Date: May 21, 2018 12:45 am Title: Chapter 7 - Heal Thyself
You still brought out the tears when Justin panicked when he couldn't find Brian... but yeah, definitely less painful. I really like the "straightforwardness" of both Emmett and Carl. Being practical in the midst of chaos is comforting, I'm sure.
Date: May 21, 2018 12:12 am Title: Chapter 7 - Heal Thyself
That was great. I am sure you will find a way to wrap it up with hopefully a happy ending.
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2018 2:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lost and Found
Do you miss your writing partner? DO YOU? Think carefully before you answer ;)
Wow, this was INTENSE, but I already want to know wtf is going on. In my head right now, Brian and Justin hooked up and someone carjacked them and kept them, hostage... my thoughts could change once I read on.
I LOVE how Emmett is the one here that is having to help Brian, he's a true friend.
Date: May 15, 2018 11:05 am Title: Chapter 6 - Save Me
Either I am really warped or I syked myself out. I really enjoyed the story. I thought it would be much worse when you had warned us.
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2018 12:31 am Title: Chapter 6 - Save Me
Wow! I'm so glad they found Justin and managed to get to him in time. Love Emmett and his persistance.
Date: May 15, 2018 12:29 am Title: Chapter 6 - Save Me
Thank goodness they've found Justin! And I do believe Emmett when he said the boys both deserve a "happily ever after!"
Date: May 14, 2018 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Save Me
Almost all the torture? Nice TAG! I can only imagine. So glad Justin has been saved!!!
Date: May 14, 2018 8:09 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Save Me
Yeah, Justin is going to make it. Thank you for that. Great chapter. Can't wait to see where you take them next.
Date: May 13, 2018 4:42 am Title: Chapter 5 - Memory Holes
This story is so dark and dismal 😞😞 ..... even the moments of forced levity don't work for me. 😟 can't even imagine what kind of RL demons could be the catalyst for this plot bunny. Hope you do an exorcism on them asap....by the strength of this story the negativity has way too much power.
Poor Justin...poor Brian....drugged, abused and repeatedly gang raped.....how does a person come back from something like that with his sanity intact? It would be great if our boys were allowed for once to get revenge on all thosee sadist that is just as evil and twisted as the crimes those monsters committed against them.
Your stories are always brilliant and amazing....this one included....if only it didn't make me wanna hurl my kindle across the room while wailing and cursing.
Going put his one on the shelf for a while...but thank you for the quick chapter updates.
Author's Response:
I know it's dark and scary. Please don't destroy your Kindle though - at least not before I get the boys home safely. I'm working on it. TAG
Date: May 13, 2018 2:11 am Title: Chapter 5 - Memory Holes
Oh God this is awful and I just know somewhere in the world this is happening for real 😔😔 I appreciated the Emmett humour to counteract the scary realism of the abuse.
Author's Response:
I really hope that this is NOT happening anywhere in the world for real. Let's hope it's just in my angry mind... TAG
Date: May 12, 2018 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Memory Holes
3:45 AM...please tell me Justin will be found before the sun comes up? I love your stories TAG but this is stressful.....again I'm so glad Brian has Emmett! Yes Carl, get answers & memories from Brian to help in the search. Poor Brian though, omg he must be so embarrassed even though he's a victim too....
Author's Response:
Quick - go read the next chapter and you'll find the answer to your question. The stress is almost over. I promise. TAG
Date: May 12, 2018 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Memory Holes
Oh, poor Justin...
I think as hard as it is for Brian to remember what happened, I think he'll soon realize that he's helping Justin and that will hopefully make it a bit easier. It gives him a bit of control over the situation.
Love Carl's questioning technique. Emmett is a hoot!
Sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment.
Author's Response:
This is hard for Brian, but I agree that helping Justin will help him. It's likely to be a life changing experience all around, though . . . Your next chapter is up and ready, hope it helps. TAG
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2018 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Memory Holes
You gotta love Em. He's a rock during all this even if he does get distracted. Horvath is doing a fine job getting Brian to remember. Now if the APB on Sapp produces results we'll be that much closer to finding Brian's blond.
Author's Response:
I really love writing Emmett, glad you approve. I'm also enjoying doing a story with a different mix of characters here. TAG
Date: May 12, 2018 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Memory Holes
Great update. We are getting to the good parts. I can feel them coming. And, a little Emmett humor is always a wonderful addition.
Author's Response:
Yes, the good parts are coming. Soon. And then we can hopefully put all the torture behind us. TAG
Date: May 12, 2018 2:55 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Life of The Party
Hi Tag. I know you don't like being in the place that inspires these darker stories, but you are extremely good at writing them girl! This is really good!
Just in case you might need inspiration, if your mood improves, there are a couple of stories on Midnight Whispers that might help. They are in a similar vein: Gone but not forgotten by Moonshadow Woman and Missing by Icedcupcake.
Keep on typing!
Hugs
Deb
Author's Response:
Thanks. The writing does seem to be helping. Maybe, once I've got the boys all safe again, I'll be happier myself. Keep on reading! TAG
Date: May 12, 2018 11:01 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Life of The Party
Omg TAG I hope you’re mood improves soon! This is so horrific and sad. I’m not sure I want to read about the hell justin is going through. I know Brian will eventually find him but in what condition is what I’m dreading. I’m not usually a fan of fics in which one or both of our boys are tortured but this is so well written and you’ve sucked me in. I’m really hoping for a happy ending to this. Looking forward (I think) your next update.
Date: May 11, 2018 11:58 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Life of The Party
Omg I hope you get into a good mood soon this is scary
Date: May 11, 2018 2:39 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Life of The Party
I am grateful for your decision to torture the boys in short flashbacks. I'm not sure I could handle it in large doses. And I'm holding tightly to the promise of a happy ending. I do like Brian's possessiveness with regard to Justin, even in his inebriated state. Hopefully, Carl will help the search for our lost blond move more quickly.
Date: May 11, 2018 2:23 am Title: Chapter 3 - Diner Conversation
I'm loving your Emmett too!
Favorite Brian-ism: I hate it when anyone other than me is right
Just realizing this is my lucky night, as I see Chapter 4 is up!
Date: May 11, 2018 1:39 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Life of The Party
Jesus Christ! Thank God Brian has Emmett with him but he's so upset remembering things....Omg this is torturous but I can't stop reading .
Date: May 11, 2018 1:32 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Life of The Party
Difficult chapter to read, but it is making the story move along. Very eery and not a typical Brian & Justin, but it is really good. Hope this is helping your demons go away.
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2018 1:17 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Life of The Party
Learning more about what happened is making Brian sick. I don't blame him.
Date: May 10, 2018 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Diner Conversation
Thank God for Emmett!!! Find that jeep!!!
Author's Response:
Somebody should do a whole series of stories focused on Emmett doing a Miss Marples detective thing... lol. TAG
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2018 1:00 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Diner Conversation
Emmett is surprisingly helpful. Brian realizes that Michael and Ted would be useless in this situation. They know where the car is, love how you got them to find it, but will it be helpful. The fast food might be another clue?
Author's Response:
I love doing the Brian/Emmett thing here! Glad you approve. And I’m trying to be all logical about my clues and the steps our detective boys are taking, hope it shows. TAG
Date: May 10, 2018 11:51 am Title: Chapter 3 - Diner Conversation
Also love Emmett. And, like it or not so does Brian. Great chapter. You have really got my attention with this one. Great job. Hope RL is improving with each chapter.
Author's Response:
RL is still harsh, but writing truly does help me. I do feel bad about torturing the boys tho... TAG