Date: Dec 11, 2018 6:34 pm Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU
BEGGING FOR MORE!!!! LIKE ON MY KNEES BEGGING AND PRAYING FOR MORE!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2018 6:14 pm Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU
Gardner, Troy and Eric are idiots to hold that conversation in a public place but thanks for their stupidity, they have as much chance of this plan working as Michael does of getting out of jail and Lindsay not opening her legs lol
There has to be something Michael is holding quite sacred in that house in Palm Springs that would've got and kept Brian with him, Michael is an idiot but he is an creative one who is expecting all his dreams to come true once he gets Brian to Palm Springs.
A search warrant, booties and gloves will be good no point tainting evidence that can be used against Michael should also video everything too.
Deb can look for any excuse she wants but Nothing and No One can help Michael now.
The best thing Brian and Justin can do to protect their rep is talk to each of their clients and Lau everything out on the table and let them decide with clear facts Not Spin.
Take away all their smoking guns and leave them with with water guns which can't fire anyway.
Makes me wonder if Lindsay has something she is thinks will get Brian to bend to her will?
Birds of are Feather with the same pea brain which has vacated and in witness protection lol
Love a new Update to This Story :)
Date: Dec 11, 2018 4:07 pm Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU
Gardner, Troy and Eric might have something on Justin, but even if Brian didn't have the details, he suspected what happened during Sap's party. Leo might not like what he will hear though.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2018 3:38 pm Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU
Looks like Gardner's plan is going to fail. It would be interesting to know what that house in Palm Springs contains. Always enjoy each chapter of this intrigueing story.
Date: Nov 28, 2018 2:28 am Title: MEMOIRS FROM THE CENTER OF THE WARZONE
Thanks for the update, will look for more
Date: Nov 02, 2018 2:29 am Title: MISTAKES, I'VE MADE ONE HUGE, ENTITLEMENT TANTRUMS, and DID THAT REALLY JUST HAPPEN?
Love, love, love this chapter- Christian telling his dad off while watching both of them going to jail. Jenn's brother coming in- you do know how to twist and turn a plot. I may just have to read the whole thing from start to finish again.
Date: Nov 01, 2018 6:35 pm Title: REFLECTIONS and DECISIONS
I love all of your work, but maybe i've just been reading too much anti lindsay works because I'm kinda over the lindsay bashing, and the extremely bad run shes having. still a good chapter though
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2018 6:18 pm Title: MISTAKES, I'VE MADE ONE HUGE, ENTITLEMENT TANTRUMS, and DID THAT REALLY JUST HAPPEN?
Whoa Charles Alwin is in Town!
Wonder if he would like to come on a trip?
Lindsay needs to Seriously realize that n the outside she had some power but in prison she is a Nobody, Nothing a number on an orange jumpsuit.
All her plans are taters in a notebook no one wants to read but have to stop her next evil scheme.
Samuel and Christopher just learned that what little power they had is now gone, and soon they will be a forgotten thing in an orange jumpsuit.
Christian always had all the power and with Happiness he wielded it to set himself free.
All these trials are going to be so interesting.
But first a house cleaning party sounds like fun Michael and Lindsay will love the pictures.
I don't think earplugs will be strong enough.
Date: Nov 01, 2018 3:12 pm Title: MISTAKES, I'VE MADE ONE HUGE, ENTITLEMENT TANTRUMS, and DID THAT REALLY JUST HAPPEN?
Great chapter. First Mikey and Linds now the Hobbs duo. Fantastic. Love this story so much. Always felt that Mel & Brian could and should be friends.
Date: Nov 01, 2018 10:24 am Title: MISTAKES, I'VE MADE ONE HUGE, ENTITLEMENT TANTRUMS, and DID THAT REALLY JUST HAPPEN?
Amazing!
From Daphne to Jennifer, they were wonderful! How Hobbs Sr is going down at Mach 2.
Date: Nov 01, 2018 6:27 am Title: MISTAKES, I'VE MADE ONE HUGE, ENTITLEMENT TANTRUMS, and DID THAT REALLY JUST HAPPEN?
Oh for funny! I could just picture the surprised and furious faces of Christopher and Samuel when they realized the games were up. Gotta wonder what all the police found in Samuel's offices. I wanted to grab and squeeze Samuel's balls, very hard, when he told Daphne, you there, little Chanders. I want a cup of black coffee now. Then proceeded to tell her, I do not appreciate your insolence, young lady! What an arrogant jackass he is. And Christian is THE OWNER of Hobbs Construction, while Samuel and Chris get to go play, "Don't drop the soap!" It was also nice to see the arrival of Charles Alwin.
So sad to see Lindsay got her little journal taken away :) I had to gloat when Lindsay realized that Amanda got her money back... Via Mel. Lindsay thought she was so smart attacking Martin Fisher, but just found out it was all in vain. Now she has a loss of $30K. The thing I don't understand, why was that money not seized/put a hold on it, what with the charges Lindsay is facing?
Very good, satisfying chapter. Lots of good things happening.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Nov 01, 2018 5:11 am Title: MISTAKES, I'VE MADE ONE HUGE, ENTITLEMENT TANTRUMS, and DID THAT REALLY JUST HAPPEN?
OMG! Nichelle, you write some of the best twists and turns! Samuel, Sr. and Christopher are finally going to pay for all their misdeeds, but mostly for what they did to Justin, Brian and Christian.
Looking forward to more soon!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Oct 31, 2018 6:23 pm Title: MEMOIRS FROM THE CENTER OF THE WARZONE
Sam is hilarious!!! His language is so full of imagery and in your face! Poor judge.
A meeting with Sam and Debbie could be very funny to watch.
Great update! Thank you Nichelle.
Date: Oct 31, 2018 10:10 am Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
OMG Lindsay is getting sucker punched big time yay yay yay 🤣🤣 I am not so silently cheering with this court case as I reading it 👌👌 Good job I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2018 3:16 am Title: MEMOIRS FROM THE CENTER OF THE WARZONE
Everything Sam said on the stand under oath is Completely True and he helped to destroy any vestige of innocence Lindsay would try to play on the stand.
Sam is finally ready to grow up and embrace his responsibility, he protected Melanie, Gus and his kids from Lindsay as best he could.
Sam isn't Perfect but he is ten times more decent than Lindsay.
Melanie giving Amanda the money and Lindsay finding out later that she lost and her coffers are a mite dwindled will piss her off so much h.
But it is Always Tthe Clever Ones Who Are The Most Stupid!!
Lindsay attacking her attorney, her vile letter and no one willing to take her case shows how far reaching and disgusting her rancid behavior has lost her.
If course Lindsay despises Jennifer, Cynthia, Amanda and Melanie they are everything she will never be and will become more when she is long gone.
Melanie was the rug Lindsay wiped her feet on but now she is the Diamond that will blind everyone with her shine.
New charges and another court case to get ready for that ugly red pants gets to make another appearance...Argh!!!
Date: Oct 31, 2018 1:57 am Title: MEMOIRS FROM THE CENTER OF THE WARZONE
Great chapter. Melanie giving Amanda the money that Sam gave her is so just. Lindsay is just a vindictive cunt. It appears that all her machinations have led to none of her plans coming to fruition. Maybe with her rotting in jail, folks on LIberty can enjoy life.
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2018 1:29 am Title: MEMOIRS FROM THE CENTER OF THE WARZONE
Sam's a much better person then I would have given him credit for being. Lindsay will not be happy.
Date: Oct 31, 2018 1:18 am Title: MEMOIRS FROM THE CENTER OF THE WARZONE
Serial Cheater? And so much more. I KNOW I love to write long winded reviews, trying to pick apart chapters, to work my mind around everything, but this chapter covered one area. An area that has left me speechless. What a deplorable, wretched woman! What's left to say? Sam's ongoing testimony just kept me sinking further into disgust, for her vile ways. The letter she wrote at the end was the clincher. I don't think I can come up with a proper word to describe her. Why-oh-Why, were Brian and Justin not there to be privy to all this? Justin could of SO gloated. And I think Brian needed to hear everything she did in college, trying to set him up. Good... Court Dismissed. Verdict for the plaintiff. Put that in your pipe and smoke it, Ms Hoity-toity!
Loved Sam's Testimony! You wrote everything so wonderfully. Thank you for this quick update. And No Cliffhanger.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 30, 2018 11:55 pm Title: MEMOIRS FROM THE CENTER OF THE WARZONE
Wonderful chapter. Love that Lindsay got what she deserved and that Sam was man enough to speak up. Fantastic writing. Happy Halloween. !!!!!!!!
Date: Oct 30, 2018 9:40 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
that's one hell of a cruel VERY CRUEL CLIFFHANGER!!
Date: Oct 30, 2018 8:56 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
that's one hell of a cruel VERY CRUEL CLIFFHANGER!!
Date: Oct 30, 2018 2:56 am Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
Wow- Lindsay just spreads her legs for anyone, anytime as this is the only currency she has worth anything. But now, she is realizing that the currency is not really valuable and she will lose all the things that she thought she had sewed up. Great chapter- can't wait to catch up on your other stories. How you ever manage to write more than one at a time is amazing. I do good to get a chapter a month out for the one story I'm writing.
Date: Oct 29, 2018 11:08 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
Okay, I just read the reviews, and I have something to say to Blue.
Blue, I hope you are reading this... I know it was evil of Nichelle to leave us with that cliffhanger, but lord lady, NOBODY deserves to be locked in a cell with Michael and Lindsay. They would drive her crazy, and then she'd lose all her creative juices, then we'd be up shit creek without a paddle, because she wouldn't be able to write anymore, thus we'd be left hanging with all her wonderful stories, unfinished. So you owe our dear author an apology ;)
Otherwise, Awesome Review, Blue!
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2018 5:03 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
NOOOOOO!!! You Are Evil and Must Be Locked In A Cell With Michael and Lindsay! ;)
Lindsay tried to climb her way to the top tier on her back, knees and now that is coming back to destroy her.
Too bad Ron wasn't in court to hear that tape he would be quite surprised by what Lindsay tried to do to him.
Jennifer laid out all of Lindsay's sins with perfect Wasp precision which leaves her no way to really counter, because unlike Lindsay all of it is true and Craig's taped statement is on the record Forever.
Sam testifying is just another piece of Lindsay's carefully crafted plans falling into the gutter, all those lovely names he called Lindsay should be put on t-shirt lol
Amanda, Melanie and Cynthia talking about Lindsay was funny especially like the comment about the clothes, Melanie is dressing for the life she has now, not the prison sentence she had before, Brian and Emmett will help Melanie become the woman Lindsay never allowed her to be...Well style wise anyone lol
Those names Justin came up with are funny and appropriate.
Michael thinks he has something that will finally get Brian to dump Justin and choose him, can't think what that is yet, but he believes it is his Trump Card.
Brian and Justin getting out of Pittsburgh is good they need to regroup and strengthen their bond so when they come back their shield is impenetrable.
Plus leaving the others to chase their tails fretting about them is wonderful.
Melanie and Gus in California will help recharge her too and all of the spending time together helps the family dynamic become stronger too.
Too bad Ted, Blake, Emmett, Ben and Hunter can't come too but someone had to help hold down the home front with Jennifer.
Well Worth The Wait!! :)
Date: Oct 29, 2018 4:48 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
Oh this is delightful! Lindsay must be boiling to have her life made "public".
This is genius: "personal trampy trampoline, cum receptacle, cock hoover, or penis massager". What an imagination you have!