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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 1:34 pm Title: March 11

Loved this chapter.  It made me smile thinking of Brian Kinney, The Stud of Liberty Avenue sitting and thinking of baby names.  Cute idea for a chapter.  Great job.



Author's Response:

It is a funny thought. Can you imagine how the Brian of them would react to the Brian of now...hmmm...that could be a fun little side story if there was a way to explain time travel... Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 12:19 pm Title: March 11

Only those two can go from peaceful and quiet to planning devious paybacks. Hysterical.



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They really do keep things interesting. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 10:33 am Title: March 11

Haha!  Oh, the retaliation.  Brian better be careful.

Thanks for the laugh this morning.



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Brian may be in the lead for now, but I'm sure Justin will get even with him somehow... Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 6:25 am Title: March 10

Too bad he couldn't catch Blaine but he did go home to Justin early Thanks Ted

Author's Response:

Yes, there is that. Hopefully they'll find out more with this guy soon. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 12:54 am Title: March 10

That was a close one.  I do hope he does call the detective. 

And he needs to tell Justin everything.  Keeping things from him never works.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

I have no doubts that Brian will share this information with the detective and intends to tell Justin. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2018 4:11 pm Title: March 10

Just added enough suspense with Blaine to keep the readers waiting.  Good job.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Hopefully the boys will catch up to him soon, so they can learn what his motivations are, if there are any. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2018 2:42 pm Title: March 10

To come so close only to lose.  At least Ted and Emmett know and are making sure that Justin is okay.



Author's Response:

Yes, that has to be very frstrating for poor Brian. Hopefully something will come of it soon. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2018 2:39 pm Title: March 10

I hope Brian will contact the detective and tell him when and where he saw the hustler, so they can check the security tapes.

The massage seems comforting and hot at the same time.



Author's Response:

I'm certain that Brian will be doing that; he wants this guy off the streets badly. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2018 1:31 pm Title: March 10

He wss so close. Damn!

Ted is my hero. No longer cowering from Brian, but standing toe to toe proving once again Brian sees what's between the pages is more important the what's in the cover.

Brian better tell Justin about the hustler, all of it, before Em relates what happened that afternoon.



Author's Response:

That had to be so frustrating for Brian; he really just needs this guy to be caught and soon. And hopefully Brian will fill Justin in, or he could be in for a lot of trouble. And I live a strong, independent Ted. As amusing as I find a cowering Ted, I have a hard time believing that Brian would continue to employ a yes-man. After all, look at Cynthia. And he was always impatient with the design twins at Ryder, whatever their names were...Brad and Bob? Something like that. I can't see him keeping Ted for long if he didn't have a bit of backbone in him. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 8:50 pm Title: March 9

Sorry about RL don't worry about us , we can wait. You take care I do love this story and I WANT to know the SEX of Sunbeam. Just kidding I'll wait for that also Bye for now

Author's Response:

Thanks. :) RL is making writing difficult at the moment as I can't seem to keep my typical block of writing time open and encumbrance free. Hopefully this will clear up soon and I'll be ale to go back to my regular posting schedule. It seems to be holding off enough that I don't have to completely disappear yet. So, fingers crossed! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 4:06 pm Title: March 9

Oh, I loved this scene.  I'm glad Jenny has such a great realtionship with her Papa J. 

Brian is so damn romantic.  I love their song!!!



Author's Response:

Jenny was a fun challenge to write. It's difficult to get into the mentality of a nin-year-old girl. And Brian was just so sweet in this. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 3:55 pm Title: March 8

Hot!  Hot!  Hot!

 



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those boys; they just can't keep their hands off each other. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 3:55 pm Title: March 9

Love this close up and personal look into Jenny.  It's nice to know that she prefers Justin to her dad cause I do too.



Author's Response:

I can't even begin to imagine a selfish man like Michael doing a good job as a parent; he makes everything about him, and I just don't see that working well when, as a parent, you're expected to put all your childs needs first. Plus I've always loved Papa Justin in any guise. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 3:46 pm Title: March 9

Terrific chapter.  Love the interaction between Justin & JR.  Heaven knows she doesn't get that kind of love and encouragement from Michael & Lindsay.  And, could so easily picture Brian & Justin dancing and singing together.  Signs of a great writer.  Hope that RL treats you ok.  Will wait patiently for updates and your return.  We all have things in life that must come first.



Author's Response:

Both Lindsay and Michael strike me as far too selfish to be effective parents; especially this incarnation of them. They are both far to wrapped up in their needs, wants and desires to ever put their children first. And the boys were sweet in this vignette. And thanks! So far, while real life is making finding the time to just sit down and write difficult, so far, it hasn't necessitated my complete disappearance. Hopefully this will remain the case until things smooth out again. Thanks for your support and for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 3:41 pm Title: March 8

Justin always gets what he wants.  I can't wait for him to see Brian's surprise.



Author's Response:

He does typically; but I think Brian will hold out on the surprise until the unveiling. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 12:30 pm Title: March 9

Poor Jenny to have a mother like Lindsay whom is never satisfied unless it's to her liking and a father like Michael whom is only satisfied when it's about him.

She'll find her true love when the time comes.

Brian amd Justin dancing and singing in the kitchen without a care as to who sees them. Now that's love and romance.

Nice job too with Justin explaining different forms of artistry for Jenny in a was she'd understand.



Author's Response:

She does seem to have it rough with those two; luckily she has her Eema and Papa J and Uncle Brian to pick up the slack. And I'm sure with good examples of love to see - Brian and Justin, Emmett and Drew, Ted and Blake - that she'll know what to look for when that time comes. Brian and Justin made me grin; and truthfully was based on a real life experience with a friend, whose very not-romantic boyfriend surprised her by doing something similar. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 12:05 pm Title: March 8

Brian doing a crossword puzzle shouldn't be surprising. What's surprising is that Justin didn't join him in doing it. Alrhough, he did have other things on his mind. First the project, Brian does know him well. Then getting them to the point of no clothing.. Imean really, who could concentrate with a naked Brian around? Ha!



Author's Response:

It isn't surprising for me personally; I can see him doing them easily. But, I also know that it wouldn't fit the image of Brian Fucking Kinney back then, and he would have hidden it. lol And yes, Brian is so on to his Sunshine. And when he can't out argue or out scheme him, all he has to do is get naked and that distracts Justn pretty damn well. LOL! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 9:17 am Title: March 9

Great chapter with Jenny's POV on her favorite couple; it's very revealing!



Author's Response:

Jenny was fun to write, and a little heartbreaking too with the things she revealed about group dynamics and how dissatisfying her relatiosnships are with Micahel and Lindsay. At least she has Brian and Justin to pick up the slack. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 8:44 am Title: March 8

Justin is so sneaky! Too bad: Brian knows him too well for his own good.



Author's Response:

He so tries; but Brian has had years to perfect his Justin distraction technigues. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2018 5:00 pm Title: March 7

Finally a clue and a big one! The police should be able to find something.



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it certainly is a big break in the case; hopefully, they can track this guy down. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2018 2:27 pm Title: March 7

Justin isn't going to be happy when Brian tells him of Tak's visit, he has to tell him. Justin is going to blame himself for the pain Brian was going through at the time.

Hopefully the information Brian gave will lead somewhere good and maybe the motel footage.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Justin is likely to feel a bit creeped out by it all. I know I would be. But this is a break in the case, and a good one so long as they can track the guy down. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2018 1:39 pm Title: March 7

No problem.  Untill you mentioned it, it never entered my mind about the dates.  The storyline is what is keeping our attention.  Good chapter.  It shows that our past can always come back to bite us.  In Brian's case in this chapter, it is a good thing hopefully.  Can't wait to see where you go next with this.



Author's Response:

it is a lucky break for them; but it all depends on tracking this guy down. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2018 1:00 pm Title: March 7

I never really paid a lot of attention to dates.  Especially when I enjoy a story, like I am this one.  I'm going to have to rewatch those episodes since I don't remember anyone with a wolf jacket.



Author's Response:

There isn't anyone like that in the series that I recall; and if there is, it's a coincidence. The wolf jacket does have meaning to the stalker, but they didn't wear one in the show. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2018 11:30 am Title: March 7

Did not see that coming!  I guess that hustler became obsessed with Justin since he was "playing" him apparently frequently.

I do hope they can find him before he does anything to Justin and the baby...or Brian.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

I think you misunderstood what I said; although, that woulkd be a great story line - the hustler trying to take over Justin's place. But, in this case, the former hustler was actually the one who sent in the tip. He had been approached by the stalker because of his similarites to Justin and so he might have information as too who the stalker is. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2018 1:08 am Title: March 6

Brian and Justin are adorable...I assume Mikey is in the painting Ugh !

Author's Response:

Well, even if we all hate him and what he's doing, he is Deb's son, so yes, Justin put him in. Thanks for reading! :)

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