Date: Sep 26, 2016 3:54 pm Title: The House
Oh my, we all know that Lindsay can be a bitch, sometimes but where do that killing instinct come from? Good chapter.
Author's Response:
THank you.
Date: Sep 26, 2016 3:22 pm Title: The House
W.......T...........F?!?!?!?!?!? Woah! Talk about coming from left field! I LOVE it when you writers do that! Giving us readers big zingers like that. Keeping us on our toes.
Is it Mel? I mean it seems logical and best case scenario, however....Well, I'm just assuming it is.
If so, why knowingly send Emmett over to the house? Wouldn't she figure out the smell of decomp would be moticable? (perhaps she's not smart enough to think of that...)They are assuming that Mel signed the papers, however, that obviously didn't happen. Once it's found she'd dead though, the sale would be able to go through. BUT...what would Lindsey's reasoning be for putting the house back on the market if the papers AREN'T signed. (BTW...I'm just making ideas out loud here. lol)
That is one hell of a cliff hanger!! REally looking forward to what you have in store for us next.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you. Really, i have no idea what I have in store until I write it. Guess that's a little obvious sometimes. LOL>
Date: Sep 26, 2016 4:54 am Title: The House
WHAT IS GOING ON?? I did not see that coming.
Author's Response:
Yay, expect the unexpected.
Date: Sep 26, 2016 12:29 am Title: The House
What did Lindsay do?
Author's Response:
You know now. lol
Date: Sep 26, 2016 12:26 am Title: Baby?
This update is so good, but Justin you need to give Brian the benefit of doubt. Try to find out more about Brian past. I know Brian loves the baby he is pregnant with, but his childhood was rough so he still doesn't know how to express his true emotions. It's easier for him to do with the kids than adults, don't worry Brian wants more.
Author's Response:
Understanding is coming, eventually. Yes, Brian's childhood is going to play a big part in his pregnancy.
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2016 11:22 pm Title: The House
OMG! You pull a cliffy like that on us and leave us there!!! Is it Melanie? Is Lindsay that crazy? Well yes she is, but... A new chapter would be wonderful.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I do love my cliffhangers.
Date: Sep 25, 2016 10:51 pm Title: The House
I knew it! I knew from the statement Lindsay made....she killed Mel
Author's Response:
Yeah, that was a little telling.
Date: Sep 25, 2016 5:00 pm Title: Baby?
Poor Justin, he shouldn't be begging for Brian's love. After all he has been through Brian seems indifferent. Waiting for the next
Author's Response:
Yeah, as much as I loved the canan. I loved the last seasons when Justin wasn't following Brian like a puppy.
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2016 4:52 pm Title: Baby?
Justin really need to let Brian know what he's thinking. Suppose Brian wants Justin and Marissa to move in for more than being a nanny. I love the idea of getting a house where all the kids are together. Great idea. So Ted is having triplets!!! Love it!
Author's Response:
I like the idea of the house. The lofts, both of them were getting a bit crowded. Teddy and his trips.
Date: Sep 20, 2016 2:22 am Title: The Test
Hmmm, Brian had better be going to get stuffed animal or something, otherwise his reaction sucks. I'm happy that even with everything he's been thru just spoke up and asked for respect. I'm also glad that Ted now knows. But mostly sad that Brian is so sad.
Author's Response:
I hope I explained a little better in the new chapter. I didn't go much into detail though.
Date: Sep 19, 2016 6:54 pm Title: The Test
So we all kinda know that Ted was pregnant. Erik will be wonderfully supportive.
WOAH!!!!! Brian too?!?!? Woah!!
LOVED justin's "will". Was giggling throughout that. What a devious little shit he was as a kid.
Good for Justin to go home. For standing up for himself and refuse to "be a doormat" as he said. I get Brian's reaction He's more than likely terrified adn covering it up through anger. What will Brian do though. I mean he's showing himself to be a good father, but to actually be pregnant is an entirely different thing. How will this change the relationshiop between B&J? Will he stay angry at Justin or will he mellow out tonight? Will the boys be freaked out by B&J's arguement?
Hmmmmm. Much to happen in the coming chapter and am so looking forward to what you do with this.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I wanted to lighen up the chapter. I thought the will would be fun. I'm so glad you liked it.I'm glad Justin stood up for himself too. It was fun.
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2016 11:08 am Title: The Test
I actually didn't see that coming. I figured Ted, yes, but thought the other pregnancy was going to be Justin. Nice twist. TAG
Author's Response:
Glad I surprised you.
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2016 3:08 am Title: The Test
Goody. Ted is pregnant. That should make him feel better. Might be twins or triplets all things considered. Brian being pregnant is just right, turn about is fair play. He'll just have to get used to it. <chuckle>
Author's Response:
Yep Teddy is pregnant. Haha love your guess. .
Date: Sep 19, 2016 2:40 am Title: The Test
Hi, I love the update and I'm glad Brian is pregnant. I know Brian doesn't know how to feel and isn't really mad at Justin, but more of himself. I know Brian won't terminate the pregnancy. I'm surprised that Justin left Tommy and Gus with Brian he is right now. Can Justin even handle a pregnant Brian, when right now it seems he can't handle Brian as he is now? Please post more soon!!
Author's Response:
I hope I explained why Justin left the boys. I'm not sure if anyone can handle a pregnant Brian. LOL.
Date: Sep 19, 2016 2:22 am Title: The Test
Hahaha Baby for Brian too funny story better and better can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you're liking it.
Date: Sep 19, 2016 1:13 am Title: The Test
Brian was my next guess....and he damn well better not even think about not having the baby.
Please update again soon
Author's Response:
Sorry it took so long. I hope you enjoy new chapter.
Date: Sep 19, 2016 12:07 am Title: Calling Names
If he mixed the tests up, how can we be sure it's Justin who's pregnant? We all know Ted is definitely preggers but he is versatile too, so maybe Erik is doing the baby walk.
Author's Response:
You are so clever. Yep, they were very mixed up. New Chapter is up and answers all around.
Date: Sep 18, 2016 11:51 pm Title: Calling Names
Oh Justin your pregnant and Brian just heard what you said, that's not good for their relationship. Lindsay hmm wait till Brian gets a hold of you.
Author's Response:
Nope, but its going to hit the fan. Hard.
Date: Sep 18, 2016 3:50 pm Title: Calling Names
Oops... Another baby...Lol Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
New chapter is up but you might not like it.
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2016 2:50 pm Title: Calling Names
Okay now I'm confused. Who used water on theirs? Was it Justin's that showed preg or Ted. Keeping us in suspense are you?
Author's Response:
Oops responded to the wrong one. Ted used water, sorry it.wasn't clear.
Date: Sep 18, 2016 2:46 pm Title: Calling Names
Uh oh . . . Not again! Lol! TAG
Author's Response:
Sorry it wasn't clear. Ted used water because he felt cornered and didn't like them pushing things that were impossible.
Date: Aug 29, 2016 6:55 pm Title: New Beginnings
Please thank your muse, the updates rocked.
Mikey, Mikey, Mikey why attack an officer? And the poor car, that's such a girl move.
I love jealous Brian because it's so cannon. Justin may have said the words but Brian acted the part. And here he is trying to manage Justin and not admit his jealousy. So cute.
Justin seducing Brian, I can see because he finally has access to great sex and Brian.
Ted's having twins... Go Erik... Lol
Author's Response:
Sorry, muse went on vacation for two weeks. Punk. Well, Mikey was having a diva moment. I love jealous Brian too. Sex yay. Teddy Teddy Teddy. What is going on there.
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2016 11:57 am Title: New Beginnings
My goodness. I was wondering if Justin and Brian would ever get together. Brian was so jealous and all for nothing. So know we have Sam in the picture, what does that mean for this story. Can't wait to see what prognosis you come up with for Mikey.
Author's Response:
Oh I hope I'm doing okay with Mikey, a bit is in new chapter but not a lot.
Date: Aug 29, 2016 6:04 am Title: New Beginnings
That was an interesting twist - didn't see them getting back together because Justin threw himself at Brian. Ready for more, please. TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you. I try to make things interesting.
Date: Aug 29, 2016 5:54 am Title: The Date
Hahaha. Brian IS jealous. TAG
Author's Response:
LOL. Yep