[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2019 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
How rude of Mikey to enter Brian's loft without permission and snoop. it's good that Melanie knows.
Date: Jan 14, 2019 4:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Reading it again. Hate Lindsey
Date: Sep 04, 2018 1:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love how they met and that they were together so long before interference from Pittsburg... how sad that he had to keep his life secret from his "family" though... although it's only 2 people who are the problem :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2018 11:49 am Title: Chapter 1
You've hit the nail on the head with this one. I like how Gus was the one to name Britin and that Jenny knew before anyone in the Pitts.
Date: Aug 22, 2018 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
really loving your series!
Date: Aug 22, 2018 2:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Merci beaucoup pour ton histoire, j'attends avec impatience la suivante.
Amities
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2018 8:59 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad you're writing a sequel to Consequence. It's good that Mélanie Gus and Jenny are happy for Brian and Justin because the 2 best friends will not like it at all !!! I also like you post the rest of the story when it's complete. Take good care of yourself we can wait for the continuation of this wonderful story
Date: Aug 22, 2018 7:36 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really nice , the backstory adds a whole new level.
Date: Aug 22, 2018 7:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Hope you are feeling well. I like the story, waiting for the muti chapter story to come. I have startinf reading only muti chapter stories that are compled, so many are never completed. So hearing you are waiting til compleat it is great.
lah
Date: Aug 22, 2018 1:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyed this and very glad to see that you are continuing with the storyline you started with Consequences! I love individual one-shots that flow from one to another creating an easy to follow series.
Take care and hope you continue to get better!
*HUGS*
Deb
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2018 12:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Brian is seeing himself as more than the butt of 'The Family's' jokes, rancor, censor, envy and personal ATM thanks to Justin, his family and friends.
Never liked when they looked down their noses at Brian's actions but ran to him to solve their problems and also blaming him everything.
Michael and Lindsay may cause trouble but I would be more afraid about Justin's reactions when they go after Brian, cause with or without help Justin will destroy them and smile his Sunshine Smile while doing it.
Deb is going to take Michael's side and I hope Justin puts her in her place, never liked the way she verbally abused Brian and blamed him for Michael never growing up.
Oooo I look forward to the journey you will take us on.
Take of you first :)
Date: Aug 21, 2018 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Now that Brian has moved back into the area with his husband and in-laws to follow all hell is going to break loose.
All because Michael had to snoop and find out he isn't #1 in Brian's life. Bring on the chapters.
Date: Aug 21, 2018 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey Sandy Darling! I absolutely LOVE this! I'm so happy to see you are continuing with this storyline. If I may make a small suggestion though: As opposed to treating us to a multi-chapter story (which are always good and welcome), you as the author also have the option to split that novel-in-making into a series of one shots, much like these last two. When read in order, it will have the same effect as reading the whole story at once. But in the meantime, it will also take the pressure off of you where you may feel the need to produce, but your body won't let you at the pace you want to set for yourself. Believe me when I tell you that I know that feeling VERY well!
Ironically, if picked apart, the "Just Kiss Me" story done by Kathleen (7wildwaysup) reads exactly like a series of one-shots, even though it's set within a multi-chapter fic. Most-if not all- of the chapters actually close out the scene, instead of leaving cliffhangers at the end of it. The only difference is that yours will be posted much like "The Consequences of Snooping" has already started out. It's just another alternative for you to consider, so there's no pressure at all.
I sincerely hope that you feel better. Migraines are the bane of my existence, too. I often compare them to a child in the 'terrible two stage' where they are constantly throwing tantrums and screeching at the top of their lungs (or did I just describe Michael? LOL)...only they seem to never end no matter how much you try to appease them for a few moments of peace. I really hope that you will be able to get off the merry-go-round of pain soon!
Well Wishes and Many HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 21, 2018 4:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story. Glad to hear you are writing more, but more importantly hope that you are doing ok. I continue to keep you in my prayers. Will wait patiently for the completed story.
Date: Aug 21, 2018 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was happy to see you decided on a sequel. Your original fic was good. I'm glad you followed that plot bunny. I love a good anti-Michael and anti-Lindsay fic, but I don't like the perpetrators to get of easily. (Just a hint) Looking forward to your next chapter...