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Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2018 11:12 am Title: January 15

I need a cold shower.  That was so HOT!!!!



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LOL! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 5:32 pm Title: January 13 (Part One)

Another great chapter.  Just love this story and how Brian can deal with dear old Joanie!!!!



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Joan is one of those people who should have never been a mother; although, if she hadn't, then we wouldn't have Brian. Too bad she didn't do the decent thing and give him to a family that would love and appreciate him.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 5:27 pm Title: January 13 (Part Two)

What a nightmare to have both Jennifer and Debbie at home; what an invasion!

On the other hand, Justin isn't reasonable because he didn't stop when he should have; not that they could have known that.



Author's Response:

Exactly. This is what happens when you overextend yourself and you don't eat in a timely manner. There was a reason Brian made those rules, but Justin is stubborn little brat and well...he has to test his limits. Next time, he'll stick to the program. Hopefully.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 4:57 pm Title: January 13 (Part One)

I loved the scene in the series, when Joanie came to Kinnetik, but this one is delicious: purgatory it is for dear mother! Brian is so right to put her in her place.



Author's Response:

I love that scene as well; I giggle like mad when he prays to God to get hard and it actually happens. Joan is a horrible mother and surely deserves a special place in hell for her inactions.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 2:25 pm Title: January 13 (Part Two)

Sunshine isn't in a happy mood.  What could happen next?  Will Brian confront Deb about her misguided son's malipulations?



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Yeah, this is what happenes when you over extend yourself and don't eat. I think he'll leanr his lesson next time around.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 2:08 pm Title: January 13 (Part One)

Horrors, all the moms in one chapter.  We need to learn what Deb and Jen are up to.



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Just wait and see. :) Poor Justin.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 2:03 pm Title: January 13 (Part Two)

Hey he's getting rid of them for you and I'm sure he's going to give you some living before your nap.  ;). Be nice Justin. lol



Author's Response:

Justin is a wee bit cranky right now; not only did he not take his required break, but he hasn't eaten and now he has his mothers smothering him - this leads to a Justin in desperate need of a nap as Brian called it.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 2:02 pm Title: January 13 (Part Two)

He should feel thankful that they care, even if a bit too much.

 



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He does appreciate it to a degree, but you have to remember that Justin has always been one to take care of himself. He hated being infantilized when he was a teenager; I can't see him sitting back and letting them take over his life as an adult.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 1:57 pm Title: January 13 (Part One)

Joan...someone who never should have been a mother.  She is filled with so much hate.  I'm glad Brian stands up to her.

Michael is in for it soon.  How did he think that would help his friendship with Brian by telling Joan about the baby?



Author's Response:

I am of the firm beleif that Micahel never really thinks things through and then has no clue why people are pissed at him. It's kind of a clueless asshole. What makes it worse is he often honestly beleives he'e helping when he really is just making everythng worse.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 1:21 pm Title: January 13 (Part One)

Good old Michael. He knew the she wolf would go directly to him. Brian certainly put her in her place, can't blame him for that, but one day...

Jen and Deb, oh boy, and the baby isn't even born yet. They shouldl honestly think about moving away until the baby is 18. Ha!



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Yeah, Mikey is a real piece of work; and Justin would likely consider moving away, but realizes the futility of it as Deb would just track them down and drag them back

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 11:25 am Title: January 13 (Part Two)

Rage saves the day.



Author's Response:

Brian to the rescue as always. :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 5:06 am Title: January 13 (Part One)

Well done Brian.



Author's Response:

I love when Brian stands up to his mother. :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 4:00 am Title: January 12

So now Justin has a stalker...maybe Ethan?



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Maybe ...Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 3:51 am Title: January 11

I guess we found his appetite for Brian is bigger than his one for food.

 



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Sex or Pie? I think we know what wins hands down.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 7:56 am Title: January 12

Now who could the evil bastard that wants to divide our boys be?  Ethan perhaps?



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I suppose we'll have to wait and see.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 7:49 am Title: January 11

Justin has his priorities right.



Author's Response:

Without a doubt? Pie or Brian? There is no contest there. :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 7:36 am Title: January 12

Ah man. Thought this was going to be a fun read.

Can't make up my find if the freak id the Chin Rat or Chris Hobbs. Neither would surprise me.



Author's Response:

It will be a mostly fun read. But a bit of angst is needed sometimes. It can't be all fun and games.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 7:32 am Title: January 11

Control freak Kinney! Geeze baby isn't even born and he's hovering. If hev keeps itvup, Justin will have him banned from the delivery room. Ha!

Leave it to Brian to offer a betterr dessert.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Brian better watch it, or Justin might just kill him. Bit I do have to agree with Justin, Brian makes an infinitely better dessert than the pie.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 7:19 am Title: January 10

Justin's just a ball of sunshine isn't he? Happy one minute threatening the next. Brian can't blame Justin for being all warm and cozy in the morning. Brian's always liked Justin that way.

Poor Blake. I can picture Ted hovering over Luc, jumping up everytime he coos. Driving Blake crazy.

Falling asleep during the meeting was priceless.

Brian will be at the baby shower. I wouldn't be surprised if Em got some help with it. Should be fun.



Author's Response:

Hormones...they mess you up. As for Justin, well, he just knows Brian far too well and knows he'd try to get out of it if he could. And he was FIRMLY letting him know that wasn'thappening.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 7:13 am Title: January 9

The lube was funny yet Brian remembers it fondly. They'll make great fathers. They're both so emotional now once the baby's born they'll flood the city with their tears.

Yet kerp the sex unknown, Deb could use the money. Ha!



Author's Response:

And her boys know it and wouldn't want to ruin her fun. :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 7:00 am Title: January 12

Ethan? Really? What a nightmare is he going to start?

Gus and Jenny are cool kids.



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We'll have to wait and see what happens. But I don't any good will come from this.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 6:47 am Title: January 11

It's true that Brian isn't playing fair, but it's the only way for him to get Justin play by the rules.

For the baby, as in only one (there was only one heartbeat, otherwise they would have found out and would have been unable to remain quiet in the doctor's office), I bet for a girl.



Author's Response:

This is true; Justin does tend to get a bit tetchy otherwise.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 5:42 am Title: January 12

That doesn't sound good.



Author's Response:

No it does not. Why won't people just let them be happy? *sigh*

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2018 2:45 pm Title: January 9

Oh how sneaky considering the readers as part of the "gang" and keeping the gender secret.  Just love it.  Great writing and fun idea.



Author's Response:

Well, this way we can see if people will guess what's happening as the story goes on. :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2018 12:06 pm Title: January 10

Poor Ted.  I think I would rather have a fretting father than one who was absent.  Blake should cut him some slack. lol

I can only imagine what Emmett with come up with for the baby shower.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

I agree, but Blake probab;ly just wanted to sleep and kept getting interrupted. I know when I get overly tired, I get cranky, so I don't blame him for kicking Ted out. And then likely immediately regretting it.

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