[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2018 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 6 - 41/29 aka The Haunting
How appropriate considering it's October.
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 5 - 40/28
I'm suspecting that they did that before the visit which caused the high blood pressure. I know mine was elevated from reading this.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 19 - 65/53
Brian can get moody sometimes. Bad habits die hard.
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 4 - 37/25
Justin always gets his way, just not the way he expects to.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:43 pm Title: Chapter 18 - 63/51
How did Brian handled 60? For someone who doesn't do jealousy, Brian can still act like he is afraid Justin could leave him for a younger stud.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 17 - 54/42
I just realized that they are living at the loft; did they keep Britin?
Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:18 pm Title: Chapter 16 - 53/41
Another hilarious chapter!
I loved all what you have written, but these are my favorite:
"You're softer."
"My dick is as hard as ever."
"I was always pleasant."
"Sure you were, for an asshole, pleasant as a basket of angry cobras. Brian, come with me, we can have fun."
"Brian, I like your hair cut."
"Oh that's reassuring, coming from my fashion senseless twink. I'm doomed."
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:13 pm Title: Chapter 3 - 36/24 Pt. 2
German food! My stomach is growling. Interesting look at painters through Brian's eyes in Justin's art.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:09 pm Title: Chapter 15 - 52/40
"Fleetwood Mac."
"Who? Never mind. Any of them still alive?"
If Brian didn't feel old, it might give him a clue. [Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:08 pm Title: Chapter 2 - 36/24
Brian being loving and considerate. Amazing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 - 34/22
Interesting discussion. They know their priorities.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 14 - 50/38
Hilarious!!! This banter is delightful, even if the subject is very touchy for Brian. I loved this chapter.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 13 - 49/37
You got me worried here! Justin should have given the letter at that time; maybe Brian would have consider it. It couldn't have made things worse than they were.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 2:27 pm Title: Chapter 12 - 48/36
48? That's close to 50: if the reaction is on the same level as for 30 that will be difficult for Justin.
Date: Oct 05, 2018 2:17 pm Title: Chapter 11 - 46/34
What is happening with Jennifer?
Date: Oct 04, 2018 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 24 - 86/74
Wow, this was beyond amazing. Going thru the years like that was such a terrific idea. You really had me in the chapter where Justin was the one that cheated. And, have had the tissue box out for the last few. Knew what was coming and couldn't stop the tears. Hope you realize how fantastic your writing is. I look forward to each of your stories. Thank you so much.
Date: Oct 04, 2018 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 10 - 45/33
What a declaration! Beautiful!
Date: Oct 04, 2018 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 9 - 44/32 1/2
Brian and a bear: that's quite a tale! Justin topping a bear must have been interesting to witness!
Date: Oct 04, 2018 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 8 - 44/32
The vows with swearing over Armani suits and cargo pants and grey hoodie: that's romantic!
Hard beginning! Plausible and stupid misstep, and not the first one. I thought it was Brian who did it, yet I was wrong.
Date: Oct 04, 2018 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 7 - 42/30
Hilarious!!! The last line: I could imagine Justin singing while topping Brian; that must have been difficult for Brian not to fight his enthusiasm.
Date: Oct 04, 2018 6:18 pm Title: Chapter 6 - 41/29 aka The Haunting
11 years later and Brian is still "dreaming" about the bat: that's very unfortunate.
Ian, his parents are not good either.
The tricks? It's like counting the sheep, he will go back to sleep just by trying to count how many he could have had.
Date: Oct 04, 2018 5:45 pm Title: Chapter 5 - 40/28
Ha ha ha, Brian and his glasses! I bet Justin is horny as hell imagining Brian like that.
The beginning is quite bad if Brian actually has health problems.
I love this quote: "Shit, glasses, what else. Does Armani do frames?"
Date: Oct 04, 2018 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 4 - 37/25
Justin can be obtuse sometimes and Brian, who doesn't jealousy, does it quite fabulously.
Date: Oct 04, 2018 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 3 - 36/24 Pt. 2
It's a great idea to have Justin draw Brian while he is looking at famous paintings and showing their effect on him.
Date: Oct 03, 2018 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 2 - 36/24
Excellent! They are so much better without external input.
Just one thing I don't see Brian do: calling Justin "baby"; too much like Emmett would do.