Date: Sep 03, 2018 7:16 pm Title: A MEETING OF THE WHINE
Oh Nichelle... Another great chapter. I'm glad Joan has grown-up, realizing her mistakes, and reaching out, trying to rectify them. And now, flirting her way toward a relationship. Hahaha... for Claire. She might have always thought herself to be a smart business woman, but only a silly whore is stupid enough to spill her guts the way she did. Did she not notice how put together Joan was, and she wasn't drunk, not even tipsy? She explained extortion from Craig, Michael, and Lindsay, but she never gave an explanation about Lance Freeman. Hmm... Claire's Power of Attorney... Is that in regards to her children too? Thank you for this truly amazing story. You are an AWESOME author. How you can come up with so many plot twists, is right up there to thee amazing Mary Higgins Clark...
Hugs, Cathy
Date: Sep 03, 2018 7:10 pm Title: YOU THINK YOU CAN CHALLENGE ME, BOY?
Love Justin Taylor smackdowns. They're so pretty. Looks can be so deceiving. Ha!
Both the chin rat and Troy really should take his words to heart. If not, they could chalk it up to lesson learned.
Ok got to give Avery a nod for calling Brian in the first place. Guest he was surprised when Justin walked in too.
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2018 5:21 pm Title: A MEETING OF THE WHINE
My my my Joan Kinney Flirting!
Perhaps Joan might start enjoying life after all and perhaps life might start enjoying Joani, n life you can never have too many friends ;)
Date: Sep 03, 2018 4:46 pm Title: A MEETING OF THE WHINE
Whoa, what have you done to Joanie? That's an amazing development!
Date: Sep 03, 2018 3:38 pm Title: A MEETING OF THE WHINE
Okay, I'm glad Joan got Claire to admit those things, yay but...omg I cannot for the life of me imagine Mrs. Joan Kinney flirting and actually going on a date. Sorry, I guess I'm gonna have to work on that! lol
Date: Sep 03, 2018 3:19 pm Title: A MEETING OF THE WHINE
Great chapter. One step closer to the idiots getting what they deserve. Yeah !!! hope you are doing well. Enjoy the holiday if you are celebrating.
Date: Aug 31, 2018 2:16 am Title: YOU THINK YOU CAN CHALLENGE ME, BOY?
Oh darn- I thought I had another chapter to read. this story has more twists and turns than a roller coaster- but I love it. Lindsay and Michael are so toast- Love the way you are unfolding the story
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2018 7:02 pm Title: YOU THINK YOU CAN CHALLENGE ME, BOY?
Yes Lindsay could be hiding money in plain sight or something in plain something she wants to guarantee that no one finds especially Mel, Brian or Justin.
Poor little Lindsay is still playing a power trip only she never knew Justin is a bloodhound for a good mystery.
And Brian will do what he can to help Justin solve it so he can reap his rewards.
Troy and Gardner should've stayed out of this causes their days are numbered.
What happened before was practically a love tap Now it is Seek and Destroy Without Mercy.
Let The Fun Begin ;)
Date: Aug 29, 2018 1:02 pm Title: YOU THINK YOU CAN CHALLENGE ME, BOY?
I love how Brian is just figuratively running behind Justin as he said Justin is a bloodhound and Brian is really enjoying watching Justin take apart their enemies. Brian gets in your face territorial but Justin comes at you from the side and front and waspy
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2018 12:36 pm Title: YOU THINK YOU CAN CHALLENGE ME, BOY?
Troy still doesn't get it. Can't wait to see what Justin finds in Lindsay's packets. The mystery is killing me.
Date: Aug 29, 2018 4:37 am Title: YOU THINK YOU CAN CHALLENGE ME, BOY?
He’d better figure the shit out quickly or I might just end up in jail… for killing Lindsay! God... I loved that line. At least Ethan knows enough to tow the line, now. But, undoubtedly, Troy is still in Stupid Mode. I mentioned in my last review regarding Lindsay setting up Mel. Maybe with Justin the Bloodhound on Lindsay trail, Mel can steer clear of trouble. Once again. AWESOME chapter, Nichelle... Thanks for the update, and looking forward to the next.
Hugs, Cathy
Date: Aug 29, 2018 3:40 am Title: YOU THINK YOU CAN CHALLENGE ME, BOY?
No blood? I don't think that will stop Toy boy; Ethan is maybe out now.
Justin is sniffing Lindsey's BS.
Author's Response:
400? Seriously! OMG!!!! Thanks so much, Claire!
As for the chapter, only time will tell with Troy, but Justin certainly left an impression, LOL. Ethan is all about self-preservation. I swear the boy needs a keeper! But I doubt Avery is up for the job, SMH.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 29, 2018 2:39 am Title: YOU THINK YOU CAN CHALLENGE ME, BOY?
Great update. Little by little the pieces are coming together. Terrific wriing.
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2018 7:32 pm Title: THE TIES THAT BIND...AND THE ONES THAT DON'T
If Gardner is behind this stupid plan Troy is trying to get Ethan into so he can be the Fall Guy, then he is about to learn you don't mess with The Taylor-Kinneys Ever!!!
Lindsay using Mel means she had a plan in motion all along and is now putting it to use, to save herself while also destroying Mel for her betrayal, makes me wonder what plans she has set up for Brian that she is about to in act for Gus betrayal?
Troy the Dumbass is about to learn When You Mess With The Bull You Don't Just Get The Horns.
Spying for Gardner may just be his undoing?
A video of Brian and Justin having sex is more likely to get some engines reviving even if others jump ship, they will still be successful, of course if they can find out who Troy is working for they can use them or scare them with the threat of a lawsuit.
I feel bad for Peter he is stuck not knowing what may happen to him since Claire and Craig are going to jail.
What Will Happen to John and Peter?
Date: Aug 22, 2018 8:32 pm Title: THE TIES THAT BIND...AND THE ONES THAT DON'T
I hope Mel doesn't get caught in Lindsay's machinations.
Troy, then Ethan are going to see how Brian deals with mean dummies. The idiot suits Ethan very well.
When has this video been done? Is it really public sex? They are not shy, but I doubt they were outside of Babylon or the baths. They aren't stupid enough.
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2018 6:22 pm Title: THE TIES THAT BIND...AND THE ONES THAT DON'T
When attempting to be covert it is best not to do it out in the open like an Amateur smh
Troy and Ethan are going to wish they had never heard of Brian and Justin cause Brian is about to destroy them.
Since is Troy working for Gardner to sabotage Kinnetik and did Brian hear about the video?
Who else is trying to destroy Brian and Justin?
Typical Lindsay look contrite with one face while stabbing you in the back with the other.
So what is Lindsay hiding that is about to implode her world?
Justin should delegate work out so he doesn't burn out before the month is done.
So many twists and I can't to find out what happens next :)
Glad you're feeling better <Hugs>
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2018 12:19 pm Title: THE TIES THAT BIND...AND THE ONES THAT DON'T
More mysteries to be solved. First Mel and now Ethan.
Date: Aug 22, 2018 11:51 am Title: THE TIES THAT BIND...AND THE ONES THAT DON'T
Omg is Ian as delusional as Michael?? There's medication for that dude! Is Troy Perkins, Ted's Troy from Pride? How many more people that work at Kinnetik have it in for our boys?
Date: Aug 22, 2018 10:52 am Title: THE TIES THAT BIND...AND THE ONES THAT DON'T
Hehehe... Good Job Nichelle! One village idiot, well, maybe two, are caught red-handed. Ethan totally deserved what he's getting. He can't say Avery didn't warn him, and more than once. Why he ever was delusional to think he was a match for Brian, I'll never know. Surely, he must realize even if Brian wasn't in the picture, Justin still wouldn't want anything to do with him. Troy. Hmm... I hope he knows, his job just probably got cancelled. Hopefully, Avery or Ethan, speak up about the video, incase Brian didn't catch that part. Mel... Now, what pray tell has Lindsay done? Will it get Mel in trouble, too? Then there is the other two cohorts Troy was talking about. Is that our dear Eric and Christian? It just seems that Christian really shouldn't have any reason to see harm come to Justin. From what Justin said, I can't imagine Christian wanting anything to do with Troy. Plot twists, Lady... You are the master. I so, so very much am enjoying this story. Thank you for the quick update.
Date: Aug 22, 2018 10:30 am Title: THE TIES THAT BIND...AND THE ONES THAT DON'T
Oh what a good chapter. More mystery to the plot. Just love it. I can tell that you are feeling better by how great your writing is and a new chapter posted so quickly. Please continue to feel good. That is what is most important.
Date: Aug 22, 2018 5:54 am Title: THE TIES THAT BIND...AND THE ONES THAT DON'T
OMG! You are seriously writing twist upon twist in this amazing story! And DAMN! You even have me feeling sorry for Ethan! But bad things happen when you walk around with your head up your ass as Ethan is now finding out! Too bad for him that he didn't listen to Avery.
Hopefully Troy will be gone soon! No way does he have any kind of chance with Brian whether Justin is around or not! Poor delusional idiot!
Looking forward to more!!
*HUGS*
Deb
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2018 5:51 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED
Wow! Just wow. We learn so much yet there is more to know.
Date: Aug 21, 2018 4:43 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED
That's a new development which could change Lindsay's trial. What a life Brian had and still has due to his "best friends".
Date: Aug 21, 2018 3:17 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL
Besides, I really do believe that Brian is out there working to free me from jail, even if it’s behind Boy Wonder’s back. I chuckle to myself, thinking of the look on Justin’s face when Brian tells him what he’s done for me; which Brian will do once he realizes that all of Justin’s scheming and conniving can’t compare to all the lengths I’ve gone to prove how much I love him.
DELUSIONAL...
Date: Aug 21, 2018 11:54 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED
I really don't see how you keep up with all of this. My head is spinning.
I'm glad Lance' uncle clocked him with his briefcase. Lance was trickier than I previously thought.
It made me so happy to see this post. It's always good to see a post. Thank you