thank you for sharing your talent with us, mere and avid readers.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I couldn't leave Ben out of this! The prom bashing arc is one of my kryptonites, I write a lot of stuff that centers around it. I just haven't posted them yet! I'm so glad that you are enjoying this!
LC
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I couldn't leave Ben out of this! The prom bashing arc is one of my kryptonites, I write a lot of stuff that centers around it. I just haven't posted them yet! I'm so glad that you are enjoying this!
LC
Date: Apr 26, 2019 7:26 am Title: Chapter Two
Ben is a surprise here! So he taught Justin to be a sniper. He also thinks about Brian even though he continued without him. I can not imagine their meeting but I am sure you will surprise us like this whole story. So original!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love putting Ben in roles that he doesn't usually have. He is such a good father figure to Hunter on the show, I thought he would make a great mentor for Justin. Not necessarily mentor in the sense that Ben helps him be a good person, but he does help Justin be the best sniper he can. I'm happy that you are enjoying this! More to come soon, I promise!
LC
Date: Apr 26, 2019 3:26 am Title: Chapter One
Captivating! I'm hooked!
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2019 9:25 pm Title: Prologue
Promising and very intriguing beginning!
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2019 6:47 am Title: Chapter Two
So, that explains how Justin became a sniper. Didn’t expect Ben here... TAG
Author's Response:
Yep!! Had to throw in that little twist. I love Ben too much to keep him out of my story! thank you for reading!!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2019 1:05 am Title: Chapter Two
Woah! Mr. B is Ben? That's amazing and great at the same time. I am so enjoying this.
Author's Response:
I’m so glad that you are enjoying this!! Thank you so much for reading!!!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2019 1:03 am Title: Chapter Two
FANTASTIC writing. What a shock that it is Ben. I was hooked on this story from the start. You are doing an amazing job.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I am so glad you’re enjoying it!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2019 9:26 pm Title: Chapter Two
Love this look into how Justin began his career. And boy are you sneaky! Ben! I never would have thought Ben was the one helping Justin.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Deb
Author's Response:
It got Kathy too!!! Hehehe. I thought I was rather clever with that twist lol. Thank you so much!
LC
Date: Apr 21, 2019 9:06 pm Title: Chapter One
Good job setting up the mystery elements of the story. But why would Justin have become a sniper? Definitely makes me want to read more. TAG
Author's Response:
I’m thrilled that you think so! Giving me the happy dance stuff. The next chapter should give some light. Thank you for reading!!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2019 8:40 pm Title: Prologue
Very suspenseful start! TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Hope you’ll enjoy the rest!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2019 8:07 pm Title: Chapter One
2 chapters in and I'm already hooked. Eagerly anticipating the continuation of this very different storyline for our beloved QaF characters.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I’m so happy that you like it! More coming soon!!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 7:39 am Title: Chapter One
OMG it is so well written and so exciting! Of course Ocean is Justin the kid that night that haunts Brian but how are they going to find him? I am so excited by this story. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I can’t wait for you to read more. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 2:50 am Title: Chapter One
I can actually see this happening. Ted and Cynthia appear spot on. It would be nice if Emmett was part of the team. Let's face it with his burning bright light who would suspect him. Of course it isn't much to figure who Ocean is. Which makes this that much better. Could someone put a hit out on Mikey?
Author's Response:
I have something in mind for Emmett! Just wait!! Thanks so much for reading!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 12:53 am Title: Chapter One
OMG, This story is wonderful. What a fantastic idea and such great writing. Of course, we know that Ocean has to be Justin, but it will be so much fun when Brian finds him. The sparks will fly. You are an amazing writer. I would rate you even higher than 10 if possible.
Author's Response:
My goodness! Thank you so much! I'm so excited for how this story is going. I really hope you like the rest of the story! Thank you for the kind words.
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 12:11 am Title: Chapter One
Loving this! Wonderful plot and well thought out! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Deb
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I am really glad you are enjoying it so far!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 12:09 am Title: Prologue
Very intriguing! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Deb
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2019 12:51 pm Title: Prologue
Now this is going to be interesting. Thank you for the little tidbit you've given us and I'm sure the next chapter will be wonderful.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading it!!
LC
Date: Apr 15, 2019 8:26 am Title: Prologue
OMG what a start i like it. Happy that you post your story and I want more !!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Ive got the next chapter ready to go!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2019 10:33 pm Title: Prologue
Oh, wow. This is great. Can't wait for the story. Fantastic cliffhanger.
Author's Response:
I’m so glad you liked it! More coming soon!