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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2019 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 21- Reconnecting

How many time will Justin say he is sorry again? He should know that Brian doesn't like this word and that the past can't be changed? What can Brian do to get Justin back to his assertive young self? Maybe Daphne could help?



Author's Response:

Justin has to forgive himself first and he has to accept that the stalker will not impact Brian.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2019 3:52 am Title: Chapter 20-Intervention

Great to read that John's friends are on their way to Pittsburgh. They will help sorting things out.



Author's Response:

John does have good friends.  Hopefully, they will be able to help.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2019 3:30 am Title: Chapter 19- Aftermath

If Justin wanted some peace of mind, it's certainly not for today!



Author's Response:

Justin wants a calm life.  

Reviewer: Conangel99 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2019 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 24- A Visit with The Doctor

Still reading and enjoying, even a couple days behind.



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Lorna Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2019 8:56 am Title: Chapter 24- A Visit with The Doctor

Yes I’m still reading your story and would like s it finish. I’ve been enjoying it very much. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know.  A new chapter has been posted.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2019 12:28 am Title: Chapter 24- A Visit with The Doctor

Love your story, just found it today.  Please do not stop writing it



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you are enjoying it.  I was not reaching for comments, but just wanted to be sure that folks were interesed.

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2019 11:35 am Title: Chapter 24- A Visit with The Doctor

Still reading but kinda wait for more than one upload to read. I don't like waiting a lot 



Author's Response:

I understand.  I am trying to post twice a week but RL has gotten in the way.  I will endeavor to post more regularly.

Reviewer: Juditka Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2019 8:39 am Title: Chapter 24- A Visit with The Doctor

Yes of course. I love this story, look forward to the sequel.    



Author's Response:

The sequel is very interesting-  hope you enjoy both stories

Reviewer: Mariana Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2019 5:18 am Title: Chapter 24- A Visit with The Doctor

Yes of course I'm reading this story and enjoy it very much.

Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know-  just wasn't sure anyone was still reading.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2019 1:45 am Title: Chapter 1- The Stripper

still reading - and anxious to see how this all plays out

great story! - thanks



Author's Response:

thanks-  just wanted to make sure folks are still reading.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2019 2:30 pm Title: Chapter 18- A New Employee At Kinnetik

I hope John won't have any possibility to get away with his stalking.



Author's Response:

The courts can be fickle.  How many times have people read about the perp getting away with the crime?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2019 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 17-Family Talks

Daphne is a great analyst and an amazing friend; she made Justin really think about his need to have a child and this is right on point: "Did he really want a child or was that a happy thing that could be in his life instead of dealing with all the shit that was happening?"!

Debbie can be so blunt: "Good thing your stripping days are over, Sunshine. Eating like that could result in a few pounds".

Excellent chapter! It's good to not have the stalker lurking around or spying.



Author's Response:

Debbie has always been blunt, but sometimes she is right on target.  Daphne is always on to Justin and I think she really is on target.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2019 8:56 am Title: Chapter 16- Its a Great Day To Be Back In Pittsburgh

I wouldn't bet on a day ending good if John is the last interview.



Author's Response:

I agree.  John's interview could be very bad.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2019 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 15- A Baby in the Family

Very dark and moody chapter. Justin is spiralling towards a mild depression. Brian is patient, but not that much.



Author's Response:

Brian is getting a little perturbed with Justin's queening out.  He will need to help Justin see that he is supportive no matter what happens.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2019 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 14- Dreams of Family

Tough situation: at least Justin told Brian what was bothering him. They should discuss about the possibility to have a child together; I don't think they ever discussed this seriously. If Brian doesn't want one more kid, it will be a clear indication for Justin.



Author's Response:

Having a child is a big decision and one they really need to talk about together. Right now, they have to concentrate on the stalker and helping Justin.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2019 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 13- Dinner at 8

With two friends already having doubts, John should have less latitude to make a move on Justin.

This quote could be funny if it wasn't a sign a great delusion "Hopefully, he would be able to meet "this Brian guy" and make him realize that he was Justin's true partner."

I'm worried for Brian as he will not remain calm if he ever hear that.



Author's Response:

A person who is a stalker can outmaneuver even well meaning friends.  John is very delusional.   Thank you again for your continued reading and comments.  It is greatly appreciated.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2019 9:18 pm Title: Chapter 12- Conversations

First good thing is the call with Tim is done and he might have convinced Justin that it's best to prevent than to make damage control.

I hope Mel will manage this news the best way possible.

Bad thing is the interview for the art department; I have the feeling the creep is going to be there. If Brian is present and the guy uses his actual name, things could escalate badly.



Author's Response:

Tim wants to help Justin and I think he will do what he can to assist him.   The interview may be problematic but I'm not giving away any secrets.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2019 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 11- It's Good To Have a Therapist In The Family

I hope Michael will be able to "read" John and to see what is wrong, otherwise, Peter will be all alone.



Author's Response:

Michael's friendship with John will hopefully go a long way toward intervention.  Otherwise, there may be a lot of distraught people.  Hopefully, he can succeed.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2019 6:18 pm Title: Chapter 10- The Morning After

Exposure might help, but Justin will have to deal with the gang's comments, which could be hard to handle.



Author's Response:

Brian will always be there to support him. If it gets too hard, Brian will just take Justin and leave.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2019 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 9- A Visit To The Gallery

Very good move from Peter, and then Carol. I fear howJohn will react when Peter will ask him to clarify how his boyfriend is partner with someone else for so long and still in love with him, based on the paintings in the Carol's gallery.



Author's Response:

John is not living in reality so his answer may not make a lot of sense.  I'm glad Peter went to the gallery and talked to Carol.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2019 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 8- Confrontations

I hope Peter will try to find more about Justin and will discover that he is not single. How will John react if Peter tries to confront him again about that?



Author's Response:

This story has a lot of layers and things unfold slowly.  Peter is a good friend and really wants to support John, but he is starting to have his suspicions.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2019 3:58 pm Title: Chapter 7

Cold shower after hot and fulfilling moment. What does Carol want to talk about?



Author's Response:

Carol cares about her artists.  She watches out for them.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2019 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 6- Asking for Help

At least, the cat is out of the bag and more key people are aware of the issue.

Next question: will Brian detect the intruder if he comes for an interview?



Author's Response:

Now they have to figure out where to go and who to tell.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2019 4:27 am Title: Chapter 5- Deceptions

I hope Brian won't hire him, but it might spice the story.



Author's Response:

The guy is seriously creepy and I hope Brian sees through his facade.  Thank you for your continued support and comments on the story.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2019 4:28 am Title: Chapter 4-Decisions

Now Brian knows; things should move forward as Brian might contact the cops.



Author's Response:

Brian is probably really freaking out.

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