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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2018 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 8 - The One Where Justin Does Good Work

It must be awful to see a young artist struggling with his hand and having to downplay his life and work.

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Date: Dec 22, 2018 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The One Where Justin Forgets He's Married

Brian and Justin's relationship is so complex, deep and "hidden" that most of external people couldn't get it.

I love the way you describe their life.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2018 4:58 pm Title: Chapter 5- The One Where Emmett Doesn't Babysit

 Poor Sunshine, those nightmares seem really horrible. But, yay, Emmett! TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2018 4:18 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The One Where Cynthia Tags Along

Will Justin's condition evolve more than it already has? Isn't there anything that could be done?

I love Cynthia's POV on their relationship and on Brian.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2018 2:25 pm Title: Chapter 5- The One Where Emmett Doesn't Babysit

Emmett is a great guy, always thinking ahead of his friends' needs. He also doesn't let Brian go with his BS and consider Justin like his little brother. Maybe he finally got Brian and Justin to see that the bashing was not over yet and that they needed to talk about this event.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2018 1:01 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The One Where Daphne Comes to Visit

Justin should be more careful like Brian says.

It seems Brian and Daphne tricked him about NY! I guess he needed to see that he could make it on his own.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2018 11:02 am Title: Chapter 3 - The One Where Justin Gets Sick

Excellent, especially the end!

Brian really is patient and attentive.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2018 10:31 am Title: Chapter 4 - The One Where Daphne Comes to Visit

 Oh, Brian is so sneaky!  So I guess it’s off to New York City for the two of them? TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 12:50 am Title: Chapter 3 - The One Where Justin Gets Sick

Great chapter - good to hear from Justin’s POV. All things considered, I think he adjusted better than you’d expect. No doubt Brian’s support was the key. TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2018 4:31 am Title: Chapter 1 - The One Where Justin Loses His Hearing

Beautiful story and so well written! The tittle makes me think about Friends.

I'm wondering if this is an actual disease or all made up.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2018 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The One Where Brian Learns Sign Language

You got Brian‘s ‘voice’ just right here. I’m so proud of how mature he’s become. Go, Brian! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2018 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The One Where Justin Loses His Hearing

Heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time. Great writing. Thank you for writing. TAG

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2018 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The One Where Brian and Justin Take Manhattan

Looking for update.  Thanks

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2018 6:02 am Title: Chapter 4 - The One Where Daphne Comes to Visit

Hahaha! It was all a big set up! Brian is brilliant! Love it. TAG

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Date: Nov 02, 2018 12:18 am Title: Chapter 3 - The One Where Justin Gets Sick

Very much IC for Justin.  I really can see him being happy to have found this little niche in the world, the deaf community. He’s just the kind of guy who would always be optimistic about anything even if the rest of the world can’t see why. And as always, your insight into Brian’s MO is spot on. Just loving this story so much. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2018 8:08 am Title: Chapter 2 - The One Where Brian Learns Sign Language

That really was perfect - the way you got into Brian’s head and laid bare all his insecurities while still maintaining the Brian-ness of his character. Just fantastic. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2018 7:23 am Title: Chapter 1 - The One Where Justin Loses His Hearing

Wow! This is amazing. Such touching writing. And I even enjoyed hearing it told in Michael’s POV, which was kind of a surprise. So glad you’re letting us post this series here on KD. TAG

Reviewer: dchewey Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 5:14 am Title: Chapter 2 - The One Where Brian Learns Sign Language

omg i love this story

*sniffles*

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2018 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 9 - The One Where Brian Meets Justin's Brother

Catching up on this tonight, can't wait!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2018 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The One Where Daphne Comes to Visit

So Brian had it all planned out to work this way.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The One Where Justin Gets Sick

Justin's take on things are interesting.  Especially how he see Brian.  He better know how lucky he is that he's not alone in this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2018 4:27 am Title: Chapter 2 - The One Where Brian Learns Sign Language

This is Brian the way we know him.  He might be an asshole, but he's hooked on his Sunshine.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2018 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The One Where Justin Loses His Hearing

Welcome to Kinnetik Dreams and thank you again for letting us post your stories here. I've heard so many great comments about this story. I can't wait to start reading it! TAG

Reviewer: Cricri Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2018 2:12 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The One Where Justin Loses His Hearing

Trop, bien merci

Reviewer: Saje Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2018 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1 - The One Where Justin Loses His Hearing

OMG! I am SO glad you're here! Welcome! Welcome!

I am completely addicted to your universe and entirely unapologetic about it.

Keep up the good work.

Saje

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