Date: Jun 28, 2018 1:50 pm Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...NOW WHAT Part 2
That was epic! Bravo! I totally felt Justin & Brian's pain though...oh my God...hopefully the idiot squad will heed their words but probably not. I thought Ben & Hunter were going to get their justice too at this meeting or is that another chapter?
Date: Jun 28, 2018 1:27 pm Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...NOW WHAT Part 2
Wow wow wow what a fabulous chapter I loved the smack downs they were brilliant
Date: Jun 28, 2018 1:08 pm Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...NOW WHAT Part 2
What a chapter! Debra dares saying that Justin is like an animal and that he took that from Brian! Well, she really deserves the son she got. After all she heard, she still sides with him. Too bad for her, they won't let go.
Date: Jun 28, 2018 10:46 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...NOW WHAT Part 2
So so nice, but a week is too long. A week to make up his mind, two weeks yo hand it all over? One day to clear out the above store apartment of all his 'toys', two days to burn the building down and skip town.
Lovef the element of surprise. Justin knocking that fucker on his ass.
Jennifer can really see the care Brian gives Justin. Does she know how Justin takes care of him?
What is going to happen with Claire. I hope Brian goes after her ass too. It will be painful, but closure.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, Sherry! A lot can happen in a week or two. Michael won't be getting away with anything he can think of. And remember, Brian and Justin have some pretty influential friends working behind the scenes on their behalf.
Stay tuned!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 28, 2018 10:15 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...NOW WHAT Part 2
Wonderful chapter. Just what we have been waiting for to see whiney weasel get what's coming to him and Ma. Great writing. I love that no one messes with Mother Taylor who looks so prim and proper, but with the ability to turn into a heavy weight boxer when needed. Having this chapter posted so soon makes me hope that you are indeed feeling better. More HUGS being sent your way.

Date: Jun 28, 2018 8:29 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...NOW WHAT Part 2
Wow first Lindsay and now the Novotny's you .Cynthia and Jennifer are very great. I can't wait for the next update. Thank you wonderful stort!
Date: Jun 28, 2018 5:50 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...NOW WHAT Part 2
I really hope Debbie lets what has happened sink in and truly make her see what she has lost. Hopefully this is her wake-up call in regards to her son....maybe now she’ll start letting him fall on his face when he fucks up
Date: Jun 28, 2018 4:40 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...SO NOW WHAT?
First one out! I didn't know that would cost so much trying to do what Gui and Lindsay did.
Date: Jun 28, 2018 2:51 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...SO NOW WHAT?
My oh my that was gorgeous.
Love Cynthia and so glad Jenn's on their side.
No more money, no more Gus, no more having anyone to care. How devious to be involved with both Sam and Gui the french frog at the same time. All her plans. All that hard work to live the easy life. POOF!

Date: Jun 28, 2018 1:41 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...SO NOW WHAT?
You took care of Lindsay and did a nice job of it too. Can't wait to see how you take care of Mikey and his mom.

Date: Jun 28, 2018 1:28 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...SO NOW WHAT?
Chelle,
I love this story. Please write fast, I need more asshole smackdowns.
~Lorie <3
Date: Jun 28, 2018 1:11 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...SO NOW WHAT?
Okay, I'm only going to type this once even though it deserves at least a billion of these...
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*HUGS*
Deb

Date: Jun 28, 2018 12:55 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...SO NOW WHAT?
BRAVO, BRAVO, BRAVO!!!
It Was So Worth The Wait!!!
Lindsay is a stupid idiot who only cares how she looks for the photos, she should be more worried about the headlines cause the press can be vicious, but not as vicious as the new people she will hopefully be spending the next fifteen years with.
All that greed lead to her downfall and when she gets out no will care or remember her name and for someone who craves attention that's gotta hurt lol
Had to get rid of the Preening Princess first so they can deal with Delusional Dumbass Two and His Hard of Hearing Over Protective Mommy.
Michael and Deb get ready because your heads are next on the chopping block.
Date: Jun 28, 2018 12:40 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...SO NOW WHAT?
great chapter. so happy that Lindsay got hers. Now on to the Novotneys. Hope you bury them as deep as you can. LOL More hugs and feel better.
Date: Jun 28, 2018 12:20 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...SO NOW WHAT?
Woohoo that was fabulous! True justice....and....Michael is next!
Date: Jun 28, 2018 12:19 am Title: YOU HAVE THE ATTENTION...SO NOW WHAT?
Pure genius my dear....pure genius!

Date: Jun 27, 2018 5:41 pm Title: MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE…
Ahhh I feel like Charlie Brown every time he tries to kick the ball, your cliffhangers are brilliant but brutal lol
Lindsay might want to prepare for another lawsuit from Sydney cause he is going to find out she was using that money for herself and not her family.
Smart to have Ron and Nancy listening in so they Really Know what's going on and not Lindsay's version.
Michael can take his invoice and shove it where the sun don't shine, but Deb's lips are firmly planted, after this day they are going to know that they have nowhere to turn.
Best also to make sure the Avenue knows the truth too so Deb can't spin it to make herself look like the Martyr who is being picked on.
Ben did good reassuring Hunter that he will have always have a home and him, plus he has options to protect himself from Rita and Michael, Rodney reassuring Vic was good too cause he can be there for Deb up to a certain point, always good to walk away cause Deb will not listen...Not just yet if at all????
Deb demands respect from everyone but she forgot that respect is earned, she taught Michael that instead of earning it he can just whine, pout, screech or run to Mommy so she can bully everyone into respecting Michael, that was not the lesson she was taught growing up but it is the one she taught Michael and that is about to hit her hard in the Ass.
Ooo I Can't Wait!!! :)
Date: Jun 27, 2018 4:43 pm Title: MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE…
GAH!!!!!!! What a way to end the chapter!! You're killing me! lol. I suppose I should be used to it y now, but, honestly....I'm going to be cheking for an update constantly!!
I feel so bad for vic. He's sort of between a rock and a hard place. Hopefully he'll be able to sort things out with Deb, but I just don't see that happening right away. Eventually maybe. Hope so for both their sakes.
Had to laugh at Lindsey thinking that she's going to be able to influence Brian in any way shpe or form. Or Justin either.
HEart was hurting for Hunter too. Oh the fear that must be courseng through him. Thankfully Ben is there for him, as are the rest of the gang. Michael has a massive shock coming to him I think.
I can't wait to read the next part (or probably a couple parts knowing you. lol)
Brilliant!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jun 27, 2018 3:40 pm Title: MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE…
Wow, great chapter setting it up for the explosion to come. And, you are fantastic with cliffhangers. I will sit on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. LOL. So glad by your writing that it seems you are improving. Hope sending HUGS helps.
Date: Jun 27, 2018 2:56 pm Title: MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE…
Hunter & Ben's conversation was sweet...awww Papa & son...
Cynthia: getting ready for the show down with all Em & Vic's tasty treats!
Vic & Rodney: Holding strong together, the way it should be
Lindsay: I was rolling my eyes the hole time, she's as delusional as Michael
Michael & Deb: Ugh, what can I say about this pathetic piece of shit and his mother? They need to be admitted to a psych ward
Mel: So efficent, can't wait for all this to go down! Let the games begin!

Date: Jun 27, 2018 1:29 pm Title: MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE…
Great chapter and one I didn't want to stop. Love how Ben reassured Hunter while Rodney did the same for Vic. Michael's thinking is so malviolent it's a surprise that Deb agrees. Will the reason for his fatherlessness come out?

Date: Jun 27, 2018 12:31 pm Title: MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE…
How exiting I am !!! I can't wait for the meeting
Date: Jun 27, 2018 12:17 pm Title: MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE…
Agghh!
Is the Island of Delusion really big enough for those three?
Lindsay Lindsay Lindsay. Can you or you can say bye bye to the life you feel you're owed. Even Sidney is coming after you. Whatever will you do?
Hope Deb's hand is feeling ok now because after she signs everything over to Brian and Justin and whomever else, it like her dignity is going to be hurtin'.
Will be happy when Hunter's wish is fulfilled. Home schooling will be best for him I think.
With Rodney having his back, Vic will be ok. Unconditional love will do wonders for the heartbreak that's about to happen.
Brian and Justin are going to be so much better for this. Cleansing the air so to speak.
Can't wait for the reactions. Can't wait for the lies to be spewed by them trying to cover their asses. Can't wait for this showdown.
Did I tell you...I CAN'T WAIT?!
Date: Jun 27, 2018 10:53 am Title: MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE…
Can't wait for this meeting!
Date: Jun 27, 2018 8:04 am Title: MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE…
The pressure is getting higher and higher in each paragraph.
This quote is excellent "I’m as angry as a queer whose favorite dildo just gave out right at his crucial moment".
Happy writing!