[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2019 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's amazing how Mikey expects to know everything about his 'best friend' and feels that he should make decisions for him when he never tried to be a friend at all.
Date: Feb 01, 2019 1:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Started thinking about this series the other day, and thought I'd come revisit it. Do you think you will pick it up again? Still waiting to find out what happens when Lindsay and Michael contact Cody.
This was so very good!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jan 14, 2019 4:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Just love it. Reading it again
Date: Sep 04, 2018 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes! I love this... and I see there are follow up stories which makes me VERY happy!
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2018 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1
This reads like a prologue to a fantastic story, you already have me curious as to the mystery of their meeting, the wedding and of course Michael's and Lindsay's dreams (delusions) crashing down at their feet. More please :-)
Date: Aug 12, 2018 12:12 am Title: Chapter 1
LOVE IT! You really should make it a longer story!
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2018 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I Agree with everyone else you gotta expand this and tell us how Michael and Lindsay lost everyone, plus how Brian and Justin met, fell in love and got married.
Plus Ben finding out he is nothing but a placeholder for Michael's stupid Never Gonna Happen Fantasy.
And how Mel finally realized that Brian wasn't trying to ruin her relationship with Lindsay but just wanted to spend time with his son.
Now you got me hooked reel me in!!! lol ;)
Date: Aug 11, 2018 3:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sandy,
Girl you ROCK!!!! I enjoyed this so freaking MUCH! Now I'm chanting for another chapter or one-shot, or even a multi-chapter story which will turn this into a series. I'm so happy that you picked this bunny up. Deb T.'s plot bunnies are truly the stuff of legend. Such a font of creative genius that allows us writers to constantly spin wonderful stories, like this one.
Looking forward to reading MORE from you!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2018 1:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sandy,
This was wonderful. Michael got exactly what he deserved for snooping. Great story.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Lorie. I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Date: Aug 11, 2018 1:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I see some people are agreeing with what i told you lol. I think you found the right title!
Author's Response:
Ya I think so. Who knows? I might expand it a little bit more. I'm working on the last chapter for Through the Thorns and then I'll start to work on a sequel and other story ideas I've had.
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2018 1:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well done. I enjoyed seeing Michael get what he deserved. I wonder if he tried to break Brian and Justin up and if Ben put a stop to it.
Author's Response:
I think I have to do more for this story lol I'll try my best to continue this xD
Date: Aug 11, 2018 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Man, would love to have seen an expanded version.
This was fun. Great job.
Author's Response:
I promise to do more for this. I'm glad it was received so well so far. Thank you :)
Date: Aug 11, 2018 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was fun I felt you could have spun it out a few chapters lol
Author's Response:
I'm glad it was received so well so far and will think of a way to continue this :) Thank you :)
Date: Aug 11, 2018 9:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Trop bien. mercii
Author's Response:
Merci. Je suis heureux des commentaires positifs.
(My French really isn't that good anymore but I tried lol)
Date: Aug 11, 2018 9:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this. Any plans of making it into a full-fledged story?
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I didn't have any plans but after a couple of people asked if I wanted to do more I'll think of a way to continue :D
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2018 8:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Love it !!! Thank you
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much :)
Date: Aug 11, 2018 7:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Well done! I enjoyed this very much. Thank you!
*Hugs*
Deb
Author's Response:
No, THANK YOU for coming up with so many great ideas. You have inspired many writers with your ideas and as a reader I'm a huge fan of your ideas :)
Date: Aug 11, 2018 7:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story. Like I have said before, Mikey is an idiot. So happy that Brian found his happiness. Great writing as usual.
Author's Response:
Oh thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate it a lot. xoxo
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2018 6:42 am Title: Chapter 1
You did Deb's bunny good
Love that Michael got his ass handed to him by Brian.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Yes I do love those type of stories myself, as a reader and writer xD