Date: Dec 31, 2022 6:35 am Title: Chapter 11
This was a great story, from start to finish!! I'm so glad that they were able to get Gus back safe and sound. I can't wait to read the sequel!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. So pleased you liked it.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 7:32 am Title: Chapter 11
The sweet reunion made me cry...such a awesome story...thanks.
Banner is simple but very effecting..suiting.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for your lovely comments.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 7:21 am Title: Chapter 9
Mel should give back her rights when gus is back..she clearly does not think gus is her own son.
Author's Response: She certainly doesn't act like she thinks of him as her own son.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 6:45 am Title: Chapter 5
This is a awesome story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 6:39 am Title: Chapter 4
I think i was little bit right..mel's case have something to do with gus's kidnapping..mafia is dengerous they dont play by the law.
Author's Response: Exactly.
Date: Feb 16, 2019 6:32 am Title: Chapter 3
Brian is not the only one who have enemies ..mel too can have ...maybe someone from her work did this..she is a lawyer maybe someone wants her to back off from some case..lets see who is the real culprit.
Author's Response: Soon to be revealed.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 6:19 am Title: Chapter 2
Poor brian ..he is hurting the most.
Author's Response: Yes, he is.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 5:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Like the plot..great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: Jan 14, 2019 2:54 am Title: Chapter 11
good one. Darn Mel
Author's Response: Thanks, she can be a pain.
Date: Jan 06, 2019 3:07 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow, what a powerful chapter. So well written. I just knew you would give us a happy ending. On a personal note, my 28 year old niece was abducted a year and a half ago. We did not get a happy ending, but at least her parents and our family got closure. Unfortunately RL does happen.
Author's Response: OMG, I'm so sorry to hear about your niece.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 5:02 pm Title: Chapter 11
Darn. I'm glad to see this end with Gus back, but I would like to find out why Gus needed Jus-Bear to remember his mommy and dad and find out what he'd been told. Fantastic story that had me on the edge of my seat.
Author's Response: Thanks so much - glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
I've heard that children learn foreign languages fast. Is it really Gus?
Author's Response: Good point.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 9
Time to take back his rights. Hopefully Mel won't go to the Garonis and warn them. Using JR as a reason not to go sucks.
Author's Response: Let's hope Brian can get back his rights.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
I like this detective. I like that Justin and Brian haven't fallen out. I didn't like how Deb showed up and the first thing out of her mouth was were is the asshole. I hope this works.
Author's Response: Deb isn't understanding when she's riled up.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love how you use Carl to give hope. I wonder what Mysterious Marilyn would come up with?
Author's Response: Thanks, Carl is a cop.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 6
I guess I'm not use to an understanding Lindsay. Now kidnapping Gus kind of makes sense, a son for a son. But what if they'd taken JR. Michael in drama scene mode. Debbie screeching her head off. Would Brian be sympathetic? Maybe another storyline to be considered?
Author's Response: LOL That would be interesting.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 4:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh dear. Did Melanie try to lose the case only it didn't work. Couldn't she have gone to the judge?
Author's Response: Who knows.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yahoo. I'm so worried about what Mel plans. Why she couldn't just come out and tell them is beyond me.
Author's Response: That would be too easy.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aha! This is all Melanie's fault. Her and her big court case. At least that's what I'm hoping. Deb was out of line instead of being supportive.
Author's Response: You may be right.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hmmm, shame there were no camera's in the area.
Author's Response: Yes.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 3:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Who would kidnap Gus!
Author's Response: Good question.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 9:33 am Title: Chapter 11
It's a stressful story and Mel is a real bitch here. Brian must recover his rights. Mel is not a mother for Gus Thank you for this great story.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. I agree with them all.
Date: Jan 03, 2019 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yeah! They did it! Thanks to the bear. That must have been awful to see Gus like this.
It's great that Brian wants to get his rights back.
Great story! Stressful, but very unusual.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it's originality.
Date: Jan 03, 2019 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 10
Stressful!!!
Author's Response: Yes.
Date: Jan 03, 2019 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'm like Brian: I have never hated Mel more than in this story! I hope Brian will fight to get his rights back: Mel doesn't deserve to be Gus' mother.
I'm wondering how the mob will react when Gus will be back; they could take him away again and keep him hidden somewhere else. That's a risky move.
Author's Response: The whole situation is risky.