Date: Aug 21, 2018 11:02 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED
Boy, oh boy. How does your mind come up with all these plot lines? I'm not sure if you're devious, or a genius. Whatever it is, I can honestly say, best story of the century! So looking forward to your next update, which I hope will include B/J and Mel visiting Lindsay, or at least B/J being made aware of it, along with their reactions.
Date: Aug 21, 2018 2:33 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED
Woah!!! Now that's a twist I never would have seen coming at all! Wonder what Michael is going to think about that! LOL! You are a genius, Nichelle! *Bows down repeatedly*
I certainly hope that Harry only gets a fine. Lance definitely deserved getting knocked on his ass as well as knocked out!
Looking forward to more!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Aug 21, 2018 2:32 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED
Holy shit! Sweet Jesus! Wow, wow, wow....I am shocked. So Lance had a fake ID stating he was Michael, so he'd inherit Brian's money?? Wow!
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2018 2:18 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED
Holy Craptastic Hell!!!
Lance Freeman is an Evil Moron who by the end of this is going to wish he had never heard of Brian Kinney or Michael Novotny.
Was he ever even obsessed with Brian or was it all just an act?
I feel bad for Harry but I understand why he risked his career to attack Lance, using his Aunts illness to save himself is just Despicable and Vile.
The Family should be notified about what Lance tried to do and he should be disowned and left to fend for himself.
Lance is very much Lindsay's twin and that means the next three days should be interesting as they gather all the information they need to send them all away Forever!!
Claire doesn't deserve sympathy cause soon she will be getting what she deserves, wonder what she is afraid of them finding out?
What other damaging secrets are about to come out and is anyone else involved?
Thanks for the Update, Yet Again So Worth The Wait:)
Date: Aug 21, 2018 2:13 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED
Great chapter. This story is just so fantastic. I love it. Hope you are doing well.
Date: Aug 19, 2018 6:13 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL
Hi again. Just read some of your reviews. I noticed a couple of viewers referring to: What about Peter? They have remember, he is a half-brother to Justin and Molly, also, Brian is his uncle. I doubt any of them would let anything happen to him. I also wanted to point out, that I'm glad you brought in a drug-free, settled Blake into the story. I'm not sure how I feel about the Eric, Troy, and Christian arc. Haven't heard anything more about them in the last seven chapters.
Author's Response:
Hi Cathy,
So far, the story is going day-by-day, which is why Eric, Troy and Christian haven't appeared in seven chapters. But there will be a jump in the timeline very soon. Stay Tuned!
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 19, 2018 5:21 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL
Hey Nichelle... I've read your story, now. I think it's the best one I've read in a very long time. I usually don't write reviews, which is very wrong of me, and I hope I can rectify that in the future. Authors certainly deserve rewards for the time they invest in their stories, and their creative genius. Yours are truly magnificent. I love anti-Michael, anti-Lindsay, and anti-Craig fics, that are not lenient on the perpetrators at the end on the fic. And, JUST THE TWO OF US, fits that bill perfectly. I noticed you haven't updated the story for 8 days. I sure hope that changes soon. If when you finish this story, and feel like tackling another, I wrote plot bunny #122, that I feel would be great for you. My user is different, as I had to make a new account, because I lost my email address for the other one. I would also like to see your other stories finished. Thanks again, for this amazing story. Cathy
Author's Response:
Hi Cathy! Thanks so much for reaching out. Your words are so encouraging. You and all the other wonderful folks reading this have fed and nurtured my spirit in ways that i am unable to express in mere words. So thank you so much for the validation and encouragement to keep going.
But just to confirm, I'm still writing this story. In fact, I'm in the process of updating this and a few more of my WIPs. I think I may have finally worked out a posting schedule (God, I hope so!) that will work so that nothing suffers. I would really like tohave all of the WIPs finished by the end of this year. Ambitious? Absolutely, but a goal I am definitely trying to see through. The reason for the delay is that this past week has been a series of appointments for myself and my sons. I'm also looking at my RL manuscripts (two of which are sequels to my published novels) that need my attention again. Ironically, I can't find my very first Chri-fic novel, which was 286 pages in length so I'll have to start that one again from the beginning. All-in-all, it's just been an incredibly busy week, especially with the fact that my youngest son is entering his senior year in high school. Yeah, YIKES!
Anyway, thanks so much again for reading JT2U. It's been an interesting ride so far, and I look forward to continuing the journey.
HAPPY READING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 12, 2018 9:52 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL
So excited to see another update. Everything seems to be falling into place ( of sorts)- Claire and Craig together and father of Peter- now that is an interesting twist
Date: Aug 12, 2018 8:04 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL
I get the strange feeling that Bubbles is a plant. I mean he has Michael writing out his confession. Of course he's treating Michael like most of Liberty Ave. wishes they could. Wah wah wah the big man is abusing me. Change my cell. Wah wah wah. Nice try Novotny.
If there's room, the boys may be staying with Jenn for a bit. It would be good for the boys and Molly all around. I'm sure Brian will have input about the situation.
Date: Aug 12, 2018 1:57 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL
Time to pay the piper Claire and Craig
Date: Aug 12, 2018 1:32 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL
Well now, that was another action packed chapter. I'm glad the 'parents' are in custody. Right where they belong.
The kids are in good hands. At least Jennifer is learning from past mistakes. Just like the rest of us.
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2018 12:57 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL
Somehow I feel that whatever Michael does write down the truth won't be part of it. Jennifer is finally realizing her misdeeds and is doing better. Carl gets the fun of arresting Craig and Claire. Wonder where that leaves Peter.
Date: Aug 12, 2018 12:56 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL
First of all, I'm so glad & happy to see that Bubba has shit for brans under control in prison. Yes Michael, you ARE that dumb! Secondly, nice to see Jennifer being so open & honest with the kids, sometimes adults want to protect children from the truth in their own lives so much, that they're not upfront with them. Where will the boys go? And lastly, yes, take those morons to jail Carl!!!
Date: Aug 12, 2018 12:43 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL
Great chapter. Love Mikey and his "friend" working on his writings. Great ideas. Hope you are feeling well.
Date: Aug 12, 2018 7:12 am Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL
Michael is writing a full confession and getting English lessons: at least he should learn something in jail! Soon, he will have Craig not far away.
Date: Aug 01, 2018 10:12 pm Title: FORWARD THINKING and ROOT CONVERSATIONS
I love the relationship between Brian and Hunter: is it because Brian sees Hunter as his younger self or because he knows Hunter needs strong support like you explain at the end?
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2018 4:42 pm Title: FORWARD THINKING and ROOT CONVERSATIONS
Love the explanation of the title it is so true and what Brian always had when others didn't get in the way.
I always thought Hunter should work with Brian and Justin he would have the support he needs everywhere he turns and a better understanding of being in a work environment that moves fast.
Brian's idea of Justin and Daphne tutoring Hunter is good too they can teach him to strengthen his weaknesses and give him advice about study guides.
Glenda and James are good additions to this family because they have no preconceived bias to taint how they see and understand everyone.
Jinx, Cynthia and Daphne will be quite a force to be reckoned with lol
Brian wanting to move forward and not let others detain him shows he was always ready to grow up, others who demanded that he do never really wanted him to grow up at all.
Date: Aug 01, 2018 3:34 pm Title: FORWARD THINKING and ROOT CONVERSATIONS
This web is getting bigger and bigger. Just how far reaching it is is the question.
Don't allow Daphne, Cynthia, and Jinx compare notes, I don't think the men's businesses could handle the results. Or the men themselves for that matter.
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2018 11:52 am Title: FORWARD THINKING and ROOT CONVERSATIONS
I love your mom. Glenda is that for Brian, who could stand a few pounds. Nice that Hunter will be working for Kinnetic. Justin will be working with Thorne sooner rather than later it seems.
Date: Aug 01, 2018 9:11 am Title: FORWARD THINKING and ROOT CONVERSATIONS
As usual, great chapter. Thanks for the explanation on the title. I had heard something like that before and boy it is true. Just some people are never lucky enough to have those people in their lives. So yes, cherish every moment if you are indeed one of the lucky ones.
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2018 6:26 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 2: GATHERING EVIDENCE
I'm liking this DA. He's going beyond what another would normally. So Freeman is a loose cannon and could blow this case to pieces?
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2018 4:56 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 2: GATHERING EVIDENCE
So many people going down because of their jealousy and greed.
They all wanted to control how Brian and Justin live their lives and now they are the ones who's lives will be micromanaged.
Since all of Russo's cases are being reviewed that means Hobbs can tried for real this time since the fix was in before and his parents can be charged with bribery of a public official.
I would go with arraigned separately but tried together cause it will leave them all scrambling to blame the other.
Is Peter the link or someone/thing else?
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
Date: Jul 30, 2018 4:28 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 2: GATHERING EVIDENCE
What a massive viper's nest! I hope the attorneys are sure that there isn't any way to fail the trial(s).
Date: Jul 30, 2018 3:06 pm Title: REAL TALK
Very interesting background for Joan; I hope Brian will try to move on with her. I loved the "trick" part.
The kids are quite smart to get information then to get away.
Date: Jul 30, 2018 2:08 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 2: GATHERING EVIDENCE
All the players are getting into place. This trial is going to be a doozie. Michael is going down and the others will follow like dominoes. I can't wait for this trial to begin. I would suggest Brian and Justin going away for a few weeks during the trial but will settle on a few weeks after that they'll need to recoup.
It's gonna get ugly.