Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2019 10:09 am Title: WHINING, COOS, YELLING, SQUEAKS AND THE SCIENCE OF SCCCCRRRREEEEEEEECHology!!!

Many valuable points applied on show too. Being sweet Deb did expected Brian & everyone to give her things. I always liked Vic more than her. She should know "Respect is urned not forcefully taken". Concluded, her life biggest failure is Micheal (In QaF).

 

I hope your health doing better. Fantastic chapter! Love it. ❤:)

There is No hope for Deb. Happy with Brian's decision. Claire deep in shit, still brewing something? Craig too late to realize what he lost.

Justified in Lindsay's case. Her wrong doing pays her back in Big way.

Meanwhile whiny moron is choking (Mikey own fault), I feel worried for Justin. If Brian hear about Mikey's murderous thought for Justin? What will they find that house?

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2019 9:08 pm Title: WHINING, COOS, YELLING, SQUEAKS AND THE SCIENCE OF SCCCCRRRREEEEEEEECHology!!!

All caught up on the chapters now.  Wow, this story is great and your writing is amazing.  Hope all is well with you.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2019 5:10 pm Title: WHINING, COOS, YELLING, SQUEAKS AND THE SCIENCE OF SCCCCRRRREEEEEEEECHology!!!

Oh Hell No, That A -Hole doesn't get to Die cause he stupidly drank diluted bleach ok that is way too easy.

So Lindsay can't have kids anymore huh! Hallelujah!!!

That is a blessing for everyone so she can stop thinking her Snatch is made of Gold and no kids will have to deal with her genes, wish it could be ripped out of Gus but he will soon forget about her, so another charge of statutory rape?, maybe she will be in jail longer than Michael?

Being in confinement will drive her crazy because there will be no one to act around and being stuck with her own thoughts for hours will drive her to the insanity she is trying to claim and it will also give everyone else peace from her lying mouth.

Craig doesn't deserve leniency for the stuff he did to Justin to hide that he Likes Dick he is the worst kind of hater because he hates himself and turned that self hatred on his son who admitted and embraced the truth about himself freely, while Craig chose to be devious and hide in the shadows won't it hurt when that comes out?

Lindsay slept with Claire?!! Ewww!!! 

Well I guess she'll munch anywhere the price is right? 

Claire using John and Peter as her Get Out Of Jail Free Card will not work because there are too many people who are going to make sure she Never gets to those kids Ever Again, plus whatever golden information she has will help make sure she gets more jail time.

Deb has some nerve thinking she deserves credit for band-aids, gauze, alcohol, peroxide and meals  when she did nothing to help Brian that a nurse could've and did do at the hospital, she made Brian feel  wasn't worthy unless Michael benefited first and despite her conditions Brian still achieved  his dreams says Thatcher head games didn't work, the amount she spent patching up Brian's wounds is nothing compared to what he spent trying to keep her and Michael happy.

As soon as she pays back every cent Brian gave her he will cough up the  buck ninety-five she needs to call her friends who give a flying fuck.

Jennifer warned her and she should have heeded it because like Brian Jennifer doesn't say things she doesn't mean, Deb got a punch that was due for years and if she comes back she can get a matching set.

Perhaps it's time to let Deb go for all her words her actions spoke volumes and this leopard isn't ready to change its spots.

I kinda hope she tries to have Jennifer arrested so  she can have a cell next to Michael lol

W

OMG!!! SO WORTH THE WAIT!! 😆😆😆

Beyond Thanks For The Update!

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2019 1:56 pm Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 6: INTERVIEWS Segment 3: SO THIS IS WHAT YOU WANTED, HUH? WELL SADDLE UP AND LET'S RIDE!

Hi Nichelle, still going great on this one, with writing up to your usual standard.

I Have a few confusing points, where this story differs from cannon.  Could you help me clear them up?

1. Where in the series timeline are we roughly in this chapter? You refer to gus as a toddler but if this is around series 4 surely he would be 3/4 now, so not a toddler.

2. Next, is somewhat of an assumption from this chapter; Unlike in cannon Brain didn't actually work with Stockwell in his campaign? 

3. Again, in this chapter it refers to Debbie getting a life of her own and Michael not being pleased about it.  Is this referring to the night at Sap's party for Justin, while Michael and the others ended up in jail for the night cos he was pissed with his mom dating Carl?  If so I'm confused, as in this story, Debbie doesn't meet Carl till she goes to see the police in chapter 57.

Thanks Nichelle, keep doing the good stuff,

Deb.

Author's Response:

Hey Deb,

So glad that you are still enjoying this very eclectic mix of Canon and AU. The response to this has been absolutely AMAZING and I remain so grateful that all of you continue to believe in my work. It's kind of convoluted, or as I'd like to think of it, Rewritten Literary Gumbo. So now to answer your questions:

Roughly this story is based from Ep:309 going forward, only I've also shortened the amount of time Justin spent with Ethan in the process. Somewhere in my mind, they were together about nine months, and to me, it shouldn't have taken as long as it did for him to figure out that he and Ethan were a mix made in hell. It was like watching what would have happened if Brian had given into Michael's wishes and became a couple. YUCK!!!!! That was SOOOOOOOO NOT a welcome image! So that said, I've moved up certain canon concepts to make them fit my vision of what could have happened during this time period if the writers had but time and inclination. For example, Brian and Justin's relationship as it was post-bombing has been reformatted and rewritten inside the post-Stockwell era, where they were just starting to really get their relationship on solid footing. The events that are happening regarding Claire, Michael, Lindsay, Craig and Lance are intermingled between Seasons 1-3, thereby giving the story its AU track. Which brings me to how the Sap storyline fits in...

In this work, Michael wouldn't have liked ANYTHING to take Deb's focus off of him and his goals. This is especially the idea given when it's mentioned that Debbie was beginning to develop a life of her own. True, that in JT2U, Debbie didn't officially meet Carl until much later, but she would have certainly been involved with other things. Remember that not only was she friends with Jennifer during that time, but that she was also the President of PFLAG, and possibly would have had social gatherings that did NOT include Michael. Her son definitely would not have been happy with that since in his mind, his mother's only reason for living was to serve him from the moment he was conceived. So that is why he would have gone to her house that night, as opposed to him stopping her from dating Carl.

Also in this story, Brian refused to work on the Stockwell campaign, and instead decided to dismantle it during his off hours. Gardner had the not-so-brilliant idea to gain the votes of the LGBT population by using Brian's openness regarding his sexuality. It backfired here because of a clause Mel had put into Brian's contract stating that, as a partner in Vangard, he could not be made to work with a client whose views were in direct opposition of his own. Gardner tried to override that clause, and enlisted the help of his lover (Lindsay) and Brian's 'best friend' to make that happen, figuring that between the three of them, Brian would bend to their wills especially if it threatened Justin in any capacity. Of course, it working on that particular campaign would have freed up Brian's time for Michael and Lindsay, and also kept him away from Justin. As for Craig's motive in obtaining the video, again it was to finally have something on hand to bend Justin to his will. All of them had motive and opportunity, except that none of them counted on getting caught and going to jail. So Gardner was the one holding that particular trump card, which has now backfired tremendously.

I hope this helped clear up the confusion!

HAPPY READING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2019 11:14 am Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 6: INTERVIEWS Segment 3: SO THIS IS WHAT YOU WANTED, HUH? WELL SADDLE UP AND LET'S RIDE!

Whoa! You are on fire Nichelle! Thank you for this great update.

The dominoes are starting to shake and will fall in no time.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2019 2:03 am Title: CHAPTER 68: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 5: INTERVIEWS Segment 2: A COMMITTEE OF TWO

Brian is going to be missed Justin didn't tell him everything but he will understand because that night is one of many Justin would like to forget, if course this means everything will have to be laid out in the table to take away any power Michael thinks he still possesses.

Howie, Sap and Gardener are not about to enjoy the tables being turned on them once Brian and Justin address this issue.

The web they have woven is about to break and this landing is going to hurt lol

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2019 7:10 pm Title: CHAPTER 68: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 5: INTERVIEWS Segment 2: A COMMITTEE OF TWO

What the hell? I hope nobody filmed Justin during the SAP party, even if nothing major happened.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2019 3:46 pm Title: CHAPTER 68: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 5: INTERVIEWS Segment 2: A COMMITTEE OF TWO

If the bad guys thinks they'll win, they are sadly mistaken.  I know you have this covered.  Thanks for another chapter, it made my day.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2019 8:37 am Title: CHAPTER 68: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 5: INTERVIEWS Segment 2: A COMMITTEE OF TWO

I want so much more !! The idiots hit again! What is it again? I really want to see the response from Brian and Justin because those who want to beat them have not understood anything. It's going to be bloody! Love this update.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2019 8:12 pm Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 4: INTERVIEWS Segment 1: THE FINE ART OF DIGGING DITCHES

Whoa, you are on fire!!! I love having so much updates!

You are cracking me up with Daphne's histrionic interruptions. Poor guys; they cannot get some hot and undisturbed relief.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2019 5:25 pm Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 4: INTERVIEWS Segment 1: THE FINE ART OF DIGGING DITCHES

Wow this interview is going smoothly and with everyone now important to Brian and Justin sitting around them they are showing quite an United Front to those ones who will and have tried to bring them down.

Justin should tell Brian about the syringes so Brian isn't blindsided later and besides holding stuff back is what lead to their relationship falling apart, best to proceed with complete honesty than implode because of lack of communication.

Jinx, Cynthia, Daphne and Jennifer are quite a Formative Force if they were in business together they would rule the world!

There isn't a scale built that can measure the screeching heard all of Philadelphia when these interviews air, ear muffs, cotton and loud music will stop the pain about to be inflicted to everyone's ears.

Oh The Fallout From This Will Be Epic, But The Rewards Will Be Legendar!! :)

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2019 11:01 pm Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 3: JUST WHO THE HELL IS GEORGE BELL?

Re-reading the story again and I wonder can Tara and Chase she Lindsay for Intentional Termination of a Fetus?

And did Craig spend some of Jennifer's money to pay for Claire and his gambling and Lindsay?

What about Rita's part in this story and her trying to get custody of Hunter?

I get the feeling John Sr. wouldn't mind moving B back to Pittsburgh now but I hope he won't take out his anger in Claire against Peter?

Sorry to be a pain just was wondering about some stuff keep up the writing it is so good I am on the edge of my seat :)

 

Author's Response:

Hey Blue,

 

No sweat!! Just know that I haven't forgotten any of these particular arcs/ storylines. It's just going to take some time to get through it all. John Senior and the kids reunion will be coming up soon (actually within the next 5 chapters or so, since I have to split the actual 'Interview' chapters- it's a MONSTER if kept altogether), so definitely stay tuned on that development. As for Rita, her day of reckoning is certainly coming... and it won't be something she's going squirm her way out of. For some reason she has always put me in the mind of a red-haired, poor man's Lindsay. Hmm, could be interesting!

HAPPY READING AND HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2019 7:38 am Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 3: JUST WHO THE HELL IS GEORGE BELL?

I get it. George is good guy, he isn't like Howard. Hopefully George will bring Truth out. Nice telling Howard Off. Howard still vicious (like Micheal & Lindsay). Glad to know Micheal is on lockdown.

I enjoyed Justin confronting Howard (its awesome like first one in show). Howard stood no chance against TK's. Brian's Mini-RAGE Justin Indeed. Proud of Daphne for kicking Howard out.