Date: Feb 08, 2018 9:46 am Title: February 6
Oh wow! Marvellous! But I was rather hoping for at least one punch or maybe a restraining order. But then again, Michael is unlikely to do as he's told and will feel entitled to contact his 'best friend' again, so maybe a restraining order could still be on the cards? Also looking forward to Deb & Ben and prob Lindsay putting in their 2 cents. No doubt Brian will be putting them straight (excuse the pun) as well. Looking forward to it!
As it is unlikely the little shit is going to confess giving someone the code, I would hope when they capture the stalker that he confesses to this, so that Brian will have another reason to go after poor widdle Mikey.
Loving this!
Deb
Author's Response:
Thanks! I held back on the punch because I geniunely felt that Brian was so far beyond pissed off at the moment, that he would do more than just punch him and that would lead to a whole lot of nasty that the boys do not need. Plus, I'm sure Em spent quite a bit of time trying to bring Brian's temper down to a simmer because he didn't need to be sitting in a jail cell when Justin needed him.
Date: Feb 08, 2018 7:02 am Title: February 6
Bravo bravo bravo! Long time coming, long time deserved.
And Em, you got to love him more.
Author's Response:
Em is the best! And I'm glad you liked it; I was a little worried people would be disappointed that Brian didn't hit him. But at this point, it just didn't fit. First he is so beyond pissd off that he was genuinely worried he couldn't stop. And outside the one time he punched Michael, he's not a physically violent person. He prefers to cut someone down with his words.
Date: Feb 07, 2018 7:44 pm Title: February 4 (Part Two)
Emmett is amazing: he is able to calm Brian and to deal with Justin who is in a total drama queen moment. He also thinks about the potential reasons Michael is aware of what happened.
Author's Response:
I love Emmett; I can never get enough of him. He is definitely my favorite character on the show after the boys.
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2018 2:31 pm Title: February 4 (Part Two)
Where did you get that Aunt Lulu saying? I want to keep it!
Deb should be shown the video before Brian hands Michael his ass. I think we know who didi it, but did Michael help him?
Author's Response:
I actually found it through some research. I was looking for Southern sayings for something else and stumbled onto those and knew I had to use them at some point for Emmett.
Date: Feb 07, 2018 11:30 am Title: February 4 (Part Two)
I'm glad Justin and Sunbeam seem to be okay. But Brian is right, he needs to stay at the hospital to make sure his blood pressure goes back down.
I can't wait for Michael and Brian to "chat." He really better move to another country. I wonder who is feeding him the information...
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Author's Response:
I wouldn't do that to you guys.This is for the most part, supposed to be a fun journey for the boys. :) But yes, Justin needs to stop being stubborn and make sure that everything will be okay before leaving. And Mikey....oh there is a problem that needs to be handled.
Date: Feb 07, 2018 9:50 am Title: February 4 (Part Two)
Now that's what friendship looks like.
Author's Response:
Em is a good friend. :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2018 5:58 am Title: February 4 (Part Two)
Michael's getting closer to getting his ass whipped. I want to know how Carl fits in this too!
Author's Response:
Mikey's time is up...
Date: Feb 07, 2018 4:09 am Title: February 4 (Part One)
My poor boys......this story is sooooo good. The highs and lows are so amazing and well paced and I love it. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
Michael has cashed a check his ass can't cover. Brian is going to destroy him.
Michael coming out of hiding to attack Justin makes me wonder how he got his information. Is he working with the stalker or did he trash the loft to make it look like Justin is the reason Brian could be in danger.
Hope Brian chokes him out then put a restraining order on him and Ben since he hid Michael away from facing Brian the first time he verbally attacked Justin.
Ben should be included cause he is nothing but an enabler for Michael.
Please update soon.....you got me on the edge of my seat after that heartrending cliffhanger.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Michael is indeed in hot water, and Brian is really not going to put up with this anymore. As for how he got the information, well that's a mystery Brian is definitely going to look into. The guilty parties will definitely get their asses handed to them.
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2018 11:13 pm Title: January 28
LMAO The Twinkies, I love this ongoing joke between them.
Author's Response:
Justin and his Twinkies...will Brian ever win?
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2018 11:10 pm Title: January 27
Possessive Brian is so hot :D
Author's Response:
Yes he is. :)
Date: Feb 06, 2018 6:37 pm Title: February 4 (Part One)
I'm wondering who told Michael. Brian or Carl? Either ways it was plain irresponsible to let such information out and I'm surprised it happened.
If it's Carl, I hope Brian will remind him about privacy and keeping information safe about a case. He shouldn't have said anything to the family, especially Debbie.
If it's Brian, I hope Carl will do the same.
Author's Response:
That is the question. It defnitely wasn't Brian. What exactly happened with Carl however is a mystery. But my guess is, a cop like him, even being retired; is not going to have loose lips. So how does Mikey know?
Date: Feb 06, 2018 4:35 pm Title: February 4 (Part One)
I hate Michael, always have always will! I am loving this story. Sunbeam better be alright or I will never forgive you. Do what you want to Michael !
Author's Response:
No Sunbeams were harmed in the making of this story; Michaels on the other hand...
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2018 2:59 pm Title: February 4 (Part One)
How dare Michael be so evil. Please give Michael what he deserves and let Justin and the baby be okay.
Author's Response:
Mikey's beat down is definitely near.
Date: Feb 06, 2018 12:04 pm Title: February 4 (Part One)
Argh I want the next chapter really soon please please please! Omg Brian is going to invisarate Michael when he finds out
Author's Response:
Michael has just nailed the last nail in his coffin with this one me thinks.
Date: Feb 06, 2018 11:08 am Title: February 4 (Part One)
Oh Justin. Oh Michael. Oh shit.
Author's Response:
Yup, the shit has just hit the fan. Mikey better run while he can.
Date: Feb 06, 2018 11:02 am Title: February 4 (Part One)
Oh boy. I know you won't let anything happen to baby, but could Mikey get the baet down of his life from everyone?
Author's Response:
Mikey is definitely going to get what's coming to him.
Date: Feb 06, 2018 10:44 am Title: February 4 (Part One)
I can't wait till Brian confronts Mikey! I hope he is brutal and makes him tell who he gave the loft alarm code to (although we know who it is!).
We don't have superbowl probs like you guys, altough I love to go shopping on FA cup final day, as the shops and roads are dead.
Please don't wait too long for the Mikey smackdown, as the suspense is killing me!
Deb
Author's Response:
That confrontation is definitely coming up here soon; as for the code, as Justin says, 'it's a mystery.' Shopping the day of iI've never tried; although, I can't imagine it to be too bad. But the days leading up to the Superbowl are a headache.
Date: Feb 06, 2018 10:11 am Title: February 4 (Part One)
Me neither. Michael better leave town and never return. Brian is going to kill him.
I do hope Justin and Sunbeam will be okay.
Patiently waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I don't think leaving town would be enough. The country might be, but better he just leave the entire continent.
Date: Feb 05, 2018 11:32 pm Title: February 2 (Part Two)
And the plot thickens.....
I just wanted to commend you on the emotion in this chapter. I felt my stomach clenching as the sentences progressed. I know Brian feels helpless that he cannot protect Justin and Sunbeam.
I can't wait for his confrontation with Michael.
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Author's Response:
I will adnit that I was tense all the way through writing this part. And then when Brian was trying to console Justin, damn it, I teared a bit. They so broke my heart in this one.
Date: Feb 05, 2018 7:54 pm Title: February 2 (Part Two)
OMG. How could you let this happen to them? I am heart broken.
Author's Response:
I promise to make it up to them soon?
Date: Feb 05, 2018 7:04 pm Title: January 1
I so wasn't expecting this! Just devastating after their amazing time away. I can feel the need for revenge so strong - I hope Brian shows no mercy when this is figured out! Can't wait to see where you take this :-)
Author's Response:
Brian will end this asshole if it's the last thing he does.
Date: Feb 05, 2018 6:42 pm Title: February 2 (Part Two)
Oh wow it is scary to think someone hates Brian so much to damage anything of Justin’s that has Brian in it. Oh boy Justin is going to go ape shit when he realises it’s a personal attack and not random!
Author's Response:
Yeah, this is not going to end pretty at all for those reasons and more.
Date: Feb 05, 2018 5:48 pm Title: February 2 (Part Two)
Whoa! From stalking from afar, it went to destroying the loft: that's a major step in the creepy!
I hope Michael is not involved in this and that it's not his fault that the code of the loft has been used.
When Justin will realize what was the actual goal of the intruder, it will hurt him so much.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's a definite excalation in the stalker's movements. But when the fantasy shatters for whatever reason, it makes for a very dangerous person. The code thing is still a mystery at the moment. And poor Justin, to find that out...it's not going to be pretty...
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2018 2:41 pm Title: February 2 (Part Two)
Wow. You put a lot into this chapter. How did Deb get the code and who is the mystery man following Justin? I have my suspitions but you never know.
Author's Response:
That is indeed a good question; one that Brian is determined to get an answer on.
Date: Feb 05, 2018 2:17 pm Title: February 2 (Part Two)
Stalker can't be Michael because Justin and the stalker made eye contact. Justin would have recognized him.
Do they own the building where no one else lives there? If not, had no one heard anything?
Maybe stalker doesn't know about Britin...yet.
Author's Response:
It is definitely possible the stalker doesn't know of it... And yes, they do. Thanks!