Date: Jun 20, 2018 1:19 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Well Ted's going to have an interesting dinner to say the least. Can't wait for Dale to drop the bombshell he found out.
I knew Lindsay was behind what Deb and Michael were doing. Screwed herself royally. And now to be named in the lawsuit filed by Sam's wife. Can't get much better than that. Even her parents want nothing to do with her.
Poor Mel, already paid to have the locks changed and now because of that bitch she has to do it again.
Brian and Justin better heal quickly because after Dale is done they're going to want the intimacy they share just to forget the pain from being betrayed.
Date: Jun 20, 2018 12:32 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Wow, another fantastic chapter. But more importantly is that you are healing. It may take time, but just hang in there and know that all your followers are praying for you to be completely healthy. Hugs, Marilynne
Date: Jun 14, 2018 4:28 pm Title: REFLECTIONS and DECISIONS
LOVE this!!! Terrific plot lines.
Just wanted to tell you that my reviews will be spotty, so I wanted to apologize ahead of time. I'm just starting a new job (full time) I also have a psrt time job, adn in between, I'm helping my previous boss shut down her business. Needless to say, time is at a minimun these days. Just know that I will be reading adn loving all you write. Know that I'm sending you positive vibes with every word you write and will be loving everything I read. Most of my reviews will be send via osmosis.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2018 7:23 pm Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
I love the fic! It’s just what I needed after my long absence from the fandom and reading fanfics... I can’t wait for more! Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2018 5:49 pm Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
So Michael does have a brain which goes to show he used Brian so he could slack and read his stupid comics!!
Deb might want to get use to be frozen out when it comes to Brian, Justin and everyone else, now that they now she can't be trusted they won't say anything in front of her anymore...Well at least not something that can be used against them but against her, Michael and Lindsay should be fun.
Lindsay is such an amateur and southern being sneaky it is actually good to be sneaky <eye roll> Mel already suspected she was cheating and now that Sam's wife is an inch away from finding out her name she might want to watch her back.
If Mrs. Auerbach sues for divorce and puts Lindsay's full name on the record than there will be nowhere Lindsay can hide from the press, not even Mommy and Daddy can pay to cover this up lol
Lance can be arrested as an accomplice be not only is he hiding the stuff Michael had stolen from the loft, but he also purchased some items aswell.
Hope Deb has room for Michael cause he will soon be moving in, Ben and Hunter are getting ready to clean house and the first thing to go is Michael Novotny <giggles>
Ooo I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: Jun 13, 2018 4:02 pm Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
Take that Lindsay and go hide somewhere only you know. Nobody will try to find you. It must hurt to see Brian with Justin, but Brian being friend with Mel is the worse. She can't play one against the other anymore.
Date: Jun 13, 2018 2:54 pm Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
Just love the delusions of Mikey & Lindz. Are they not the two stupidest people ever born????? You capture their personality so well. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2018 11:59 am Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
Such joy to wake up to another chapter. Mikey and Lindsay actually think they can come out smelling like roses once everything is said and done? I don't think so.
Date: Jun 13, 2018 11:30 am Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
Lindsay and Michael share the same affliction. Delusions of grandeur.
Lance will eventually screw up. His feelings for Brian will make him careless. Deb is going to screw her son over to save her own ass, and Sam isn't going to want Lindsay for longer than it takes to screw her.
As least I hope that happens and I can't wait if it does.
Date: Jun 13, 2018 9:23 am Title: PAPERWORK
I love this story. Thanks for updating.
Date: Jun 13, 2018 6:24 am Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
Michael is a total scumbag! He and Lance are perfect for each other; maybe they can share a jail cell!
Lindsay sure did screw up, didn't she! And she never could have imagined that Brian and Mel would become friends and join forces against her to protect Gus. I hope they give Sam's wife her name, she deserves it!
Looking forward to more!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 13, 2018 6:20 am Title: PAPERWORK
Mel is so lucky that Lindsay isn't speaking to her! Hahaha! Unfortunately Deb is talking to her or maybe that should be at her. Deb just expects everyone to drop whatever is going on in their lives and rush to help her and Michael. Love that Deb had to be escorted out by security! And so happy that Mel told her off, especially after the comments Deb made about Hunter.
“Because I’ll sue the thong off him if he doesn’t. Now leave!” - I needed brain bleach after that image! Ewwww!
*Gasp* Lindsay bought dresses in a size 6? Wishful thinking isn't it? And she thought she would get away with it by putting them in Gus' closet? Wow! She is not very clever. Loved Mel's comment about him being too young to dress in drag. LOL! But Lindsay was smart enough to leave without an escort from security.
Mel had all sorts of good news. And Ted's back and all the right friend's are happy that he is; Cynthia is extremely excited about Brian and Justin's LDP; Jennifer is a kick-ass realtor getting locations for Kinnetik and Mel and Janean's office; and this is all making me very happy.
Love how they are all looking out for each other.
Another wonderful chapter, Nichelle!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 13, 2018 6:01 am Title: THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND DOLLARS AND THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION
Loving Jennifer's relationship with Brian. I always felt once she got to know him she would see the real Brian much like Justin did and then she would understand their relationship. And I love how he's rubbing off on her - "Language!" Hahaha!
Okay, I did not see that one coming! Rodney! Rodney was at Deb's door! Really enjoyed how he handled her - don't give me attitude and I won't give you attitude. Perfect! She is really unbelieveable when it comes to her man-child! Wow! It will probably bite her in the ass eventually.
Finally Mel isn't taking any shit from Lindsay. Can't wait to see how Lindsay handles that little bit of life.
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 13, 2018 4:22 am Title: PAPERWORK
After being away for a long weekend I get back to more Novotny drama and welcome back Hunter, he's finally away from the Madness!!!
I knew Debbie was up to no good, it's got to hurt like hell to Brian what she did but he's got to rip the band-aid off in one swoop. Her and her parasite have to pay.
Still on the edge of my seat, can't wait for more, no pressure, just you know, a couple of thousand words if you can, lol Thanks for sharing all these wonderful words with us.
bec
Date: Jun 13, 2018 2:25 am Title: PAPERWORK
Michael and Deb, it's all going to come crashing in on the and crush them. No pity.
Does Mel know that Brian's new business is in the old bath house? Can't wait for her reaction.
Date: Jun 12, 2018 11:30 pm Title: PAPERWORK
Awwwwww Brian called Ted....Teddy! So sweet! This whole chapter was fabulous! They always are but this one was especially so. It just flowed perfectly.
Date: Jun 12, 2018 5:59 pm Title: PAPERWORK
Yes, Welcome back Teddy!!! It really must be a shock for Ted to see Brian as he is now. Not totally different, yet so changed.
Mel starting her own practice could only mean more autonomy and workload as well: I hope she will be able to keep up with Lindsay so she could prevent any problem with Gus.
Author's Response:
WOW! 100th review! AMAZING! Thank you so much!
Ted's who journey during the series struck deep chords with me. It gives me such joy to be able to write him this way! I'm also going to have a good time developing Ted and Brian's relationship growing and changing in ways neither of them anticipated.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2018 5:30 pm Title: PAPERWORK
Looks Ted is back and he sharpening his knives for the slaughter, thank goodness he kept such detailed records because Michael and Deb will try everything they can to get Brian to stop, but when Brian needed that money none of them cared to give him a dime.
Might also want to check what money Brian gave to Deb that she promised to payback but never did?
Melanie standing up for herself and not taking anymore of Lindsay's Crap is good, she is right that if Lindsay ain't getting o loving at home then she is spreading her legs for someone else, Ted should also look into the support payments for Gus, Lindsay is only working part time at the gallery and that doesn't pay much, plus she spends money like it will never run out??
Deb is really showing her true colors now.
Ted is about to become the man he should've been years ago and he has his True Friends to help him.
Thanks for the Update :)
Date: Jun 12, 2018 4:59 pm Title: PAPERWORK
You do give good chapter. This fic is so unique, I’m on the edge of my seat reading it.
Plus I always love a good anti Mikey story.
Date: Jun 12, 2018 4:51 pm Title: PAPERWORK
Fantastic chapter. Your mojo is working overtime. This story would have made amazing episodes for the series. Great job. Hope you are feeling better.
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2018 4:51 pm Title: PAPERWORK
It's so good to see Teddy back and to have him working for not only Brian and Justin, but Melanie as well. Lindsay is going to be in for a big surprise.
Date: Jun 11, 2018 8:43 pm Title: THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND DOLLARS AND THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION
Wow wow wow! That's all I got to say about that lol
Date: Jun 11, 2018 8:02 pm Title: THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND DOLLARS AND THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION
So many things are happening, good and very bad.
I love how Jennifer is with Brian: she is such a great person. Debbie is going to have to explain herself very soon.
Rodney isn't afraid of Deb and she doesn't like that one bit. Vic is so lucky to have found him. As a psych, he must have register many wrong things/doings in the family.
Mel is getting fed up by Lindsay's spoiled child behaviour: I don't give them long before they implode. Mel really doesn't deserve that. Yes, she is blunt, but she's honest, even with Brian in this story.
Date: Jun 11, 2018 7:32 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
What an amazing chapter: so many hot topics finally in the open. It was long due and they exchanged so much.
I also love how you are filling the blanks that were in the series.
Great job! Happy writing!
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2018 2:25 am Title: THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND DOLLARS AND THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION
Sadly Deb is in on Mikey's manipulation. I'm sure you have devised a wonderful way for her to pay.