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Date: May 02, 2020 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 9

Michelle would have been a great OOC.  Shame she doesn't last.

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Date: Apr 30, 2020 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 8

It's amazing that the Gallery owner could tell that something had changed just by looking at the pictures.



Author's Response:

I have always heard that artists paint with their emotions....

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Date: Apr 25, 2020 3:12 pm Title: Chapter 7

This is were I get a bad feeling about Dillion. 



Author's Response:

And you should.

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Date: Apr 25, 2020 1:26 am Title: Chapter 6

I love the place the boys have decided to go with.



Author's Response:

It has been a long time since I wrote that.  I am guessing you are talking about their little cottage in the garden.

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Date: Apr 24, 2020 2:24 pm Title: Chapter 5

Sunday turned out to be a great day.

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Date: Nov 25, 2019 5:26 am Title: Chapter 4

Lucky Michelle lost her job.  It's great that Brian will get what he's been wanting - Justin and an agency in NY.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2019 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

Things are changing and it appears that Justin is finding this a little hard to believe.  But we all know that Brian doesn't do anything he doesn't want to do.  Happy ending for this chapter.

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Date: Nov 24, 2019 5:12 am Title: Chapter 2

Now that was a surprise worth getting.

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Date: Nov 23, 2019 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Taking us to the beginning is a good thing.



Author's Response:

That was the first story I wrote.  I feel like my writing has changed a bit over time but I am glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2018 4:47 pm Title: Epilogue

I love this story thanks so much for sharing 



Author's Response:

Hope you enjoy all of them.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2018 2:33 am Title: Epilogue

Now on to read the next one.  



Author's Response:

Glad you like them!

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2018 2:33 am Title: Chapter 12

Loving this story, and sad to see Michelle killed.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2018 8:59 am Title: Epilogue

I looooove it !!



Author's Response:

So glad.  It was fun to write.  I am working on part 2 now.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 9:12 pm Title: Epilogue

The best way to piss your enemies is to get rich and famous and to show them you don't do fear. I hope Chris Hobbs and Craig Taylor will read about Justin.



Author's Response:

Hope you enjoyed the story. I am working on the continuation now.  This story is linked to the other story I have written also.  Thanks for all the feedback.  I hope you enjoyed the twists.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 9:06 pm Title: Chapter 12

Whoa! That's awful! Justin already felt guilty: that will make it 100 times worse.

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Date: Apr 29, 2018 8:47 pm Title: Chapter 11

Creepy!!! Justin made a huge mistake taking Dillon home as he obviously saw the code of the gate.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 10

Weird guy!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 9

Justin is so funny being so in need of Brian.



Author's Response:

I have been trying  keep it interesting.  I will be posting the second part of my other story this week.  Can't do LIfe without you.  Once that one is posted I will continue this one. Enjoy the end.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 8

Dillon is jealous and it's starting to show.

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Date: Apr 29, 2018 4:19 pm Title: Chapter 7

Brian can do romance and he doesn't hold back.

I hope Dillon won't try anything with Justin, otherwise it will change the mood in their work-space.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 6

This was very funny coming from Brian: "I don't care what you want to call it, I just want to be with you somewhere besides this bedroom. Did I just say that?".

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2018 11:31 am Title: Epilogue

Loved this!  Please continue.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I plan to.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2018 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 5

Brian wants to open a branch in NYC and he finds not one, but two people to hire who are both available and so very close to Justin... Huge coincidences.



Author's Response:

Got to keep Sunshine happy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2018 7:14 pm Title: Epilogue

This chapter starts out with Epilogue and ends with To be continued.  Great story though it ended sadly.  At least Brian and Justin are together.



Author's Response:

Yes, I know Epilogue and to be continued are contradictory.  The first part is done but there will be a second one.  This was my second attempt at writing.  My first story is also out there and I have a third one that will be ready to post soon.   I hadn't written anything in 30 years and am really enjoying it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2018 7:08 pm Title: Chapter 12

No, no, no.  Michelle dead?  That is so wrong, yet it is something I can see happening.

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