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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2018 2:06 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE

I admit to having trouble keeping up with who's who but it doesn't take away from the enjoyment of this and every chapter.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2018 1:40 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE

Wow, great chapter.  Love the names you came up with.  Just perfect.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2018 8:54 am Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE

I went back and read the interview between Jennifer, Justin and Craig, so I could see if that would tell me what everyone had planned for Brian, but didn't find anything. But reading that conversation between the three of them, I had my mouth dropped open, realizing this is what everyone in the courtroom was hearing during Lindsay's 'Alienation of Affection' trial. I remembered it being informative, but OMG! That painted Lindsay in a whole other light to the judge and her attorney. Just Wow!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2018 8:22 am Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE

You really couldn't help yourself, and just had to leave us with that cliffhanger, didn't you?  Why do I get the impression Sam really doesn't like Lindsay? You couldn't even tell us her reaction being called, personal trampy trampoline, cum receptacle.cock hoover, penis massager, and OMG... PAID companion! And Lord have Mercy, how ever did you come up with those names??? I really have to wonder how Lindsay is fairing with all her dirty laundry being aired. I just wish the courtroom was filled, repoters and all. I almost wish Brian and Justin were front and center, if only because it would be another slap in the face for Lindsay, knowing they were witnessing her humiliation and takedown. But Mel being there helps, though. I'm right there with Mel though... large vat of buttered popcorn and a two-liter of persi.  I remembered saying something similar in one of my reviews, and couldn't resist looking back, and I found it...  I think we better get out the popcorn when the court cases start, as it's gonna be a helluva movie to watch.

As far as Brian and Justin's talk, I hope I have this right. Aside from the obvious three,  Pissy Face is Claire, and Wanna Be, Chi Chi LaRue is Lance. As far as everyone trying to implicate Brian in something, was that that they were going to try and frame Brian for the bashing? If that's the case, sick, sick, sick. But Brian is right to feel like he's missing something with Michael, because Michael is definitely up to something, as he plans to bring something into light about Justin and truth. But, I can't for the life of me figure out  what that is.

I just HAD to see what Ron Jeremy looked like. Apparently, I'm naive and don't know porn stars. God help me, but I wish I hadn't looked. Googling him, had me looking at images of him, and low and behold, there's a full-frontal nude picture of him among them. EEEEWWWW! (Enough said!)

I'm so looking forward to the next chapter, and hopefully continuing where Sam left off. I really want to see Lindsay's reaction to his testimony.

Loved this chapter, and I am so looking forward to the next one.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 11:06 pm Title: AND JUST WHEN YOU THINK THE DEVIL HAS FORGOTTEN ABOUT YOU, SURPRISE!!

Deb and her ' You All Owe Me' mantra got kicked to the curb along with the little respect she was starting to earn from Emmett, Vic and Rodney.

Thinking she has the right to decide how her 'Lost Boys' treat the family that hurt them is none of her business, they as grown men can decide who they forgive and who they walk away from.

Besides her past behavior does not give her license to say anything since she used them as doormats to further Michael's foolish dreams and ended up losing them anyway.

She just expects that after sometime has passed that she will be accepted again with Total Forgiveness, but that isn't going to happen until she stops trying to control everything and everyone so she can be the Center of the Universe.

I want to believe that Deb will change but Michael hasn't gone to trial yet and like Brian says "Actions Speak Louder Than Words", everyone has heard enough of Deb's words let's see what her actions that don't concern bowing and breaking their back for Michael say?

Lindsay needs to wake up and see that where she is at is not a hotel and they will gladly break her of that illusion real quick, her showing up in court half dressed would've made everyone nauseous lol

Will their be press to see Lindsay in the over used red suit that compliments get over used Ass?

Mel, Cynthia and Amanda should be their dressed Fabulously in their best Ass-Kicking Expensive Ensemble.

Too bad Leda isn't there that would really set Lindsay off ;)

Will Sam Be There?

Michael and Silence would actually be a Blessing For The World.

He may think he has one up on Justin but his lies has lost him everything his greedy heart desires and with his cohorts joining him they can thank him for losing all they desire too lol

Fantastic Updates to Your Stories.

Glad You Are Feeling better :)

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 2:17 pm Title: AND JUST WHEN YOU THINK THE DEVIL HAS FORGOTTEN ABOUT YOU, SURPRISE!!

Jeeze, can't lindsay just fall down a flight of stairs and snap her neck?

 

Now, that's LONG OVERDUE!

 

I'm still reading, although I've become sporadic on this site.   You definitely fullfill all of my hater issues.  :)

 

Hope you are doing better and life is good.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 12:41 pm Title: AND JUST WHEN YOU THINK THE DEVIL HAS FORGOTTEN ABOUT YOU, SURPRISE!!

What is the saying? 1 step forward, 2 steps back? Yeah, that's Deb alright. Michael will never learn and Lindsay is an entitled idiot too. 

Glad to see the update! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 12:40 pm Title: AND JUST WHEN YOU THINK THE DEVIL HAS FORGOTTEN ABOUT YOU, SURPRISE!!

The three badons still haven't learn that what they've done is wrong.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 11:18 am Title: AND JUST WHEN YOU THINK THE DEVIL HAS FORGOTTEN ABOUT YOU, SURPRISE!!

 

 

Great update.  Mikey and the witch just never learn.  Glad that Deb might get it though.  Love this story so much.

 

 

 

 

 

great

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 9:47 am Title: AND JUST WHEN YOU THINK THE DEVIL HAS FORGOTTEN ABOUT YOU, SURPRISE!!

OH COME ON SNO!  I would have hit that milestone! It's something I've never accomplished doing! Oh well... Better luck next time :)

 

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 9:44 am Title: AND JUST WHEN YOU THINK THE DEVIL HAS FORGOTTEN ABOUT YOU, SURPRISE!!

Wow! Debbie was seriously losing it there for awhile. It really didn't surprise me that she reverted back into her old self over something so inconsequential. Her, everybody owes me attitude. But it did surprise when she started realizing what she was doing and was determined to change her ways in order not to be alone. We will just have to wait until the next situation rears it's ugly head and see how she reacts.

Michael... Sounds like he's having fun with Bubble! But Lord, now what does he have up his sleeve?  he’s already been proven a liar. It’s about time his penchant for playing fast and loose with the truth is brought out into the open. What is he on about now? He wants the lawyer to believe his side, but did he not already bear all to Brian? And regardless, isn't your attorney, even court appointed, suppose to defend you even knowing the truth conflicts with what you tell him?

Lindsay, Lindsay... Oh what to say? The guard should knock for permission to enter your cell? Where do you think you are? At a 5-star hotel? Btw... How do you knock on steel? Keeping a notebook on staff infractions of your mistreatment? In who's eyes? Come on now, bitch! They will laugh you out of court! You apparently didn't get the memo that as long as one person is aware of a conversation is being recorded it's admissible in court. It also helps to open your mail. And just how do you expect to make Amanda and Cynthia's life a living Hell from where you currently residing, with no resources to back you up? Remember... all your cohorts are in the same boat you are in.

Looking forward to her court appearance in the Alienation of Affection lawsuit. I hope Mel is front and center along with Cynthia and Amanda all wearing Emporio Armani dazzling suits! It will throw a wrench in Lindsay before the trial even starts.

Thank you for this awesome update, and for all the extra writing you have done lately giving us all these wonderful updates in your stories.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 8:25 am Title: AND JUST WHEN YOU THINK THE DEVIL HAS FORGOTTEN ABOUT YOU, SURPRISE!!

I'm cheating again to get to 500!

Congrats!



Author's Response:

YAY!!!!! I am still SOOOOOOOO AMAZED that this has garnered 500 reviews! Thank you so much for your continued support of my work, Claire. 

HUGS and MUCH LOVE ALWAYS!

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 8:23 am Title: AND JUST WHEN YOU THINK THE DEVIL HAS FORGOTTEN ABOUT YOU, SURPRISE!!

As if Lindsey could manage to get Cynthia all bothered.

Poor Deb, everybody is against her and reminding her that Mickey is her son in every aspects, even the worse.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2018 11:03 pm Title: HERE AND NOW

Will the lawsuit from Mrs. Sam Auerbach be heading to court before or after the other cases?



Author's Response:

Someday, I am going to figure out how you are in my head like this, LOL. I still have to complete the scene, so will probably be able to post the update tomorrow. 

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 8:57 pm Title: HERE AND NOW

Loved this! I think I needed it almost as much as the boys did! LOL!

Very lovely chapter and the way they connect is always inspiring.

Well done, Nichelle!

Looking forward to more.

*HUGS*

Deb

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 6:37 pm Title: HERE AND NOW

Powerful! Brian is finally admitting his happiness with Justin and the wonderful relationship they have.

He feels that something is really wrong as Justin doesn't speak; the worse would be if Justin didn't want to eat! I love how he used an old song to get Justin out of his mood and didn't force his way.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 4:16 pm Title: HERE AND NOW

That was a much needed connection that Brian and Justin both needed after their day of Emotional Hell at the hands of two truly horrendous people. And for Brian to be the one to initiate it and telling Justin those much needed words, “Yeah, Twat, you've caught me. I do love you." Well, this chapter was epic.

Thank you so much for their reprieve.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 2:11 pm Title: HERE AND NOW

Awww so nice! Just what I needed.....I love love! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 12:23 pm Title: HERE AND NOW

Short and sweet and always welcomed from you.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 11:33 am Title: HERE AND NOW

Omg so sweet and awesome that Brian did all the running and connecting in this chapter 

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 11:33 am Title: HERE AND NOW

Omg so sweet and awesome that Brian did all the running and connecting in this chapter 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 10:15 am Title: HERE AND NOW

Just the break they needed. Sweet.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 3:03 am Title: HERE AND NOW

Wonderful chapter.  Brian saying the words that Justin always longs for is perfect.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 3:01 am Title: HERE AND NOW

A Beautiful Moment Shared By Two People Who Truly Love Each Other and Believe That This Love Is Real and Meant To Be!!!

 

It wasn't the silence that destroyed Brian and Justin it was everyone else's opinions, expectations and denial that destroyed them.

In the silences is when Brian and Justin spoke the loudest and could hear each other clearly, when they let everyone in is when  the silences started to hurt.

This moment with Luther Vandross singing in the background and a few heartfelt words they are continuing to mend the pain caused by others.

Brian is coming to see that speaking helps and that actions don't always shout and words aren't worthless when they can mend a broken heart.

While Justin is learning that words spoken by someone who really loves you doesn't help without the actions that mean they love you loudly.

The family's opinion about love doesn't come close to describing what Brian and Justin mean for each other, because despite the grand illusion they still never understood what loving someone really means because they never found comfort in the silences shared by two people who communicate with subtle touches, deep soulful looks, soft smiles and their hearts.

They needed this moment and everyone needed to be locked outside the door.

Thanks for this Enchanting Chapter Truly made my night:)

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2018 4:53 pm Title: REFLECTIONS and DECISIONS

I am also wondering if Rita will be arrested too since her hand is just as dirty in this?

And I wonder how everyone else is doing with the new revelation?

I think maybe Nancy might have had her hand in this too it just doesn't seem possible Ron would do all of this and Nancy not be pulling the strings along with Lindsay.

Was Craig really Lindsay's only lover since Charles wouldn't touch her without radiation equipment and a hazmat suit?

Lindsay normally has one for convenience and one for protection, so is there someone who has some more insight into Lindsay and wants to settle a score with their conniving ex?

Michael and Lindsay sprouted for years they new Brian Kinney backwards and forwards, and yet they are surprised Brian isn't running to the rescue? smh

Debra Jane Grassi wants to leave Michael to rot but Debra Jane Novotny has Mommy Power, who will ultimately win in this power struggle??

The Next Few Chapters Are Going To Be Very Interesting ;)

 

 

 

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