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Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2020 2:37 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

This is the Brian he was becoming on the show...I hate what they turned him into.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2020 7:54 pm Title: CHAPTER 71: RESTORING ORDER

As I am re-reading this story over again I was thinking maybe the best way to continue to help Joan restore her equilibrium would be for her to move out of the repressive house with all of its bad memories and into a place near her grandchildren but Jennifer and Molly aswell?

It is time for getting properly leave the past behind and to start fresh inns home of her own choosing, with things she likes in it including pictures of her grandsons and her new family and friends?

Time for Joan to open the Windows in her new home to let a fresh breeze enter bringing with it happiness and new days without regrets to start?

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2020 4:20 am Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION

thanks for update

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2020 11:55 am Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION

I can't  wait for California. 😘

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2020 8:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION

Wow the first half of the chapter was all about the boys being reminded that they are stronger together and to get their shit together. Man they really listened and have reached a level of unity that they will need to manage the evilness they are going to see.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2020 3:53 pm Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION

Oh wow, what a powerful chapter.  I love this story so much.  As you know I have loved all your stories, but this on and Before I Let Go have ingrained themselves in me.  Fantastic writing as always.  Can't wait to see where you take our favorite guys from here, but wherever it is, they are going to be together. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2020 2:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION

Enjoyable chapter and like all your chapters one that I'll enjoying reading all over again.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2020 1:04 pm Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION

thanks for update

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2020 5:06 am Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION

We present Mr. and Mr. Taylor-Kinney...

This reconnection is just what they needed, and what Brian is going to need to fall back on once they are faced in vivid color what awaits them in Palm Springs.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2020 4:01 am Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION

Do you realize how much I love this story?? It’s wicked sexy. It’s evil. It’s heartbreaking and heartwarming. You go girl!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2020 3:22 am Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION

Hello 2020!

Thank Goodness Brian and Justin have officially reconciled in their own Heartfelt, Mind-Numbing, Meaningful, Orgasmic Way.

They have solidified their relationship and hearts with Promises, Actions and Words that mean more then their next dream account, cause they are putting each other and themselves first while severing the last bit of control their haters had.

Brian and Justin have set each other Free by being truthful and honest with themselves and each other about what they want and who they want.

Yes they have more to say each other but now they can face the hurt and pain together instead of separate, their bond was strong before but now it is steel it can bend but will never break cause they have each other to lean on and gather strength from.

Deb, Michael, Lindsay, Craig, The Hobbs, Claire, Joan and anyone else will truly regret ever coming for Brian, Justin and their Family cause they lost before the battle even started.

That house in California isn't going to destroy Brian thanks to Justin it is just another obstacle to overcome that will lose its power once they confront it together.

Thanks For the Update

Happy New Year!

May 2020 Be The Best Year Ever For Yoy& Yours😀

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2019 9:10 pm Title: CHAPTER 82: GET YOUR MIND RIGHT

Next chapter please Tyty

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2019 6:22 pm Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

So many things I saw wrong about season 5. You are doing so many great things right for our boys. Yes our boys.😊 For they belong to all who love QAF!

Reviewer: DarkandLovely Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2019 8:32 am Title: REFLECTIONS and DECISIONS

Omg I am finally caught up. Are you still working in this story? It is so good, and just as they are about to head to Cali to see the house!!! Please keep writing!!! 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2019 12:11 pm Title: CHAPTER 82: GET YOUR MIND RIGHT

Thanks for update

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2019 9:36 am Title: CHAPTER 82: GET YOUR MIND RIGHT

Daphne and Melanie are right Brian and Justin must be solid together before entering the house of horror. I can not imagine what they will find and what Michael's jealousy and perfidy could have invented. I will have to hang on, I think. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2019 5:51 pm Title: CHAPTER 82: GET YOUR MIND RIGHT

Well, what can I say? I think between Daphne and Melanie's words of advice, it has maybe shown and made Justin and Brian realize they need to be a united front before landing in Palm Springs. Let last night go and move forward. Have them each say 'sorry' and let it go. REALLY let it go. I'm sure they can BOTH see where the actions of each other were coming from. Poor Justin, though. To know of Michael's evil intent, and he couldn't share with anyone without being scoffed at. I wish he would have used daphne for a sounding board about his suspicions back then.

My stomach is in knots anticipating what's in that house. (Can you photoshop a pic?) Pretty please! PRETTY PLEASE??? I know your description won't leave anything to the imagination, but... well, whatever. And can pictures be sent to Debbie so that she can fully grasp just how sick her widdle boy is and maybe that will help her to let him go and get on with her life.

Question... was Lindsay aware of the house, and it's plans? Because, I can't see Michael sharing, and on the flip side, I can't see Lindsay condoning without being involved. Yet again, Michael couldn't have disappeared (along with Brian), without Lindsay knowing Michael was responsible. On another flip side, both Lindsay and Michael were part of the Jason Kemo fiasco, and he was a practice for taking Brian, so that leads me to think that Lindsay had to have known of the other plans. Now, Mel mentioned Jason Kemp, I wonder if she is aware of the kidnapping angle and why Kemp was chosen vs someone else.

Poor Ben. I have to wonder just how much money Michael stole from him. Sure, Michael used Brian all these years, and had very nefarious plans in mind for him, but after the hurt Ben suffered at Paul's hands, to know he was once again abused and manipulated, and to know Michael was just with him to steal from him and use him, has to be very daunting. It will take a LONG time for him to trust again. At least Brian has a strong emotional support system with people who love him and will help him through this.

One last thing... I know Michael's money and accounts were frozen, but just how much cold hard cash did the buzzard have anyway? Will Ben be able to be paid out of that? I'm presuming the house in Cali is totally paid for... I'm still having questions. And I can hardly wait to see what all you have planned and how you pull this altogether.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2019 5:06 am Title: CHAPTER 82: GET YOUR MIND RIGHT

I Still wish fans out there see how Michel & Lindsay in disguise of friends played Brian & Justin emotionally often. Both did more harm than helping Bri & Jus lives.

 

Daphne prooved again a worthy friend of Justin & Brian.

Love the moment of Justin taking Gus in arms, hugs & inhaling him like for some sanity to grasp on. Beautiful written. 

ThankYou for update. Hugs.  ðŸ™‚

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 5:27 am Title: CHAPTER 82: GET YOUR MIND RIGHT

Can't wait for ca 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2019 6:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 82: GET YOUR MIND RIGHT

Brian and Justin better talk on this flight and let  it all go cause that house and it's contents is going to open a whole new can of worms and they will need each other and the strength they have individually and together to keep from going stark raving mad.

Brian has to forgive himself for always playing the defender when Michael did or said something stupid that would ordinarily get his Ass kicked, while also being the metaphorical punching bag for Deb who only wanted to believe or see Michael as the innocent baby. ( Or Lindsay as his best friend Wendy while she manipulated him for her own selfish purpose)

Justin needs to forgive himself for hitting Brian and for not telling Brian about everything Michael did to verbally abuse him before he tried physically.

They were both conditioned like everyone else to protect Michael and take his and Deb's abuse just to remain apart of this makeshift family.

They most talk, cry and forgive each other for the mistakes they made then move on together to protect and love each despite what Michael, Lindsay and others have done and will continue to do to tear them apart.

Brian and Justin will definitely freak out when they find out Jason Kemp was a dry run for Justin makes me wonder who was the dry run for Brian?

Melanie and Daphne were good friends to make Brian and Justin see that they need each other cause there will be times when their anger will try to get the best of them but if later after they calm down they can talk then the haters won't win.

Got Me All Teary-eyed...How Dare You?!😋😋

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2019 5:25 pm Title: CHAPTER 82: GET YOUR MIND RIGHT

Chapter loaded with emotion and great friends. Thanks to Daphne and Mel who push Justin and Brian to reconsider their encounter.

The pressure is getting high and I guess it will go up for some time.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2019 4:09 am Title: CHAPTER 82: GET YOUR MIND RIGHT

Things are still up in the air.  I can't wait til they find out what's up with Palm Springs.  Wish Emmett was going I think he could be of assistance.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2019 1:59 am Title: CHAPTER 82: GET YOUR MIND RIGHT

Wow, great  update.  So glad to see more of one of my favorite stories from one of my favorite writers.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2019 3:34 pm Title: CHAPTER 81: THE MORNING AFTER PILL

Omg. Just spent the weekend reading this and didn't realize it's a WIP😳. I'm loving this.  You have some many wonderful OC. There is still so much to cover. I can't wait for more of this story.  I'm Addicted. 

 

thank you for sharing this with me   Lol   I mean us  ðŸ˜

deborah

 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2019 1:02 am Title: CHAPTER 81: THE MORNING AFTER PILL

thanks for update

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