Date: Jun 10, 2018 1:14 am Title: Chapter 15
Terrific chapter. Love how it is moving along.
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2018 12:44 am Title: Chapter 15
Looks like Julian ran into someone else he couldn't intimidate he would be wise to leave Gus alone, but since that creep isn't wise he will face the wrath of people who aren't scared to take him on.
Justin asking Ted for help shows he is trying to do everything he can within the law and a toe out to save the forgotten.
Blake could be very helpful where Deb is too brash to get her point across
Brian is in love and that makes him more dangerous than anyone Julian has come against because fear won't stop Brian from burning Julian's world to the ground while sipping on beam and smiling in glee.
When Mel gets involved Julian might just wish he stayed hidden cause no brick, steel, stone, water or fire will stop her from ripping him apart.
Date: Jun 04, 2018 8:35 pm Title: Chapter 14
I love how Justin is starting to fight and analyzing what he might have seen without noticing.
Hunter hitting on Daphne will be fun to read about.
Date: Jun 04, 2018 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 14
So now we know why. Super cool. I love a good mystery.
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2018 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 14
I hope Justin finds out everything about Sapp and Stockwell too time for the dominoes to fall, right now they are just wobbling a bit but when Justin, Brian and Everyone else finishes they will be buried under all their cruelty, deceit and pure vileness.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter:)
Date: Jun 04, 2018 4:38 pm Title: Chapter 14
Should have known that the Sapp would be involved with Julian. Great plot forming. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2018 1:05 pm Title: Chapter 14
Love how Justin cares about kids, and Brian and Daphne care about Justin.
Date: Jun 04, 2018 9:44 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh dear so many people working from different angles I hope Justin, Daphne and Brian can stay safe
Date: May 29, 2018 3:41 pm Title: Chapter 13
Glad to see another chapter. I find this concept so intriguing. So different. Keep up the great work. TAG
Date: May 29, 2018 3:20 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yeah Daphne is here!!! Let's the fun begin!
The last sentence is a very long one for Justin and a very important one.
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2018 3:22 am Title: Chapter 13
Of course Justin knew Daphne felt something for him but because he never hid he was gay he thought it would last, Daphne reacted badly to her feelings not being returned and almost lost a really great friendship.
About time Julian got a taste of what life in a fish bowl is really like.
Justin is breaking his shell and embracing that life is more interesting when let some of the world in.
Carl will be good for Hunter cause he won't take any Crap and knows how to dish it lol
Are Mel, Lindsay and Gus being watched too or are they already somewhere safe?
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2018 3:09 am Title: Chapter 12
Daphne is a Hacker??
Love It!!
She is smart enough to act stupid but can Tue anyone into knots if she really wanted to.
Emmett talking to Justin and making him see that Brian will not let him go without one Hell of a fight.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2018 2:58 am Title: Chapter 11
Fire Ants are nicer than Julian when he doesn't get what he wants.
Justin must have access to something he doesn't realize is important and it has Julian scared that Justin might figure out what that is and it will mean his doom??
Ted is smart to take this leap with Brian it will give him the confidence to take more risk, living dangerous is more fun when Brian shoving him through the door lol
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2018 2:45 am Title: Chapter 10
Brian was right to challenge Justin to admit that something more is happening between them and that right now neither one can walk away.
If they stand together and fight is better than them fighting apart.
Getting Hunter to Pittsburgh and away from those selfish people is good, Hunter is another lonely person who needs to see that there are some people who can be trusted and believed.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2018 2:33 am Title: Chapter 9
Julian underestimated Justin he isn't he is a lion with very sharp claws and soon his Pride will rise up to help their leader destroy an enemy that has been oppressing them for years.
Having George as a backer will really tick off Julian and Gardner while also throwing them off balance and scrambling.
Smart Move :)
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2018 2:08 am Title: Chapter 7
Julian, Julian, Julian Brian isn't an idiot But You Are!!!
Ben was smart to tell Justin the truth know he knows he was right not to trust him, and his instincts were running right that Ben was hiding something.
This game of Cat and Mouse is getting more interesting.
Glad Justin and Gus were able to bound and Justin is coming further out of shell.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2018 2:02 am Title: Chapter 13
This just keeps getting better and better. Love how Daphne is on the right side. Just hope that Ben is on Justin side and not on take Julian down at all cost side.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2018 1:24 am Title: Chapter 5
Brian is just the teacher Justin needs because for either of them it isn't about getting off, it's about the slow simple pleasure of exploring something new with each that they have never shared before.
Perhaps Ben should try honestly before Deb gets involved??? lol
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2018 1:11 am Title: Chapter 4
Ben has an inferiority complex and using Michael to get to Brian will have him dealing with a Kinney Complex because Brian will do everything he can to destroy the puppet and his puppeteer. (Of course Deb would be better to take on Ben ;))
Justin kissing Brian shows the turtle is slowly starting to come out of his shell :)
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2018 12:59 am Title: Chapter 3
Ben is a jerk and Julian is an Imbecile with entitlement issues.
Poor Justin working himself into exhaustion for an idiot, thank goodness Brian showed up before he finally collapsed.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2018 12:48 am Title: Chapter 2
I always believed Michael knew Brian didn't live him but he just needed his Captain Astro to save him whenever he snapped his fingers or whined really loud.
Emmett finally realized that Brian is more than his reputation and by At Last stepping in maybe Michael can grow up and leave childhood dreams behind?
Julian is going to be a Big Problem.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2018 12:35 am Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
In the Silence Peace, Safety and Security Reign.
In The Noise Is Where Fear Hides.
Brian and Justin meeting and talking after just watching really moved me, I almost felt an urge to cry for them.
Just know I am going to Love this story :)
Date: May 28, 2018 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
Great update. Hope you had a nice Memorial Day. Thanks for updating today since there were very few over this weekend.
Date: May 19, 2018 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 12
Omg I love this I have just read the whole story to hear and yelled NO when I realised I had to wait for another chapter!!! Wow this is intense and such a absorbing story. I think we have many twists and turns to go before I hope a happy ending
Date: May 19, 2018 6:45 pm Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter. Love how this is going along.