[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2018 1:30 am Title: The Big Q
Glad that Justin got Mika back, but I'm worried about the phone call he received. Brian does well with 3 boys and it looks like he's going to have a change with a 4th. Not to mention a little girl.
Author's Response:
LOL, it is a lot of kids. But Brian is the old pro by now, of course a little girl might be a big change. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Oct 15, 2018 11:29 pm Title: The Big Q
Not surprised Ethan was having an affair he would've saw it as Out Of State So It Doesn't Count <eye roll>
Tara sounds just as selfish as Ethan makes me wonder why she wants Nina but not Nanette?
Brian was brave to take on raising three boys but he was always up for a challenge ;)
Think Justin should fight for Mika I don't trust Tara or the agent something just seems off with Ethan dying in an elevator he was afraid to ride?
Superb Update:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I hope more is clear with the reasons for why some people do things in the coming chapters.
Date: Oct 15, 2018 7:43 pm Title: The Big Q
Great chapter. Love this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: Oct 15, 2018 7:41 am Title: Pegleg Lou
Great start, I am hooked already. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm so glad you like it.
Date: Oct 15, 2018 4:11 am Title: Pegleg Lou
Very interesting and different. The pirate theme was kind of funny .
Author's Response:
Thank you. I thought it would be funny.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2018 9:26 pm Title: Pegleg Lou
Interesting dynamics. Brian in charge of 3 boys, I love. Justin with 2 kids? Let's hope that Brian is able to help.
Author's Response:
It is a interesting thing. That's a lot of children, 3 older and 2 younger.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2018 5:04 pm Title: Pegleg Lou
Ok You Got Me Hooked So Reel Me In With More lol :)
Author's Response:
LOL, I'm so glad I got you hooked. Thank you.
Date: Oct 14, 2018 4:44 pm Title: Pegleg Lou
Interesting premise all around. Can't wait to see where this all goes. More please soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm hoping the chapters keep coming to me so easily as the first two.
Date: Oct 14, 2018 4:09 pm Title: Pegleg Lou
Yippee, something different. I'm in. Are you going to post on A03 as well?
Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Should I post on A03?
Date: Oct 14, 2018 3:42 pm Title: Pegleg Lou
Wow, great first chapter and what a different plot idea. Love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: Oct 14, 2018 3:29 pm Title: Pegleg Lou
Welcome to KD. Loved the start to this story so far. I can’t imagine Brian in a pirate restaurant, lol. TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you. I have had the idea for so long and finally wrote it down.