Date: Jul 30, 2016 11:50 pm Title: Home
Very intense chapter!! I CAN'T WAIT for the next one and definitely not for the talk with Michael. I really wonder what excuses he will give for his unforgivable mistreatment of Justin and interference with Brian's choices.
Glad that Erik returned and maybe even has more insight than Justin is initially willing to share.
As for Maxwell, now that Justin has filed an official complaint, I wonder what the rat-bastard will try to do next. At least Craig did something right, even if it was for the wrong reasons. Between the divorce and the fact that Marissa is alive and well, I don't imagine that he will just go away quietly without making everyone's life hell in the process. Hopefully someone can expedite the divorce proceedings though. That's really the first step to Justin getting free.
Looking forward to more of this fascinating tale! Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Next chapter had him and Mikey but it's not as bad as it will be.
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2016 3:29 pm Title: Dixie
Oooooo - Michael's gonna be in huge trouble! Lol! Thanks for the update. TAG
Author's Response:
Soon. But not too soon.
Date: Jul 12, 2016 9:55 pm Title: Dixie
This chapter was great, only to short I need more. Looking forward to the next one please let Michael get is do.
Author's Response:
Sadly Mikey is not in next chapter but will be the next. I put an extra 1000 words in the next.
Date: Jul 12, 2016 4:32 pm Title: Dixie
OMG you are back. Great chapter and I wonder about Justin's other baby. Hope you can update it soon
Author's Response:
Thank you. Hope you like the next chapter.
Date: Jul 12, 2016 2:23 am Title: Dixie
Love how this is going! I hope Brian devises a detailed plan to give it to Michael in the Kinney fashion we all love. Can the next couple of chapters be longer especially the one with Brian's revenge? Where is baby girl? Please next chapter soon.
Author's Response:
I lengthened the next by 1000 words hope you enjoy.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 11:53 pm Title: Dixie
I can't wait to see Brian blow.
Author's Response:
It's gonna be massive.
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2016 10:07 pm Title: Dixie
Oh now we get to the problem Michael. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you. He us next, sort of.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 9:45 pm Title: Dixie
Hi,
I love this story and I feel really bad for Justin. I know brian would tried to tell Brian he was pregnant. Stupid Michael.This is going to come back and bit Michael. I hope Brian and Justin get really talk. I hope Tommy gets to be with both his daddies. I need more of this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Michael is so in trouble.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 9:04 pm Title: Prologue
Yes! The reunification! I was waiting for that moment, after 5 years apart. And Tommy gets his dad back too! Now to get the baby back...thanks for this story, it's really a pleasure to read.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're liking the story. Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2016 7:34 pm Title: Dixie
I hope Justin sings like a canary!!! Brian deserves to hear the truth of his so called 'Best Friend.' Michael AND Maxwell deserves to feel the wrath of both Justin and Brian. Please don't let him hold NOTHING back including how he ended up in Dixie. My guess is that Maxwell threw Justin into the river to destroy the evidence of what he's done. Michael needs his ass whupped! And for the record so does Erik although I suspect he's also running from Maxwell.
More soon please...Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Michael is so gonna get it. Maxwell will not be such a easy job though. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: Jun 26, 2016 5:55 pm Title: Prologue
Loving this story, please keep going. The boys are adorable.
Author's Response:
I will as soon as they fix my internet.
Date: Jun 05, 2016 3:19 am Title: Presents
Just finished reading chaps. 1 -7 ,love this verse. Some of my favorites are Justin and Brian pgs. You certainly like to give your readers angst. Just hope there is a siver lining in there somewhere. I'm also not a fan of Mikey and our Linz, so love those kind of fics.
Will be looking forward to next udate, thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm working on the new chapter, just having some writer's block with this story.
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2016 5:36 pm Title: Presents
Wow, this story is great, such a new and interesting AU for our favorite boys, I cant wait until the next chapter!! :o)
Author's Response:
Oh thank you. I'm kinda wondering where it's going too. I guess we'll both be surprised.
Date: May 31, 2016 3:12 pm Title: Presents
Oh What lol very cute chapter until the ending looking forward for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you. I know the end was kind of bad.
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2016 4:42 am Title: Presents
Awwwww! That's just no fair! Poor Tommy! Who told evil Michael where to find Justin? Grrrrr! TAG
Author's Response:
Michael found out by Ted. It will be more in the next chapter.
Date: May 31, 2016 12:22 am Title: Presents
Oh that little Fink. I hope you have something extra special that Santa got Mikey, Like a kick in the nuts. Acid in the face? Does his mother know how cruel he can be. Sadly Ted actually left Mikey with Justin and I thought Ted was so smart.
Author's Response:
I always think that Ted would be the last one to ever think Michael could be mean. I remember season one and his shrine.
Date: May 30, 2016 8:01 pm Title: Presents
Why, I can not take any more. That Michael.....
Author's Response:
Sorry. I blame it all on Michael.
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2016 7:55 pm Title: Presents
THAT F**********CKING MICHAEL!!!!!! UGH!!!! Please, please PLEEEEEEASE rescue Justin and hold that damn twerp responsible immediately!!! My anxiety is through the roof again! AAAARRRRRGHHHH!!!! THAT DAMN JEALOUS, INTERFERING BACK-STABBING BASTARD!!! UGH!
Okay, I'm done...well actually No I'm NOT....yep you guessed it, I'm STILL ranting but I'm looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I'm sorry. I'm glad your...well I guess liking isn't the word. LOL. I'll work on the next chapter when I get home from work.
Date: May 30, 2016 7:35 pm Title: Presents
More soon hobbie Micky get just back to brain
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope to work on it tonight. Anti-Michael, I may go a bit overboard.
Date: May 30, 2016 7:19 pm Title: Presents
Worst Christmas ever indeed and there's Michael to make matters worst
Author's Response:
Yep, Mikey is going to make this whole thing worse. Lol.
Date: May 25, 2016 9:44 am Title: Stowaways
AwwI feel for Tommy. Ted broght him to his Pa without knowing it, and Brian has been searching for Justin. I know Brian is going to get the shock of his life seeing Justin again. Tommy is going to beg his daddy to wake Justin up. Is Justin baby ok? Wht dd that Dumb husband do to him?
I'm wondering how Brian is going to get Tommy to come to him now that he has seen his Pa?
I'm really hopping Brain can help him and bring him home. Please more soon
Author's Response:
That is my problem with new chapter. Brian's response and tommys.
Date: May 25, 2016 12:18 am Title: Stowaways
Kinda hard to read when everything is connected no spacing.
Author's Response:
Oh no. When I get home from work I'll fix it.
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2016 12:16 am Title: Stowaways
Prince Brian has arrived! Wake up, Justin! TAG
Author's Response:
Yes he has.
Date: May 24, 2016 9:53 pm Title: Stowaways
So cute that Gus and Tommy were looking for their presents in Ted's car. I'm surprised they stayed so quiet while Ted drove to the care facility.
Will Mr. Keller turn out to be Philip?
Why, oh why, do I think Prince Brian has arrived to awaken Sleeping Beauty?
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A note about the way this chapter displays. The print is really tiny and, if I increase the text size on my tablet or my laptop, I have to scroll back and forth horizontally to read the story.
I didn't have a problem reading since I switched to Reader View, but it was a bit awkward to move between the story and the review box after leaving Reader View.
All the other chapters display fine. I have no idea why this one is different--just thought you'd like to know.
Author's Response:
When I get home from work I'll see if I can fix it.
Date: May 24, 2016 9:41 pm Title: Christmas Eve
Another quick review for this chapter: I forgot to say how much I enjoyed your reference to Ted and Justin's exclusive club, Coma-Sufferers-R-Us. That really set me off laughing. Not funny if I didn't expect Justin to wake up but since I do...still chuckling.
Author's Response:
Thank you.