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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2020 3:59 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

Thank you, thank you.  We learn a lot and most importantly is where is Brian lite?  Mikey is sicker than I thought possible.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2020 3:46 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

OMG, this was amazing.  Your writing continues to just get better and better. The pictures of Michael were perfect.  And, you know how much I love this story so 2 chapters so close together made my weekend.  Thank you.  Stay safe.  Rating 100.  LOL, but seriously at least that.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2020 1:58 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 12: A MANIFESTATION OF THE GLORY

thanks for update

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2020 7:11 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 12: A MANIFESTATION OF THE GLORY

What motive could Michael have that weren't in need of jail time?  Would love another chapter asap.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2020 6:53 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 12: A MANIFESTATION OF THE GLORY

Wow, wonderful chapter for one of my favorite stories by one of my favorite writers.  Fantastic.  Love the powerful Justin.  Looks like things are really going to heat upon now.  Hope all is well with you, my dear, during these really difficult times.  We just have to stay strong, take care, be safe and let our voices be heard.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2020 5:16 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 12: A MANIFESTATION OF THE GLORY

Yes Deb was willing to go to any lengths to make sure Michael had everything his greedy little heart desires, she even convinced herself that forcing Brian to take of and cater to Michael was for the greater good even if she had to verbally and sometimes physically abuse him to do it.

Michael learned from Deb to find a weakness and exploit it until the well runs dry then rinse and repeat with everyone they allowed into their lives but Brian was their favorite.

Yes Deb deserves to be in a cell next to or with Michael for the rest of her life then chained to him in Hell for all of Eternity made to watch and feel the pain they caused individually and together to everyone they "Supposedly Loved" but especially to Brian who they abused worst than Jack and Joan did because they used love to find "Love" to find him to them.

 Brian and Justin destroyed all the chains that bonded them to people who would see them broken, bloodied and dead to satisfy their own selfish desires.

Deb, Michael, Lindsay and their cronies have no power over them anymore Brian and Justin are much to Strong, In Sync, Happy and Free to ever be pulled down or destroyed Ever Again.

Like Carl I am also curious what else Deb did in the name of Love For Michael that had serious repercussions for someone else later the that Deb chose to ignore??

Justin laid David's flat with a few well chosen words and now he is going to learn what happens when you mess with a Power Couple who have some very Powerful Friends just because you are too afraid to admit who you really are and are jealous of others who can live honestly.

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!!

Thanks For the Update 😃😃

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2020 4:47 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 12: A MANIFESTATION OF THE GLORY

So love this and thrilled you updated it . Looking eagerly forward to more.🥰

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2020 8:02 am Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

Lindsay miserable! You made my day!

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 11:24 am Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

love a Lindsey bashing

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 1:09 am Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

Nice to see Lindsay brought down a peg or two.  I do enjoy seeing more on this story.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 12:23 am Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

Great update.  Love when Lindsay is miserable.  My two favorite stories getting updated has made my week.  Reading all these wonderful stories has really helped me being in "stay at home" time.  Living alone doesn't bother me, but not even being able to get my mail without mask & gloves is depressing.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 12:08 am Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

So Lindsay tried to play dumb and seduce her  Gay Lawyer and got knocked on her ass she should really be used to it by now cause it seriously won't be the last.

Wonder what suddenly has Lindsay never and her hair growing grayer?

She and Claire are really nothing more than over used whores who aren't as good as they believe they are, they also should've never been mothers because they are way to selfish, but no one can really regret Gus, John and w being here despite their supposed mothers and with time, love, patience, trust they can be better people who are accepted for the joy they bring not the leverage they afford.

Lindsay will regretsigning those papers but that is for her to live with Brian and Justin have California to finish with before they can come home to fight their enemies head on.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Stay Safe 😃😃

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2020 10:45 pm Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

Aah... Poor Lindsay's in hot water... I have to wonder when it's all over and done with, if she will ever see the outside of a barbed or razor wire fence... 

Her trying to play ignornant and innocent, is so very funny. There is so much concrete evidence against her, that I should hope her, and the lot of them, would plead guilty, and hope for a sentence reduction.

And it sounds like that's Claires goal. And even though Claire may think she's going to really reduce her sentence by doing so, I doubt that will help much in the long run.

It's too bad it's not recorded of her trying to get her lawyer - gay lawyer - to sleep with her. But, if she hoped that would slow down the process of her trial... well, I don't think that would work.

So happy to see this is heading in the direction of some of the trials. Although, I suppose we still have to finish up in California before Mikey's can get started.

But, thanks for the update...

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2020 9:38 pm Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

This summarizes Lindsay so well: "I’m much too high class to be in the general population".

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2020 9:28 pm Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

So beautifully executed. Not just sex, but a,oneness. Two complete souls.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2020 9:27 pm Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

Well played Nichelle. This is one of my favorites. Once this finally completed I want to read it from the beginning. Kudos!

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2020 8:43 am Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

They needed it and so did we! Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2020 9:45 am Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

thanks for update, hope Michael gets punished soon and Debbie too

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2020 1:47 am Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

Wonderful chapter.  Love when our boys are together and happy.  Please, please, please complete this story and not make us wait forever to see Mikey get what is coming to him.  Fantastic writing, Nichelle.  Hope all is well with you.  It would be a 100 rating if possible.  I have found your writing wonderful from the first story I ever read, but I believe it is getting even more amazing.  You have a real talent.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2020 1:05 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 11: LET'S GO TO THE VIDEOTAPE

How did I miss this chapter.  The information alone is worth the read.  Now how do you get Davies to admit why he's being a prick?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 4:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

I Love The Glory Of Love that song made me cry the first time I heard it!

Also a big fan of The Karate Kid Part 2!

Perfect Song for Brian and Justin it to totally captures whom they are now and who they will always be.

Michael, Lindsay, Deb, Craig, Sapperstein, Lance and all the other Evil A-Holes have lost cause Brian and Justin are not under their control anymore they are strong to leave The Haters behind Forever.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 4:42 pm Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

What an absolute change in the mood I was in this morning: this new chapter lifted the dark cloud that was over me and my thoughts are lighter.

This was the best way for them to re/connect and take the control on their lives back. As Brian said a long time ago about Justin not going to Dartmouth: there is no turning back.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 4:11 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 11: LET'S GO TO THE VIDEOTAPE

I am so disgusted and terrified at the lengths Michael was willing to go have Brian all to himself I mean the sick SOB was going to have Gus killed so there would be no one Brian could focus on except for him, he even had some poor if raped and drugged repeatedly to drive Brian insane just because this young man resembles Justin even made sure to get it on video with his other accomplices.

I do wonder about the young man in the video is he still alive and if he isn't could all three be charged with rape and murder?

Michael is one Sick F$%K!!!!

Everything does need to be processed but if Davies is going to.let his feelings get in the way then he can stay in the office getting paper cuts, while the grown-ups do the hardwork of making sure Michael and others don't get off on a technicality due to.jealousy and spite.

Brian and Justin getting out before watching anymore of those videos is a good thing Brian needs to vent then calm down so later Justin can vent and Val down.

I bet when they get back to Pittsburgh they will be rushing to hold Gus tightly cause no one wants to know what he would have done to Gus who he hated just as much of not more than Justin.

Deb needs to be in court everyday to see and hear what Her Precious Angel was willing to do to get his dream thanks to her help.

I don't want  to know anymore but gotta know more so there is nothing left for Michael to gloat over anymore.

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 3:45 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 11: LET'S GO TO THE VIDEOTAPE

Wow, fantastic writing.  Such amazing ideas.  And, just makes me hate Michael even more.  WONDERFUL, JUST WONDERFUL.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 3:39 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 11: LET'S GO TO THE VIDEOTAPE

Whoa! Justin and Gus were planned to die! I can't even imagine what horrible death it would have been. What a sick and pervert maniac! I bet you get that a lot for these chapters.

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