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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2020 8:06 pm Title: Finding Justin

love it

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2020 10:21 am Title: Finding Justin

Read all the chapters.  I love this story.  So different and really great writing.  Please contnue it and any others.  You write and I will definitely read.  Hope you are well during these difficult times we are facing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 12:41 am Title: Finding Justin

LOL.  It's nice that Craig wants Justin and even better that Justin figures out that Brian is James father.  Now I know why Brian said he had two sons.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 12:35 am Title: Chapter 4: A chance of Meeting

Love the way you brought Ben and Hunter into the story.  Lindsay will lose the baby once Brian finds out he is the father.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 12:31 am Title: Chapter 3: 6 months ago

Yay!  This brings them together.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 12:29 am Title: Chapter 2: Justin

Good thing you left open who James father could be.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 12:24 am Title: Chapter 1: Brian

Poor Melanie.  It's already too late.  I'd still like to know why they weren't at the funeral.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2020 5:00 pm Title: Finding Justin

The ears are working just fine Mr. Kinney you have another child.

Looks like Lindsay is going to be all along after all.

Justin is back with his family and friends with his on James.

Totally Hooked Now lol

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2020 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: Brian

Lindsay is beyond pathetic though I wonder since Brian has his place clean who's baby is she actually caring?

What if Brian had multiple partners the night before when they started while Brian watched before he joined in?

So Many Scenarios

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2018 9:46 pm Title: Chapter 4: A chance of Meeting

Three hours in an airport bathroom having sex and Brian doesn't remember what the guy looks like?

Mikey is with Dr. Dave which leaves Ben and Hunter to become friends, or more, with Justin and James.

Why would Brian want full custody?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2018 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 4: A chance of Meeting

Hope you continue this one soon.  Cause I can't wait to find out how Ben is going to fit into this story.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 5:40 am Title: Chapter 3: 6 months ago

Oh boy. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 5:38 am Title: Chapter 2: Justin

Oh Justin.

Bathroom fuck at the airport has Brian Kinney all over it. Now how to get those two together.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 5:31 am Title: Chapter 1: Brian

So Lindsay's true self is coming to light. Anyone surprised? Sneaking into the loft while Brian was out of town and steal his sperm is despicable.

Yeah Mel, get out while you can. Brian, change the damn locks already.

Reviewer: Qaf_Freak Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 3:55 am Title: Chapter 3: 6 months ago

Would love to see where this goes

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 1:19 am Title: Chapter 3: 6 months ago

Oh my goodness.  Shame Justin missed his flight.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 12:05 am Title: Chapter 3: 6 months ago

Oh this is good.  Homework first, writing second.  We will wait for your updates.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2018 1:16 pm Title: Chapter 2: Justin

Very interesting.  Justin was 6 months pregnant so the guy in the airport has to be the daddy.  Do I get to guess who that was? If it's who I think this is going to be good.



Author's Response:

There is a possibility that you are correct .

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2018 1:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Brian

I like the way this is going.  Sorry we won't have Deb and Vic, but that's life.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2018 3:26 am Title: Chapter 2: Justin

Oh, wow, this is really a different look at our "boys" .  Love it.  Hope you continue to write since you were questioning if you would.  Your writing is really good so please don't give up on it.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2018 3:21 am Title: Chapter 1: Brian

Great first chapter.  Glad it posted.  Moving on to chapter 2.

Reviewer: Resa13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2018 3:12 am Title: Chapter 2: Justin

I'm intrigued so far! Please keep going

Reviewer: bec2224 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2018 2:31 am Title: Chapter 1: Brian

I find this a bit light on plot, I like  little more plot in my stories. :-)



Author's Response:

didnt realize my chapter was missing until now and that summary is temporary

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2018 2:04 am Title: Chapter 1: Brian

That was short.  haha.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2018 12:32 am Title: Chapter 1: Brian

Is there suppose to be a chapter here?



Author's Response:

The chapter is there now

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