[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2019 7:19 pm Title: CHAPTER 76: THE GIFT OF GOODBYE
It was hard to get Deb to realize what she did was wrong. Whether she learns will be up to her.
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2019 5:25 pm Title: CHAPTER 76: THE GIFT OF GOODBYE
Great chapter. Terrific idea getting Debbie away from everyone. And, ah, Savannah, what a great choice. Love that city. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2019 5:04 pm Title: CHAPTER 76: THE GIFT OF GOODBYE
Yes Deb leaving town is a blessing for everyone they don't need to keep looking over their shoulders waiting for her to strike out again, she has done that too many times and they all need to decompress from her need to control everyone around her and Michael.
Maybe Savannah, Georgia will be a good place for her to start over and Blanche is who Deb needs to make Her see that her way of loving comes with too many emotional scars.
As a mother who has gone through a similar experience with her own child Blanche will be able to get Deb to truly face the reality that Michael is never coming home and that blaming Brian is just an excuse that no one besides her was buying.
Stephen was completely right about Deb and her treatment of Brian, Justin, Ted and Emmett she spent so many years bullying everyone to take care of Michael it never once occurred to her that they would fight back only this time they wouldn't back down but take Deb head on and to Hell with the consequences.
She got tired of catering to Michael so made everyone else do it so she could get a break and now they all see Michael and Deb for what they really are and they ended the cycle before it could consumer them.
Brian, Justin, Ted and Emmett will forgive Deb because to not to gives her a foot hole they must forgive her to move beyond her.
Just like Nancy must forgive herself for not being a good mother to both her daughters she must forgive Lindsay and make amends with Lynette to heal her own heart.
Now whether Deb can forgive herself that is up to her but she has to realize that forcing her will and herself into everyone's life will not work anymore.
Her Family is shattered beyond repair and it is time she learned to love herself and admit that she was abusing Brian, Ted, Emmett and Justin.
Thanks For the Update 😃
Date: Jul 23, 2019 2:26 am Title: CHAPTER 75: DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL... BUT THEN AGAIN SINCE YOU TOOK IT THERE...
Go Daphne- loved the meeting and Brian quietly supporting Justin. Justin getting mad was so beautifuly written.
Date: Jul 21, 2019 7:11 pm Title: CHAPTER 75: DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL... BUT THEN AGAIN SINCE YOU TOOK IT THERE...
Love it, thanks for update
Date: Jul 21, 2019 10:17 am Title: CHAPTER 75: DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL... BUT THEN AGAIN SINCE YOU TOOK IT THERE...
Lol Justin and Daphne the power of two awesome take down
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2019 12:44 am Title: CHAPTER 75: DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL... BUT THEN AGAIN SINCE YOU TOOK IT THERE...
Fantastic chapter. Love when Justin is the powerful one and how Brian admires him. Wonderful writing, as always.
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2019 11:52 am Title: CHAPTER 75: DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL... BUT THEN AGAIN SINCE YOU TOOK IT THERE...
I can't believe that Eric and Troy actually thought they'd get away with what they did. Love Daphne and Hunter.
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2019 6:41 am Title: CHAPTER 75: DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL... BUT THEN AGAIN SINCE YOU TOOK IT THERE...
My first order of business here is... sorry about the bomb threat last review.. Yeah... Must have been having an overly emotional night. Didn't help that we went to adopt a dog that had been abused and starved by it's owner that day...
Anyway... THIS WAS AWE----SOME!!!! AWESOME! And funny!!! Anytime you have idiots issuing threats that are so ridiculous, it's nothing but funny
I just wish Justin would have asked Troy just WHY he kept screaming for BRIIIAAANNN!!!! Did he honestly think he was held in high esteem in Brian's book? If I recall, when Troy visited Brian in his office and offered to take Justin's place, Brian was not very nice when he declined. Also, in their packets for their attorneys, there should have been something about how they THREATENED other employees with the loss of their jobs if they didn't follow their directives, when they had no such power to do so.
Ah yes, they will definitely need Prep H where they are headed, but will they be allowed to bring it in?? And what is this regarding Gardner? Has new evidence come to light we are not aware of yet?
I do hope the meeting was taped/videoed, so that Troy's scream of killing Justin is documented. And if it's not, they have MANY witnesses to the account... also a they have MANY witnesses... who saw NOTHING!!! Does Daphne REALLY need representation???
I hope when they both come to, either the police or FBI are there to collect their asses, because they have fair warning now. What will it take for both of them to turn tail and run?
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2019 4:24 am Title: CHAPTER 75: DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL... BUT THEN AGAIN SINCE YOU TOOK IT THERE...
Tory & Eric are Idiots & total goner. Gardener *Vain is doomed. You go Daphne! Brilliant! So is Justin. Love Mini-Rage indeed. Great! More Please. â
Date: Jul 20, 2019 2:04 am Title: CHAPTER 75: DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL... BUT THEN AGAIN SINCE YOU TOOK IT THERE...
Excellent chapter
mary Traynor.
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2019 1:26 am Title: CHAPTER 75: DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL... BUT THEN AGAIN SINCE YOU TOOK IT THERE...
Damnnnn!!!! They Got Knocked The F#$k Out!!!!
Daphne is very scary when she is Pissed and those idiots just Leary you don't want to do that bet Daphne wishes she could do that to Lindsay, Michael, Craig and Deb lol (Deb is very lucky Jennifer got to get first😂)
Troy and Eric will have a lot of explaining to do to the FBI so they won't have time to help Gardener who should be receiving his own tube of Preparation H within the hour and crying to a lawyer who would love to have their Asses handed to them by Melanie.
The three spared lambs are blessed to have a second chance to prove to Brian and Justin that they are worth keeping around better not waste it.
I wonder was the meeting recorded because even the judge might lose his decorum to see Daph hand out some justice of her own rock
Fantastic Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2019 12:18 am Title: CHAPTER 74: LOW BLOWS
HUH! I just figured out the *stars rating* bar.
Okay... something grabbed me and made me very sick to my stomach. Michael was actually having Hunter in bed, too? the insults I’ve endured constantly while being fucked by that little rat-bastard and his fuckbuddy, Lance… You didn't use the terminology *fu*ked over*... so that was the only way to read that. That literally brought tears to my eyes. Michael deserves Hell's Fury just for that!!! Debbie should be told in no uncertain terms what her "little darling" did to a "CHILD"who trusted in his care! Ooohhh... I'm shaking!
If that wasn't bad enough, reading the description of the boards did me in. I hope I am over-sentimental today, or else I am just too deeply into this story. And I am trusting you to have *stipulations* in their contracts. And here is where I place a threat on your life. If I knew where you worked, I would call a bomb threat in so you would be forced to go home and write the next chapter, so we can get the satisfaction of seeing Troy Perkins getting his ass canned. Yes, Eric is guilty, too... but as it was pointed out, the idea had to have come from Troy. I wonder how the other artists were even able to draw that crap. I do hope the other three artists that helped with those boards are also sitting in on that meeting, so they learn to go over heads the next time, and explain to Murph or Justin that they just can't work on crap like that.
The explanation coming to Brian in bed that night, I presume is about Michael and the vials. Was Troy in on that too? or Eric? If Eric was handling the money...
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2019 4:02 pm Title: CHAPTER 74: LOW BLOWS
Whoa! What a punch in the guts Brian and Justin must have felt seeing the boards! I hope Mel will find some ideas to avoid a severance package.
So glad for Hunter!
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2019 3:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 74: LOW BLOWS
Wonderful chapter. Love how Hunter's character is getting so much attention. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2019 1:40 pm Title: CHAPTER 74: LOW BLOWS
Love the look at what's going on from Hunter's POV. Now I can't wait to see how the meeting with the guys getting the can will go.
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2019 5:30 am Title: CHAPTER 74: LOW BLOWS
Indeed, "Low Blow" . Will be Fun to see Tory & Eric getting thrown out on their whiny ass***, not before getting a very hard lesson from Justin Taylor-Kinney. Both idiots should never have mess with Sunshine. Yupp, this Angel got horns around his halo too. No mercy, as whatever coming they deserves it.
Wonderful update! Curious to read next chapter. ⤠:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2019 5:14 am Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION
Debbie is an example of "what a mother Should not be like". Her moron son Micheal is another example. Vic should live free without their petulant demands.
Brian have Right about discard anything tied between him and them. (Let's see how Deb,Linds & Mikey react about it.)
Love Justin for being there for Hunter. (In Qaf, didn't like Hunter much under Micheal influence (father like son). With Justin influence he have better live.
Fantastic writing...☘
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2019 4:00 am Title: CHAPTER 74: LOW BLOWS
You Are Killing Me Here!!!
Might Have To Lock You In A Room With Deb! 😂
This chapter just goes to show that the low opinions of Lindsay and Michael, Deb really have no basis in the relationship Brian and Justin have, cause they never knew it and understood Brian beyond the surface they loved the artificial mask Brian wore to protect himself from hurt and never delved deeper cause they would see they have no place in Brian's life much less in his world.
Hunter (Squirt, Love That New Nickname!) is seeing first hand why Brian and Justin are Dynamic together not just as a couple but businessmen who want to see everyone succeed right along with them.
With their love and everyone else's support Hunter will soar past the stars to a whole new galaxy which Michael could never achieve and Lindsay didn't know how.
Even Deb could never achieve this level of success because it would mean she wasn't in control anymore.
Brian and Justin want their friends and family to hop on board the train but not let it be the only thing to help you succeed, they want everyone to soar past their own limits so when the time comes and the person is willing they can succeed too.
Troy is an Inferior Mongerol and Eric is an Infantile Pup who is about to learn that Pissing off Justin Taylor-Kinney is the Wrong Thing To Do, especially when he has your fate in his hands.
Drawing those vile boards is one way to have your nuts squeezed and it won't be fun or pleasant because Justin is about to grind them into powder and there will be an audience to watch your humiliation, better hope there aren't cameras in there because when Justin stings you it might play on a loop for everyone not invited to see as you are escorted out the door in your Walk Of Shame.
Hunter is about to get a crash course in this and it will be quite a teaching experience about how to destroy someone Wasp Style it will prepare him for others who might try to intimidate him and for the trials.
Fantastic Update!😀
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2019 1:05 am Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION
I Hope Hunter Scored High?!
Brian should know that Michael who couldn't get through high school with Brian thought of a plan to drug and kidnap his best friend to keep Brian away from everyone especially Justin.
The numbers Michael is racking up will have him in prison until time actually does stand still the man seriously makes Stupid Look Smart.
Vic preserving his sanity by severing his ties to Deb is one Hell of a smart move because she talked a good game but Deb was never ready to change, because it would mean everything she did was wrong and that Michael is wrong which is what she is not remotely ready to admit too.
She like Lindsay and Michael enjoys the spotlight Brian brought into her world because he is a determined force which can never be diminished and without it they are forgettable, she as expecting to be in her usual place and wasn't ready to run into a force like Jennifer Alwyn who rightfully usurped her place without trying.
Jennifer is the mother figure they all need because her only condition is that You Never Settle For Alright or Okay when it comes to love, You Settle For Awesone, Amazing, Heart-Stopping, Never Ending Love or Nothing At All!
She loves them all flaws an all and he doesn't demand or expect them to love her in return and that is what makes her the woman they can admire and love with Great Respect. (And She Isn't Much Older Than Them)
Brian not being Deb or Michael's POA is the last real time they have to him and once that is gone they are really on their own. (Could Lindsay have one naming Brian that Mel.doesn't know about?)
The ones playing follow the leader at Kinnetik are going to wish they had skipped that game cause Justin is a force you don't want to reckon and bullying Hunter is helpful either.
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2019 12:06 pm Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION
This just keeps getting better and better. Shame Deb has gone back to her old ways. It looked for a while as if she'd managed to see the light. From all the hints, it appears that your next chapter is going to be beyond good.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2019 11:12 am Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION
Amazing chapter!
The part with Vic is heartbreaking, but he has no choice.
The part with Justin and Hunter is great because they passed their weird phase, where Hunter will try to get into Brian's pants on any occasion, and they try being professional and honest. Good riddance of Troy and Eric; I bet Brian will be relieved as well.
I love this quote "I can’t even imagine where he got that impression since both Daphne and Cynthia are still very much employed here… and they speak their minds ALL THE TIME!".
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2019 12:53 am Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION
Wow, an update on my other favorite story all in the same week. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Terrific writing.
Date: Jul 07, 2019 12:17 am Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION
I had to go back a couple of chapters to remember why Ms Novotny had a black eye. (That's okay... it was fun reading about it again.)
Question for you, though... Why is Deb selling her house? Does she owe restitution for something? I've been racking my brain trying to remember. if I had any idea where in the story to start looking... I would be doing that. But... well... help a lady out, PLEASE! IF she owes restitution, will she have any money left over? How will she support herself or have any money to live on once that happens? (NOT that I give a damn... but I would think she would find it hard to get a job... and I'm fairly certain after her latest escapade and what she said to Vic... the offer of her going back to school and the restaurant job, is no longer an option. For someone who is not a true redhead... she sure has the temper of one. Believe me... my youngest is a redhead. Ouchie-Mama!
I wouldn't think that in light of the latest findings about Troy and Eric, there should be any repercussions to firing them. I'm surprised that they are still there! They both should have criminal charges against them, and should be occupying another cell with the other flukey's. Especially Eric, as he was distributing funds.
I wonder if Lindsay could possibly be Michael's backup POA....OH HELL... she'd pull the plug, too. I just thought of something... Deb must not be aware of Michael's guzzling bleach.
HUGS ~Cathy
P.S. Thank you for all the updates the last couple of days. You Rock!
Author's Response:
Hello Cathy,
The answer to why Deb is selling her house is back in the "Bracing for Impact" Chapters (there are 2 parts). It's still possible for Brian to file a civil suit requesting restitution for all the money he 'loaned' her over the years since it wasn't ever used for its intended purpose. However, she signed the house in Palm Springs over to him in Chapter 19, which is titled "You Have the Attention, Now what?". As for the rest of the answers and speculations, you'll have to wait and see if you're right! LOL
HAPPY READING AND HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 06, 2019 9:14 pm Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION
How many more chapters of this story till it's finished
Author's Response:
I'm shooting for 100, although it could be more, or less than that. Not quite sure yet, because it just keeps growing and outdoing itself. All I can do is say stay tuned! I can definitely promise that it will be well worth the wait.
HUGS,
~Nichelle