Date: Jun 27, 2018 6:52 am Title: MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE…
Grr lol I want the next chapter I am gagging for the smack downs! 🤣🤣 Totally unbelievable that they still do not recognise any damage they have done and hope to score a direct hit on the people they tell themselves they love.
Date: Jun 27, 2018 5:21 am Title: MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE…
I'm kind of disappointed, I thought we were getting to the big smackdown this chapter. Oh well, I can't wait to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey Regina,
We are actually at the very beginning of the smackdowns. There's no way I could jump right into it without setting the scenes for you. Doing anything less than what I've done here would have taken you 'out of the story' and made it feel rushed. My motto and mission is always going to be to provide a quality story, so I couldn't speed through it.
The thing is that if I put everything (what's here already and what I have yet to write/post) into one chapter, the word count would have been anywhere between 15-20K, at the very least. And although it's nothing for me to write that much in a normal sitting, I'm still not in a position to do that yet. Believe it or not, it will take quite a bit of conditioning for me to get there again, especially since I usually like to do those types of long chapters in a day or two at the most with minimal breaks in between. That's about the standard length of a novelette.
But rest assured, next chapter somebody is getting SMACKED! LOL I promise it will be worth every ounce of the anticipation you're feeling right now.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2018 3:22 pm Title: TAKEOVERS AND CLAUSES
Je viens de lire cette histoire et je ne peux pas attendre la prochaine mise à jour. Bonne histoire. J'aime votre point de vue sur ce qui pourrait arriver. Merci
Author's Response:
Merci, Marie! Celui-ci est devenu l'un de mes préférés de tous les temps à écrire. Restez à l'écoute car il y a tellement plus à venir ... enfin, après avoir passé le "samedi des Splatters".
Bonne lecture et HUGS,
~ Nichelle
Date: Jun 25, 2018 12:35 pm Title: TAKEOVERS AND CLAUSES
So well played, from everybody! Gardner is going down and I couldn't be more pleased.
I can't wait for Ethan to meet with Brian, one last time.
Date: Jun 25, 2018 3:45 am Title: TAKEOVERS AND CLAUSES
That was done beautifully. Hope the next day goes just as well.
Date: Jun 25, 2018 2:43 am Title: TAKEOVERS AND CLAUSES
downloaded this to my phone and could not comment as no 4 G on the road. Great story- loved the intricacies of Justin and Brian's talks and the way Mel has been on their side. Can't wait to see how Lindsay and Michael's machinations back fire on them. Great story and can't wait for the next update.
Date: Jun 25, 2018 1:48 am Title: TAKEOVERS AND CLAUSES
That was all just fucking brilliant!!! Woohoo, go boys!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2018 1:24 am Title: TAKEOVERS AND CLAUSES
Vance got the Ass Kicking he so richly deserved so now Brian and Justin can spend Monday along with Ted and Cynthia cleaning out the snakes and weak links to help Kinnectik run like a well oiled machine.
Justin studying law should have everyone running for cover.
So how long after the fumigation can Brian and Justin see their new home?
Ben and Vic showed Brian that they see behind the masks to the wonderful man he really is and that is why they respect him.
Vic and Emmett are on their way to conquering the catering world, while Mel is about to become what Lindsay always wanted her to be, now Ben just needs to write a best seller then he and Hunter will be set once he gets Michael out of his life for good.
Oh please let Ethan show up he can explain why he tried to trick Justin and how much Michael was paying him, plus Justin and Brian can give him the Ass kicking he so deserves.
Ooh I can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2018 1:21 am Title: TAKEOVERS AND CLAUSES
Love how you took care of Vance. And pulled Ben and Vic into the campaign for Remson. Can't wait to read how they take care of Michael and Ethan. That's going to be so good.
Date: Jun 25, 2018 1:10 am Title: TAKEOVERS AND CLAUSES
Wow, wonderful chapter. Glad you are feeling well enough to continue this fantastic story. Hugs & keep improving.
Date: Jun 22, 2018 4:38 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
OMG! Claire! Did not see that coming!
Michael is so delusional thinking that Brian would ever want to set up house with him. How did he never understand that even though Brian said they would be 2 old queens living in Palm Springs, Brian never intended to grow old at all?
Hahaha! Jennifer owns the building! I love it! There is no way that Michael is ever getting inside now. LOL!
Way to go, Cynthia! LOL! She's the one who gave Lindsay's name to Sam's wife! I love it!
Dale needs to get a hold of Michael and show him a little discipline!
Justin certainly has Lindsay figured out! I think he's spot-on with the idea that she was hoping to get pregnant by Brian in college but it just didn't work out. That wouldn't surprise me in the least.
Another wonderful chapter!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 22, 2018 4:23 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Ohhhh! I love Dale Wexler! He could be very good for Ted whether as a friend or more.
How strange! Lindsay doesn't seem to like being the center of attention. Wonder why? Hmmmm...
Love how Brian and Justin are communicating with more than sex (even if they did nearly wear each other out LOL!) and are talking more about how everything is affecting them.
Yay! Mel hung up on Lindsay! LOL!
Oh, it's another cliffhanger! Wonder what he found out.
Off to read more.
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 22, 2018 1:07 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
GREAT chapter. Your mojo is in high gear and making us happy. Oh that Michael is so delusional. Can't wait for his fall. Hope each day you are feeling better. Prayers are with you.
Date: Jun 22, 2018 12:09 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
Never suspected Claire. I hope they get her too.
Would love to see Mikey the fucker go up against Jennifer. The smackdown would be beautiful. Even better if Lindsay and Deb were included.
Michael and his daydreams. Poof!
Rubbing my hands with mischievous glee in anticipation.
Date: Jun 21, 2018 9:51 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
Can't wait for splatterday!!! Smackdown Splatterday should be loads of FUN!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2018 8:59 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
Michael actually thinks he'll come out of this without loosing Brian? It's nice that Ted has Dale as a friend. Cynthia sees the worth of Justin and is happy for Brian. Not sure how you going to put the kabash on Michael, Lindsay and Deb, but I can't wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2018 8:18 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
Oh How I Wish It Was Saturday Splatter Day Already.
I so want to see them scrambling to come up with plausible lies that No One Will Buy.
Deb can't say she was clueless about everything because she was hurting and deceiving Brian to help her baby and now she is going to find out what it feels like to be in the middle of feeding frenzy with no escape.
By the time they all get through (Emmett will be there to right?) with them theywon tt have a crumb to savour or pot to puss in.
Cynthia is a Way Better Friend to Brian than Lindsay could ever be and Justin is right Lindsay was trying to get pregnant when she slept with Brian only it didn't So she waited and for another opportunity, only know she doesn' t have Brian, Gus or even Melanie now.
And as for Claire she is going to wish she had left Brian alone, how are John and Peter?
I am going to be biting my nails to stumps waiting for the next update lol ;)
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2018 7:58 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
Thanks for the earworm Nichelle. I'll have that going thru my head the rest of the day.
So ass kicking commences on Sat?
Date: Jun 21, 2018 7:58 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
I can't wait for the next chapter; this is a great teasing: "Saturday is ‘splatterday’!"! Maybe Ted will meet Dale for some more fun!
So, Lindsey, Claire and Michael with a little help / blindness from Debbie: poor Brian; what a life he had!
Date: Jun 21, 2018 2:03 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Omg Lindsay as well by the sound of it. I am loving all this anti Michael/Lindsay/Debbie and they are evil buggers. I look forward to the next chapter
Date: Jun 21, 2018 2:03 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Omg Lindsay as well by the sound of it. I am loving all this anti Michael/Lindsay/Debbie and they are evil buggers. I look forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2018 1:43 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
I was pretty sure I had already left a review on this. It is an amazing chapter where Ted stands out and Dale comes up with even more evidence against M&L. I couldn't believe that Lindsay thought that she could just waltz in and everything with Mel would be okay. Looking forward to finding out what Dale found out.
Date: Jun 20, 2018 4:50 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Did Dale find out that Lindsey is involved in Michael's machinations? If not, who is SHE?
Evil cliffhanger!
I hope you are doing better every day. Happy writing!
Date: Jun 20, 2018 1:24 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Great chapter!! Great cliff hanger can't wait for the next chapter. Well wishes and prayers sent your way hope you feel better!
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2018 1:23 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Lindsay should've realized remembered that as the mistress her only power is being on her back and knees, and that a scorned wife will use everything in her arsenal to make her husband and the other woman pay.
Plus he adultery being splashed all over the tabloids will help Mel get her marriage cancelled, save Sydney from the harsh fallout by terminating her Ass, plus with everything Mrs. Amanda Auerbach has on them both Sam will be too busy saving his fortune by calling Lindsay the temptress who tried to ruin his marriage in the press. (I hope Amanda takes it all!!!)
Plus Lindsay will be scrambling to save any money she stole from Gus, by crying to Mommy and Daddy who might just want to extend their stay in Europe when they find out about this, besides Lynnette's husband won't enjoy the press camped out on his lawn, Lynnette might enjoy anonymously giving the press some tidbits about her sister.
Brian and Justin might end up in the sooner than think;)
So how much did Deb bully out of Brian and did she also get some of the Rage money too?
How deeply is Lindsay involved?
If Dale found even more evidence than Michael, Deb and the other conspirators have a lot of trouble heading there way.
Thanks for the Update, you take care of yourself We'll wait patiently and be more happier for it cause you're on the mend :)