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Reviewer: mcm Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2018 3:17 am Title: Chapter 10

Good Job Mel..   :)

 

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2018 3:56 am Title: Chapter 10

well done.  Didn't think I could ever read a story where Brian had het sex, but this was very well done and believable.  Now you have to tell us about the trip and the "conversation"



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it.  It was my first try. The trip has been started and I have another story I finished this weekend that will be posted thisi week.  Hope you will look for them.

Reviewer: harperj Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 10

I enjoyed your story so much.  Nicely done!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it.  It is my first attempt at writing anything  since college.  I am having so much fun.  I will be posting another story that could be considered a prequil to this story although it can stand alone also.  Thanks agan for the kind words.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 9

What a summer they had! Educational indeed! They both got something from this and it must have shaped their future relationships.

Reviewer: BritinLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 10

Awesome fic LMAO well I ended up reading the whole fic even the HET sex 



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it (Even with the HET sex).  This was my first attempt at writing and I really enjoyed it. I hope to have a second one out that could be a prequal to this one but doesn't need to be and then of course I will do Part 2 of this one.  I don't expect any more HET.sex. LOL  Someone had mentioned wanating to read something with Brian and a woman so this is what I came up with.  

Hope you will look for the next one.  It has a little action/mystry in it.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 9:29 pm Title: Chapter 8

What a hot chapter! The two of them or with another "player", it's damn good.

I love the way they still have fun with others, but not in their bedroom.

Reviewer: BritinLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 9

Well tried so I ended up reading the HET sex LMAO 

Reviewer: BritinLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 5

BBLEH HET sex had to skip that part awesome fic thou 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 7

I fear the moment Brian will tell Justin.

I find Brian very prompt to go down memory lane with Beth. I guess we will read why in the next chapter.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 10

Sorry, I waited to review until I finished the story.  Once I started reading, I couldn't stop.  It is wonderful.  Great writing with a completely different outlook for Brian & Justin.  And, since I love happy endings, it was perfect.  Great job.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you like it. This was my first attempt.  It is actually the first thing I have written since college.  I will be adding a prequal to it before the end of the week. It is a stand alone story but definitely would fit with this one as well.  I think it is obvious what will follow this one in part 2.  Thanks again for the great review.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hot!!! And I'm not talking about the chocolate...



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it.  Please let me know what you think when you are done.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 10:55 am Title: Chapter 5

They are right: even if Jennifer is now open minded, she wouldn't understand what happened that summer. Only someone who lived that kind of experiment could get it.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 10:41 am Title: Chapter 4

The pressure is getting high, in the air and in Brian's pants...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 10:34 am Title: Chapter 3

Brian was finally able to focus on Justin: I hope he will be later on, otherwise Justin will suspect something is wrong.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 10:23 am Title: Chapter 2

Early cougar who smells "fresh meat". Could be interesting to see how Brian will manage this drunk and hot woman.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 10:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Intriguing beginning! I feel some trouble coming right up.

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