Date: Apr 15, 2018 3:46 am Title: Chapter 20
Great update. So happy that Deb is standing up to Michael. Glad that it took Michael 3 days to figure out that Brian was gone. Love that they are together again.
Date: Apr 14, 2018 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 15
Good to see that neither Brian or Justin held anything back from Randolph. That man is in for a heap of trouble with Lindsay! I have to say he married the wrong person if he doesn't like public displays of stupidity! Lindsay loves being the center of attention everywhere she goes and doesn't care how she gets it.
Wouldn't it be great if the next time that Michael screeches in a restaurant because he's not getting his way, someone throws a glass of ice cold water on him! LOL!
Brian should write a résumé for Lindsay and give it to Randolph. That just might cool his jets and hers if Brian goes into great detail!
Hopefully Michael will have listened to what Brian told him outside the restaurant, but somehow I doubt it. That idiot is delusional.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
*Hugs*
Deb
Date: Apr 14, 2018 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 14
Well, Michael certainly got what he asked for by thinking that Brian would force Justin to show up at his store to sign Rage merchandise. And then to try and blame Justin! That's lower than low! He's lucky those fans didn't get ahold of him! Had they managed to get hold of Michael, he probably would have wound up in the hospital.
Wow! Lindsay is definitely delusional! Hopefully Randolph will be wise to her true nature and won't go after Gus.
So glad that Deb didn't coddle Michael but instead sold his collectibles and paid off his bills. And she made the very wise decision to get Ted's help. Maybe the two of them can get Michael to grow up and take responsibility for his own life instead of trying to get Brian to take care of him.
Gotta love Cynthia! Love her reaction to Deb showing up and taking charge of Michael! LOL! Not surprised that she thought maybe she was in another universe!
Poor Ted! He really is going to be a very busy man!
Great chapter!
*Hugs*
Deb
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2018 3:56 am Title: Chapter 20
Poor Mikey living in the land of delusion. Brian is where he wants to be and happy.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2018 2:51 am Title: Chapter 20
Brian got away and he feels peace which he never had before he is able to live his life now with no reminders of his title and no whiny little brat clinging to his Ass all day.
Michael is stuck at fourteen and he will never grow up he is in Never Land with Lindsay while everyone else is moving towards their future and cause he enjoys the past.
Sounds like nothing is working out for The Petersons or Lindsay hope they are prepared to reap what they sown?
Brian is Hot and Justin is the one who will be enjoying that for years to come lol ;)
Date: Apr 14, 2018 1:16 am Title: Chapter 20
Great update. So happy that Brian can be who he really always wanted to be and Mikey can't do anything about it.
Date: Apr 10, 2018 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter. But oh that Lindsay is just evil and Michael stupid. At least we have a nice Craig for a change.
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2018 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad that Justin finally told Brian about Mikey's visit. Craig is turning into an all right grandpa. Love how Emmett and Reese are getting along and how both them and Deb are siding with Brian over Michael.
Date: Apr 10, 2018 8:38 pm Title: Chapter 19
Craig seems actually sincere and he doesn't talk badly about Brian; I hope it will last. Gus being his grandson and Brian's son, maybe it will help smooth things a little more.
Date: Apr 10, 2018 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
Never in a million years would I EVER have thought to write that a scene with Craig Taylor was sweet! Gus is such a special little boy and I'm so Happy that Justin is taking Craig's desire to know him- to know THEM- as a family to heart. I would like to think that it's solely Cara's influence, but I'm beginning to think that it may just be Craig's own growth and maturity. The playful banter between him and Justin about 'distractions' had me chuckling wildly as I envisioned we all have that reaction to our parents sex lives and vice versa.
As for the lunch...Girl, you had me choked up with that one. The contrast between Michael and Brian is so evident there in that Brian truly has been the son that Debbie could only hope Michael would have been. I'm glad that Justin finally got around to telling Brian- and ultimately the rest of them- what Michael said. I agree with Em regarding Lindsay's involvement of the Dumber-mint Twins. Lindsay certainly would be eager enough to keep Michael close to sow dischord between Brian and Justin since she can't do it herself. And a large part of their M.O. would be to play on the insecurities of the newcomer. Too bad, so sad for them that Justin is not a lesser human being, but an equal to Brian in every way.
I'm looking forward to seeing where you take us on this journey! Great Work, Darling!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2018 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 19
Brian and Justin are doing the right thing by moving away to begin their new life together.
Lindsay is playing checkers while Brian and Justin are playing chess, she is such an amateur with no skills besides what she does on her back or knees, and even then she could use more practice <smirk>
Deb seriously needs to let Michael to walk by himself without her always there to catch him, he wasted money and collectibles and practically ran his store into the ground, Hell he doesn't even care about the store now cause he is too busy chasing after Brian, who is running as fast as he can away from Michael and Lindsay.
Hope Deb is prepared for Michael's hysteria along with Lindsay's, they are going to be foaming at the mouth to find Brian.
Emmett should take Brian up on his offer it's time he follows his dreams in of making others come true.
Craig and Justin are making some progress they were even able to tease each other, perhaps friendship is a good start to more?
Date: Apr 09, 2018 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 18
Huh...gotta say the whole Craig thing threw me for a loop. I was NOT expecting that at all! That was a great twist! Loved how he took down Lindsey and her parents. I got the impression at the very start of that part, that Lindsey was going to try flirting with Craig. I guess Nancy and Ron underestimated him. Hmmmmmmmmmw what's to happen now I wonder?
And then there's Michael. Oh boy. Is he delusional or just in a constant state of denila? Has he been saying the same shit for so long now that he says it by wrote and has convinced himself it's the truth? Will Justin tell Brian what was said or will Michael somehow repeat it to Brian hiself? What happens when he relizes that Brian is leaving or has already left. Now that meltdown is gonna be worth waiting for !! lol
Terrific chapter!
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2018 12:31 am Title: Chapter 18
Michael has it all wrong. Does Brian find out what he said? I'm liking Craig, this is a good look for him. Brian and Justin belong together along with Gus.
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2018 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
Brian and Justin declaring their love for each other is so...Ridiculously Romantic!!!
Craig s willing to start over and get to know Justin is good, he doesn't need to understand the lifestyle he just needs to show Justin this time around that love is more important than someone's sexuality, cause he won't get another chance at forgiveness.
Michael needs to put down the crack pipe and talk to a therapist cause his delusions are taking over his life.
Though it will be funny the next time he comes to the loft and finds out Brian has moved out, I hope it is during a viewing so others can see his behavior and have him arrested.
Nancy needs to wake up and see that not everyone knows down to a bank account, Craig was smart to walk away and leave The Petersons to face their own immortality, if Randolph is planning to divorce Lindsay and hopefully be truthful first to his kids, then the press about this sham marriage, then The Petersons are stuck out on that limb by their Damn selves without a safety net anywhere.
They can try to threaten Brian or Justin but with Lindsay's activities and the fact that she lied, stole, abandoned her child for four years, while engaging in prostitution with men and probably women with means who wouldn't be ashamed to talk about it in public, they have no ammo.
While Brian and Justin are more than prepared to be brutally honest in their assessment of Lindsay and her antics.
Brian was a stud who never charged for his services cause he didn't need too, while Lindsay has to spread her legs and open her mouth for anyone to notice her existence.
I'm sorry Lynnette can't get pregnant but I am so Happy Gus ended up with Justin and Brian, no child should have to suffer Nana Nancy and Grandfather Weakling, Auntie/Mommy Whore and Mini-Nancy.
Blood is enough punishment <shivers>
Good Chapter:)
Date: Apr 08, 2018 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 18
Hi Star, just wanted to say I'm still enjoying all your stories, including the ones I've re-read many times!!
This is definitely my current fave closely followed by You Belong To Me.
I hope you are ok & wanted to just give you encouragement to keep on writing the good stuff!
Take care
Deb
Date: Apr 08, 2018 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 18
Terrific chapter. Glad to see that Craig didn't side with the Petersons. Good job.
Date: Apr 08, 2018 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 18
The scene in the shower was hot hot hot!
Craig is very surprising, in a wonderful way; of course it's because his new girlfriend asked a question he couldn't avoid.
The Peterson are not yet out of the woods since Craig didn't follow them. What will be their next move?
Date: Apr 01, 2018 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh this story is getting better and better, but we know no one out does Brian when he loves someone. Great chapter. Happy Easter !!
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2018 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
The Petersons expect Craig to be the one to control Justin?
Are The High????
Craig has as much influence on Justin as they have on Lindsay, the only thing they share is their hatred for only who doesn't follow their edicts exactly.
They Are So Pathetic and Self-Absorbed!
By bringing Craig in they are starting a battle non of them are qualified to fight and the wrath of Brian and Justin that they won't be able to control.
Mel wasted her breath on the delusional, but at least they were helpful to let Mel know what is coming next.
Brian, Justin and Gus moving to Chicago will be good but first they have some vermin to squash.
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2018 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 17
Nancy and Ron won't know what's hit them once Brian decides they are a problem
Date: Apr 01, 2018 11:53 am Title: Chapter 17
If the Petersons and Craig associate to make Justin break, it's going to be bloody.
I hope Randolph will stay out of that.
Date: Mar 31, 2018 3:12 am Title: Chapter 16
I adore Gus so much. And I love Brian and Mel getting along. I'm glad Randolph seems to be on to Lindsey, and I honestly have no words for Michael.
Date: Mar 31, 2018 2:23 am Title: Chapter 11
Let go of the hatred toward Brian Mel. You two are more alike than you think.
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2018 2:05 am Title: Chapter 16
I’m loving this story so much- all the characters are great and the story is really exciting. The depiction of Lindsay and Michael is really well done, I can really hear their voices perfectly and imagine the expressions on their faces- that drippy manipulative smile of Lindsay’s, and Michaels sulky face ;) Brilliant story all around- I can’t wait for the next part! A definite favourite :)
Date: Mar 26, 2018 6:43 am Title: Chapter 16
Yeah! Leda is here and Mel is starting to go back to her true self, including kicking balls.
If Lindsay discovers that Gus' found is full of millions, she's going to be nuts, more than she already is. She better be careful because she will have to face Jennifer, her parents, Justin, Brian and Mel, then her in laws.