Date: Aug 23, 2018 4:51 pm Title: Desire
Wow, terrific chapter. Seeing Brian start to move forward was great. It has to be so difficult to face what he is facing, but I think you can pull the old Brian back as much as possible. Keep up the fantastic writing.
Author's Response:
I agree, we are building new Brian from the old. :) Thanks for always taking the time to review!
Date: Aug 23, 2018 4:41 pm Title: Changed
Amazing beginning! Tough situation for anybody, but it's worse for Brian who lived his life based on the image and his stud status. I'm surprised that he even accepted going to Babylon.
Author's Response:
Justin is persistent and Brian knows it. ;) And he did change his mind...
Thanks for reading! I love feedback - hope the rest lives up to the start.
Date: Aug 20, 2018 11:10 pm Title: Repercussions
Great update. Brian needs to come to grips to move on. This new therapist should help.
Author's Response:
Yes, there's a lot of forward movement coming in the next chapter.
Date: Aug 20, 2018 7:48 pm Title: Repercussions
Wonderful chapter. Some tears so the emotional side came through. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I feel bad for making you cry every chapter! :(
Date: Aug 19, 2018 12:05 am Title: Alive
Yay, Brian. One of the bravest things you can ever do is admit you need help. Really loving this story. More, please. TAG
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're loving it! Thank you! <3
Date: Aug 18, 2018 11:39 pm Title: Reunification
Justin is perfectly suited, after the bashing, to understand where Brian’s coming from. Not that it’ll be easy... TAG
Date: Aug 18, 2018 11:18 pm Title: Reflection
I really like this more vulnerable Brian. TAG
Date: Aug 18, 2018 1:55 pm Title: Let Go
Its like Justin’s return to Brian’s life has transformed him all over again. Woken him up from the post-accident haze he was in. Brought him back to life again. Go, Brian! TAG
Date: Aug 18, 2018 1:25 pm Title: Invincible
You did a great job showing things from Michael’s POV. Very refreshing take on this difficult character. Thanks. TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you! I know Michael isn't a popular character, but I really liked he and Brian's relationship in the series.
Date: Aug 18, 2018 10:22 am Title: Alive
Ok that’s good we have a breakdown and a building up
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2018 8:24 am Title: Alive
Another great chapter. I'm glad that Brian is going to speak to someone.
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2018 2:00 am Title: Alive
I'm glad that Brian is going to do it.
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2018 1:40 am Title: Reunification
There is no going back now.
Date: Aug 17, 2018 11:17 pm Title: Alive
Great chapter. How difficult it is to become someone you had never been before. Terrific writing. At least Brian is willing to try.
Date: Aug 17, 2018 4:20 pm Title: Together
Yay for Brian - being all brave and heading off to NYC by himself to find his love! TAG
Date: Aug 17, 2018 5:38 am Title: Changed
I can already tell this is going to be good. I love hurt/comfort fics. Reading on... TAG
Author's Response:
You're going to enjoy this one, then! I write what I like to read...and that's angst and H/C. ;)
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2018 7:40 am Title: Reunification
They are ready for this new life if Brian can not get stuck in the past. I'm sure Justin will fight for them. Great chapter
Date: Aug 16, 2018 1:33 am Title: Reunification
Great chapter. Not too many tears this time, but still emotional. Terrific writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad it was a break from the tears. ;)
Date: Aug 14, 2018 5:01 pm Title: Reflection
NNow he just has to get up the nerve to ask Justin to move in. If Justin was as tenacious as he once was he'd have all his things ready to be moved, or have his boxes already outside the apartment door. Thus saving Brian frim asking. I can see Brian's face now. Confusion melting int sheer happiness.
Author's Response:
Thanks for always taking the time to review and plant a few ideas in my head. ;)
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2018 10:39 am Title: Changed
Tears in my eyes, lump in my throat. You definitely captured the emotion of their farewells.
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2018 9:00 am Title: Reflection
i can feel the emotions, and I am crying too. New beginning for the boys and great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Marie!
Date: Aug 14, 2018 2:34 am Title: Reflection
Still loving this story. You have done an amazing job with all the feelings and thoughts of Brian adjusting to this huge change in his life. Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you're still loving it. This is definitely a very interesting version of Brian to play with...working with canon, and trying to fast forward him into the future but still keep him in character. I'm enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2018 12:24 am Title: Reflection
Brian's come to a decision that is right for him. The goodbye was a sad one, but he's got Justin to help him find himself and Ted to take care of his business.
Author's Response:
Kinnetik is definitely in good hands, and Brian will still be very involved, even if from a distance. And yes, this is the right decision, even if it's harder than it seems on the surface.
Date: Aug 13, 2018 9:31 pm Title: Reflection
Wow you really put every type of emotional feelings into that chapter I choked up several times. Amazing chapter thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you for always reading and taking the time to review! It's good to know that I accomplished what I wanted to convey in this chapter.