Date: May 17, 2016 1:22 am Title: Toyland
I love this story, great job can not wait for Brian to find Justin.
Author's Response:
It's coming but not as soon as some might like.
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2016 12:41 am Title: Toyland
Really enjoying this. I hope Brian can help Justin. Tommy is a doll, though with Brian calling him Sonnyboy and then calling Gus Sonnyboy it must be confusing.
Author's Response:
It was very sad for Tommy to hear that. More about that in chapter five.
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2016 12:02 am Title: Toyland
Such an emotional beginning!! Please, please PLEASE tell me that Maxwell's comeuppance will happen sooner rather than later?! I want to beat the hell out of both him AND Craig! Hopefully, Brian will be able to get Justin out of there or at the very least Jennifer. Somebody...ANYBODY!
Hugs,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Yes, Maxwell and Criag's day is coming.
Date: May 16, 2016 8:02 pm Title: Toyland
I hope the unborn baby is ok and that Justin gets away
Author's Response:
I hope you like the new chapter.
Date: May 13, 2016 1:01 am Title: Mommy Dearest
Enter Protective!Brian. Best thing Justin could have done for Tommy. Just hope Brian will be able to save Justin too! More please. TAG
Author's Response:
I love protective Brian. I agree it's a good place for Tommy. Although it might take a little talking to for Brian to get that memo.
Date: May 12, 2016 9:28 pm Title: Mommy Dearest
I'm in for this ride... Even though it's going to be bumpy
Author's Response:
Thank you. And yes it's going to be very bumpy.
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2016 8:17 pm Title: Mommy Dearest
I'm loving this story line. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm going to start chapter 3 after I clean house.
Date: May 12, 2016 6:14 pm Title: Mommy Dearest
heartbreaking story - but love the unique back story as painful as it is - so much that could happen - can't wait to see where your muse takes this - very intriguing plot line
extremely anxious for more
Charle
Author's Response:
Thank you. I try and be unique hopefully I'll continue to be.
Date: May 12, 2016 3:15 am Title: Prologue
Interesting for a start and i can feel Justin's hurt and sacrifices for his son already..can't wait for B's reaction..good luck for more chapter.
Author's Response:
Sorry I didn't respond before now. Thank you so much for commenting. I hope you continue to like it.
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2016 3:15 am Title: Prologue
Wow. This looks to be a good story. Can't wait to read your next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm so glad people like it.
Date: May 11, 2016 8:02 pm Title: Prologue
Wow - this one promises to be full of angst. Great start though. Looking forward to more. TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you. I love angst so it'll have quite a bit.